Speed Resurrection Tournament 2015: Round 1 / Doctor Princess vs. Mr. B

Speed Resurrection Tournament 2015: Round 1 — Doctor Princess vs. Mr. B

by Julz

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Kozispoon
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# 9   Posted: Jun 14 2015, 11:13 PM
ROGER_MILD- Aw, AW. I was so psyched with your first page. I really thought your comic was going to have a storybook shadow puppet look to it. That's not to say your next pages were terrible, but a little tightening up couldn't hurt. Your pages look like you took the brush tool without pressure sensitivity and went at it. Not to mention the explosion on page 5 looks like the use of the shape tool with a paint bucket gradient. I'm all for working digitally, but this feels a little too obvious. I like your gags since they take me back to 90's Jhonen Vasquez caliber stuff, but I feel the punchlines didn't quite land. Sorry my feedback isn't more positive, but here's hoping it helps you with your next battle.

JULZ- The events in both these comics were pretty random, but by way of randomness, I think your comic wins out. Not sure if thats a good thing or not. I did, however really enjoy your pages. Nice job on that abandoned  hospital building scene on page 3. Really set the mood of nefarious things to come with the good Doctor. I think my one complaint reading your pages are that some of your panels are pretty tiny. I had to blow up my screen view to get a really good look at them. That's not to say your pages were crowded with panels, but maybe spacing out the events will afford you more page space to give your panels some breathing room.

Roger_mild
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# 8   Posted: Jun 14 2015, 12:43 AM
Thanks for all the feedback everyone. Not only is this the first comic (more than one page) I've done for awhile but the first all digital and colored also. Although it has flaws, I see it as a step in the right direction.  Thanks again and good luck Julz! (I'll try to post on here more than every year or so.)

E.W. Schneider
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# 7   Posted: Jun 10 2015, 10:56 PM
Julienya: Despite your time constraints and issues, you did a good job here I thought. I thought you answered this funny character with some good humor of your own and I really did enjoy the taking of the crown, definitely made me laugh. Your posing was nice on the golf shot on the end in particular I noticed, very good use there. Your story and backgrounds were amusing and the plot was nice for what it was. My criticisms are short, but I think you should have played with your line-widths a bit more and maybe gone over your colors with simple shading.

Roger_mild: Good to see you back. To be honest, before I saw this comic, I was kind of worried it was going to be either meme humor or "wacky squee penguins" humor. I was both pleasantly surprised and happy to proven wrong.

Your art is feeling stronger than Princess Amorphous B (who is totally married to Mr. B in my head canon now) but I really wish you had utilized some simple shading in this to help enhance the look of it. A gradient for shading would have been simple and also really kind of carried it more depth-wise. I like the explosion's outline, but I think the gradient feels real out of place with it. You gotta be kind of careful with how you use it, otherwise it kind of just sticks out like a sore thumb as I think it does there.

Your biggest fault here is your hand-writing being rushed. You should have definitely slowed it down, because it's not bad, just rushed. Overall, I liked this comic and it made me laugh. I thought you did a good job here and it's a treat to see you doing again.

Shen
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# 6   Posted: Jun 10 2015, 11:41 AM
Julz: Dr Princess is my new favorite character lol. I liked this a lot! Your colours are always so fantastic and theres great humor. In fact the drop in quality might not have even been very noticeable if you hadn't put an apology at the end.
roger: like the others have said, your text is difficult to read in a lot of spots but other than that I thought this comic was hilarious, especially the very end! Very funny!

Dechado
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# 5   Posted: Jun 9 2015, 10:15 PM
Julz: Hehe, cute comic. Lots of dark humour. But can't complain considering this is SRT after all.

Roger_Mild: I... I don't even know what I read. This was a wild ride from start to end.
The only thing I do want to point out, is be careful with the "YOUR" and "YOU'RE". Also, I know it was probably a charm of your comic to use your handwriting, but I had a really hard time following what people were saying. I would personally prefer the use of fonts. (Or I need glasses)

Tofubeast
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# 4   Posted: Jun 9 2015, 12:40 PM
julz: shame to see that it's unfinished, but what you had, had some nice color palettes/rendering with color! I'd suggest messing with your text balloons to make it a little bit clearer as to is talking, if it's someone thinking or yelling, etc.

roger_mild: the only comic in SDT to make me laugh out loud. Literally perfect except your text for your balloons.

Qyzex
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# 3   Posted: Jun 9 2015, 12:34 PM
julz: shame about the quality drop. Turned into something fun, and was enjoyable to read

Roger: first off, need to get this out of the way. Fix your god damn text. Shit's hard to read. Once you get past that, fuck, I laughed pretty good at a few parts of this. I really enjoyed it! Just wish the text wasn't shit >:I

Julz
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# 2   Posted: Jun 8 2015, 10:23 AM
Submitted. Had to super sizedown the pages. Let me know if anything looks off  about the size or submission.

Qyzex
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# 1   Posted: Jun 1 2015, 10:23 AM
Good luck! Should be interesting

Comic Details -

 
Type: Speed Resurrection Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Jun 15th, 2015
Votes Cast: 28
Page Views: 607
Winner: Julz

 

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