Seaaannnnnn this is so promising! like I want to read more of your comics cos they are such joy to read. I love all the detail.
qyz like OMG
Speed Resurrection Tournament 2015: Round 1 / Margot Seraphina vs. Ashley Longhorn
Critiques & Comments
# 14
Posted:
Jun 13 2015, 06:04 AM
# 13
Posted:
Jun 12 2015, 08:15 PM
ASTRO SEAN- I can't even hate on ya man. I know you were puking up all your insides, so the fact you submitted three full color inked pages in the midst of your vomitous distress is something I doff my hat too. This looked like the build up to something cool, so I certainly hope you continue it in your own time. Sorry things didn't go the way you wanted them too, but seriously, grats on diving into this tournament head first!
QYZEX- What can I say? You had me at dick swords.
Really dug your pages. Your colors weren't soft, but they weren't in your face intense either. Definitely had a good balance. Hipster Princess isn't my character ,but if her namesake is any indication, I think you nailed her by way of snarky dialogue. I especially liked the sass in the beginning about a gay bff. The quiz show was actually fun, and the host was more than just a prop. You did a good job ob making him likable and pretty amusing. Also sketchers sneakers, wtf
Ad she never even got to wear them. :<
QYZEX- What can I say? You had me at dick swords.
Really dug your pages. Your colors weren't soft, but they weren't in your face intense either. Definitely had a good balance. Hipster Princess isn't my character ,but if her namesake is any indication, I think you nailed her by way of snarky dialogue. I especially liked the sass in the beginning about a gay bff. The quiz show was actually fun, and the host was more than just a prop. You did a good job ob making him likable and pretty amusing. Also sketchers sneakers, wtf
Ad she never even got to wear them. :<
# 12
Posted:
Jun 11 2015, 07:54 AM
Astro Sean: Love your work. You had some bright fun colors and an amusing story. The only thing that was going to hurt you here I think was your lack of backgrounds. They're definitely lacking. Your handwriting is really nice, but you should take care with the bubbles you place them in to make sure they're also feeling good.
It's a real shame you got sick, because these pages were looking really fresh. I hope you could finish it when you feel better, because it'd be good to see.
Qyzex: Nice job! I really liked this. Humor was really on point and your story set up is very interesting and fun. You've got great colors as usual here and I think your line work feels very good. I could continue to heap praise upon you, but I'll get right to my main criticism.
I think your backgrounds were acceptable, but a bit boring. I would have tossed in some more colors there. Not fully color it mind you, but like how Margot has red on her, that could have been utilized around. Even if the score counters were red and green in this same purple hue, it would give it a real kick up and have some diversity from the same general purple, I feel. Overall, this comic was great and definitely a favorite this round, great job.
It's a real shame you got sick, because these pages were looking really fresh. I hope you could finish it when you feel better, because it'd be good to see.
Qyzex: Nice job! I really liked this. Humor was really on point and your story set up is very interesting and fun. You've got great colors as usual here and I think your line work feels very good. I could continue to heap praise upon you, but I'll get right to my main criticism.
I think your backgrounds were acceptable, but a bit boring. I would have tossed in some more colors there. Not fully color it mind you, but like how Margot has red on her, that could have been utilized around. Even if the score counters were red and green in this same purple hue, it would give it a real kick up and have some diversity from the same general purple, I feel. Overall, this comic was great and definitely a favorite this round, great job.
# 11
Posted:
Jun 10 2015, 02:05 PM
Sean: I get a kick out of margot and I like how you colour, I wish you'd had time to do more, i liked how this was shaping up!
Qyx: oh my gosh i adore Ashley XD a full colour ten page comic in one week, man, how did you even do it? It looks great! I love your colours and expressions, and this is a fun theme! I especially love the panes where the questions are scrolling past, i keep trying to read them but I only manage a couple lol. Great comic! Looking forward to more!
Qyx: oh my gosh i adore Ashley XD a full colour ten page comic in one week, man, how did you even do it? It looks great! I love your colours and expressions, and this is a fun theme! I especially love the panes where the questions are scrolling past, i keep trying to read them but I only manage a couple lol. Great comic! Looking forward to more!
# 10
Posted:
Jun 10 2015, 05:19 AM
HEHEHEHE... Sword Fighting
# 9
Posted:
Jun 10 2015, 01:53 AM
Astro Sean: Despite you were being unable to finish ,it was allright ,not much so to say from my end .
Qyzex:that was awesome,...from the final overal look,to the dialog to the pacing,i actuallu found it really entertaining !(loved the little gif animated panels haha )
nice battle !
Qyzex:that was awesome,...from the final overal look,to the dialog to the pacing,i actuallu found it really entertaining !(loved the little gif animated panels haha )
nice battle !
# 8
Posted:
Jun 9 2015, 11:17 AM
Awww, too bad you couldn't finish. I wanted to read more. Thanks for the battle
# 7
Posted:
Jun 8 2015, 07:11 AM
It isn't looking good, I don't think I'm gonna be able to finish this, major bummer.
Edit* Yeah guys I am sorry, there was no way I could finish this, but I uploaded the pages I got completed.
Edit* Yeah guys I am sorry, there was no way I could finish this, but I uploaded the pages I got completed.
# 6
Posted:
Jun 7 2015, 07:44 AM
Barring any last changes in these next couple days, I got my comic finished, and submitted. I managed my time TOO well...
# 5
Posted:
Jun 4 2015, 08:55 AM
18 pages, christ you're a beast Qyzex!
# 4
Posted:
Jun 2 2015, 03:50 PM
6 pages out of 18 done. Hand is a bit cramped, but feelin' good.
# 3
Posted:
Jun 1 2015, 11:15 AM
This battle is gonna be hip
# 2
Posted:
Jun 1 2015, 10:27 AM
Oh boy, here we fucking go!
# 1
Posted:
Jun 1 2015, 10:18 AM
One of the few people I had an idea for going into this! I'm excited!
Speed Resurrection Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Jun 15th, 2015
Votes Cast:
27
Page Views:
1786
Winner:
Qyzex
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