Mortido vs. Elle

Mortido vs. Elle

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Puzzlething
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# 7   Posted: Feb 1 2014, 08:25 PM
 Goddamnt Jong. Fuckiiiininggnnggnjnanusauadiadhuawuadw.

  Your variety of line is just amazing dude. You switch up your rendering style and tools so much it's glorious, and it's always a conscientious and well thought out pairing of mark making and subject matter. Your use of texture and movement is, as always, just beyond words.

  I think if there's anything I'd like you see you try more of, it's get a little looser with how you handle your gutters and division of panels. Especially when the scene starts getting a little crazy later on, you could have afforded to start encroaching on and hiding your gutters a little more, to make the scene feel more chaotic and fast. Your art and composition is so dynamic and amazing, it's interesting how conservative you are with this stuff.

  You're crazy dude, your art is just bonkers.

Mister Kent
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# 6   Posted: Jan 30 2014, 11:03 AM
Jong ~ As always, love the style. Very inspired last panel of page 1, wth the detailed Elle and the increasingly less detailed minions. I enjoy the way you play with shapes and shadows. Can't wait for the next comic!

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 24 2014, 05:09 PM
Hunngghh what a good "encounter" this turned out. Theres setup, theres world building , and build up all in the first pages. Elle is even a badass. Man. But the encounter is cut short, normally when a big baddy/scp/phantomninja shows up and leaves theres the obvious question of " what was that". These things can be answered by both sides or left unanswered as an answer but where it ends there seems to be no question.

Your art is always on top and your inking style is getting crazy intuitive. Even your fast scenes mix in well with your slow frames and your darks just mixes in without me realizing it. But it does seem that this takes considerable time to do [at around 5+ pages per 2 weeks]  Good job nonetheless.

PyrasTerran
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1513 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 24 2014, 04:45 PM
aw poop

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 8 2014, 10:43 PM
Take it all the way! :D I needs my Mortido and Elle fixxx!

Red
Council
703 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 8 2014, 08:44 PM
holy poops yes please

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 5 2014, 01:24 PM
Are you just a wee bit stoked about this? Cuz I am 8D

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