Let's Test That Theory / Queen Void vs. Fearn

Let's Test That Theory — Queen Void vs. Fearn

by Rose

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by Fearn

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Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 15   Posted: Aug 28 2015, 11:01 AM
THANKS FOR ANOTHER AMAZING COMIC MATCH, FERN!
And thanks for all the feedback, guys! Sorry about the quality on this one; I had quite a few things come up or happen during the drawing period and ended up doing a lot of it during the last week O_O I plan on finishing it and posting it later as a BB (if I ever get time between other matches!).

Fern, you know what you need to do.

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 14   Posted: Aug 27 2015, 01:59 PM
BOBO- Oooh Ancelin comics. Its been so long!
This was a fun little romp in your your fighters high fashion world. Kinda neat we get to see Fern herself tagging along on some void adventures. There were cameos galore which I think everyone knows instantly makes your battle appeal to this community (we're whores for those 15 mins of fame!) and was funny besides! I got a great laugh over morose Gray saying 'I used to have fun'. Definitely a great addition and way to showcase Gwen and Audrey. The fashion outfits you trussed everyone up in were a real treat to oogle. Not everyday you see a man with an eye for fashion! I will say, quality wise, it seems time got to you as the pages steadily drop based off your stellar fist page. Its a real shame considering you could've had some outstanding crowd scenes. (especially on page three), but C'est la vie, right?
The scar given is ridiculous. Freakin' beast rolling into a fashion show to maul the artist themselves just is crazy over the top, but the ridiculousness of it is something that I like despite it all. I think Angue coming in to save the day and take his pound of flesh is the cherry on top of this crazy sundae. Despite the quality flubs, its obvious you had fun doing this and it felt like a light refreshing short little tale. An amuse bouche of comics if you will. I can dig it!


FERN- After coming off your incredibly stellar catfight battle, this feels a bit jarring. I expected your signature intricate style and detail, so this new loosey goosey look is new. Maybe a little too loosey goosey. Some of your inkwork borders on the scratchy which is a bit surprising. It took me a double read through to really grasp what was going on, who was who (and who is this cat girl again??) considering the images seem to dip even further the farther you read on. I skimmed through the comments you guys got and feel I'm not the only one a bit lost as to what the scars here were.

Omigosh, now that my hairs growing out, I feel like this goth cat girl  looks like me tho. Plz, no disembowelment in my future! XD

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 13   Posted: Aug 21 2015, 04:02 PM
bobo.... gosh... um... thanks for the cameo... lol boy though thats not a very flattering depiction of Gray though, is it? ^^; why do we see her butt so much?? but mostly, where did that wolf monster come from? if he was gonna be the one to give Fern a scar, why have Gray show up at all? you switched villains midway through and it was sort of confusing. but the costumes are very neat!
Fern that was a pretty straightforward story and somehow it still took me 2 times through reading it to understand it. firstly except for Ancelin I have no idea who those characters are... they have no names.... is one of them you? the art seems a bit rushed and your handwriting was sometimes difficult to read which made this tougher to understand clearly... interesting scar idea though, if confusingly executed ^^;

PyrasTerran
Artist
1512 comments
# 12   Posted: Aug 21 2015, 03:00 PM
Hmmm


Bobo: Cute comic all in all, here's some other thoughts: It's hard to critique on visuals since it's visually incomplete; I think it all would have looked good if you finished, but there's alot of inconsistency with proportions of the same characters throughout the pages. You had some line width variation at first but it all went out the window by the last page, I'm guessing also because you couldn't complete it all in time. Page 4 last panel stands out as needing work; Gwen's arm is super long and at first it looked like a giant cardboard cutout on the second-to-last panel, instead of its own panel, because of the way you shaped it. I think the beast at the end was a lil too random and I dont understand what Blackader is even trying to say actually lol what does he mean by not letting the beast go to waste, is he talking about the hunt? And what code of ethics is he upholding that he wants them to understand? Just left me confused, then it all sort of ended, and I'm thinking "wait, what was the scar??" I had to look back at the pages a few times before I finally found it. I thought it was a part of her wardrobe or something at first.

Fern: I'm afraid I'm not really a fan of this comic :( It looks extremely rushed for 4 weeks, like Bobos, the art just kinda falls apart by the end. I had a hard time figuring out who I was supposed to be paying attention to and it kinda drags; the final pages, which have the most creeps, are the most rushed so it doesn't even deliver on creep factor.  


Sorry guys I'm not feeling these comics but I know y'all are still great so still keen on your next battles!

Fearn
Artist
366 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 21 2015, 08:32 AM
Dino Nebitt: Ancelin got... possessed?
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bingo

I think I am having IRL emotional scarring from the way Bobo drew me

Hiemie
Artist
511 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 21 2015, 07:02 AM
I can't wait to see your real life scars.

Heathen
Artist
462 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 21 2015, 02:37 AM
So I'm a little unsure of what the scars are here; Fern's arm got mauled, and Ancelin got... possessed?

Fearn
Artist
366 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 21 2015, 12:05 AM
BOBO I'm not that fat!!!

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 20 2015, 11:40 PM
*cough*

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 24 2015, 12:07 AM
bobo give her a tattoo and then fern has to get an irl tattoo if she loses do it do it

Cracking Skulls
Artist
354 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 23 2015, 03:29 PM
Whoever loses has to spend thousands on irl surgery to replicate the scar this is the rule I impose on all artist scar matches from here on out you cant stop me

Majikura
Artist
469 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 23 2015, 02:37 PM
..how do you scar an artist?

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 23 2015, 12:29 PM
wait who is fighting who here XD XD

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 23 2015, 10:31 AM
In case anyone was wondering about the title...
09:04:49   <artofbobo>   well, from my personal experience, artist battles seem to be infinitely more fun anyway
09:05:33   <fernmoon>   how many did you do?
09:05:38   <fernmoon>   except the ones that already had me in it
09:06:53   <artofbobo>   fernmoon: I think that might be the only one... that counts
09:07:14   <artofbobo>   fernmoon: Short and Sweet was technically an artist match, but we don't speak of that atrocity
09:07:29   <fernmoon>   i was in it too
09:07:33   <fernmoon>   see
09:07:34   <fernmoon>   Bobo
09:07:44   <fernmoon>   are you sure it's the artist battles that are more fun
09:07:51   <fernmoon>   or are they Fern battles?
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Fearn
Artist
366 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 23 2015, 10:19 AM
I really don't have time for this but it's the weirdest thing I have ever seen so

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Scar Match
Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Aug 27th, 2015
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