Geez, Gray WAS mean! these are some highly stronk comics. but Gray being an asshole is very much compelling vs. her acting nice. Was she going to make friends with Beo just to turn on him in Lucky's comic? Old stories, but worth it.

Why did Gray have to leave the feather behind!! Noooo however I am excited to see a new arc coming out of this. I KNOW you can go places with this. Love the feel of page 9's last panel. And the gate creaking open on the last page had a wonderful feel. Tighten up that linework and I'll have a lot more things to say. It still feels loose.

Nothin- Everything is so cutesy but what I really love is a good story. Te concept is short and sweet but I'd love to see more Beo, not just what he's listening to. I feel like we already know enough about Gray, let's hve more Beo love shall we?

OH MY GOSH SHEN WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY HEART
I loved your comic, and you really left me hanging in the worst/best way possible. The comic feels too complete for that to have been an accident, otherwise I might have thought you just ran out of time. But it feels complete enough that I just have to scream GOD DAMMIT SHEN GIVE ME MORE!

Nothin, you left me hanging, too, but I'm not sure it was intentional. Your comic was so cute, and I definitely want to see what happens next, so I really wish there were maybe just one more page of your comic. I love the way you used really simple colors in your comic in such a nice way. Definitely one of the better comics I've seen from you for a while, so keep it up! I always love your stuff and I love Beo, even if you don't for some weird reason

Shen- LOVED IT! That hand holding the feather on the top page 1 is my jam!! Your drew his ghost bunny pal so cute. I like Gray being like this honestly. If I had to seriously nitpick it'd be I hate those side mouths bottom of page 7 BUT THAT IS SUPER IF-I-HAD-TO-PICK-ONE-THING (Gray's face middle of 7 is so great too omg)

Nothin- Oh your color palette is so nice but I agree with it needed more contrast though you have a good start. Either I don't know who that grave digger is or??? I'm not sure who he is or why he knows Gray so well that he is surprised to see her smiling. Your Gray is really cute and fluid (it was nice to see  a sweet comic bout her haha).

Shen: I don't really know the character of Gray, but it was a neat comic. I'm not a fan of white text on black word bubbles, but it wasn't terrible. speaking of word bubbles, watch out for tangents! Several bubbles are super close to touching lines, like panel borders, and others ARE touching them. It creates unwanted tension that causes eyes to focus on the space between the two objects. Be careful of that. Otherwise, pretty rad comic

Kich: Seems like a rushed comic, but even so, it's not bad. One of the fonts you used feels like the kerning is off, and it gets squished and hard to read. others looked fine, so I dunno, maybe some were resized weird? I'm all for simple one color palettes, and this was fine, but I think the execution is rough. The tones aren't different enough, so it doesn't have enough contrast, I feel. Good job, though

I've heard so many whisperings and musings about Gray that I just don't know exactly what she is. Why isnt a gouge to the gut bringing her boyfriends to come and collect her? Is she really a ghost? Is she dead? A spirit now? A demon? Either way, the not knowing really makes her intriguing. I am digging all your heavy blacks, though I'm undecided if you needed the greyscale. Your inks for the shadows seem to do a good job on their own, but I can see why you'd wanna break up the monotony of just black and white. After a while it can bleed all together.

I like how Gray has really come into her own on what being a villian really mans. She tried to go the contemporary route with little success and lots of personal grief, but it seems by latching on parasite style to an amoral fighter, she may of just found her outlet to spread some misery round void. Iiiiinterestrinmg tun of events! I really hope your next battle fills us in on what happened next from here.

C-can I be uncool and second this opinion too.
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WOW these took very different turns XD Funny how you both ended up with Gray all lovey-dovey on a tomb despite working separately, she really needs to get an apartment or something!

Damn, Nothing, you have really nice, fluid poses and I'm super jealous. The whole thing looks really nice and natural, and I'm totally in love with that one shot of Gray in the last panel on the fourth page, you make her look so sweet!

Shen, it was cool getting to see you work in grayscale, but GOD DAMMIT WOMAN WOULD YOU STOP TRYING TO KILL HER OFF ALREADY JESUS CHRIST

I know my limitations and I know I cant work on this for the next three days so if I want to turn in an actually complete comic im gonna have to go ahead and extend this, sorry. I honestly only need like 2 more days so this should be in early.

so excite!! Can't wait

YAY~ This is gonna be AWESOME!

I'm so stoked for this battle! I dope I don't disappoint!