Thresh - A gorgeous beginning! Hope you keep this up with your next comic!!

RedStarship - Lovely lines--very expressive yet detailed characters. I enjoyed your use of solid black, shading, and the splash of bright red. I really like how your drew Edge! Keep up the great work

Thresha          -

                 Awwwwwwwww maaaaaaan. I like the colour pallete though, hope to see something awesome for your MARS fight!


RedStarShip            -

                        OH MY GOOOD ASKKJFAJSKFJAKSF. I regret not commenting this sooner, because I need to gush about how sweet this is! Your balance of black and white is so super nice, man I love those opening scenes in her apartment. It's almost like she lives in a solitary confinement cell or something, so moody. Your art is super strong dude, your figures are rock solid. I really like how you use texture too, I sorta want to see you use more just cause I think it looks hot when you throw some down, but it looks great clean too!

                         The only part of this comic that doesn't looks crazy amazing professional is the exterior shot on page 9. It doesn't really have the same careful attention to structure as the rest of your artwork. It feels rough and two dimensional. Just grab a photo reference and take your time, and I'm sure you'll turn out something just amazing as everything else.

                         I like the red accents, but I'd like it more if you used it throughout the comic to help the composition of each page. Use it not only to show that your character has red hair, but as accent to the black and white.

                         Can't wait to see your next fight dude, this is mindblowing!

GAH! I finally [think] I have my internet back. It keeps on chopping on and off. T-T

Monday: You'll never have that hour back! Muhaha.

Red: X3 I'm glad to be back! Yeah, I made sure to polish this comic up since I DID have the time to work on it. XD It was too fun.

catduchess: Thankies! I love aliens! >3<

Oh yeah, I guess I'll throw in a comment for you as well, Thresher!

Obviously since you've already mentioned that all your pages aren't all there, maybe it's best not to take on two battles at once. >_< That will help you focus on one story at a time. Also use panels as a way to encourage passage of time and pacing. I feel that you could have packed in a little bit more story especially in the second page. Then again, I can't judge too much since there's not a lot there. DX

Also, be careful of your speech bubbles! They're too tight around your words and tails need to be more consistent!

Otherwise, can't wait to see your battle with Monday! Woo!

thresher: DEM CLOUDS. seriously those bad boys are seriously cool and apocalyptic, the environment that you created is really great. if only there were more :-:

redstarship: your inks!!!! limited color!!! ALIEN FACES!!!!! sherry is awesome and i love her/you/everything about this the end

Thresher: *Shakes finger at you* I wanted more! MORE!

RedStarship: Hnnggg~<3 I already fangirled over you coming back, and oh man you did not disappoint me in the least. Your figures and faces are so damn sexy! This looks super professional, and awesome in every way. If I say anymore it's just going to be continued gushing, so I'll just stop now :x

Oh my god back to the first date is crazy. I want my hour back : u

UPLOADED FINALLY!

I had quite a day with my internet totally WIGGING OUT on me! T-T It finally behaved itself and I was able to upload everything in time! I'm excited! Woo!

Not much to show this round, more to come in vs MARS though. My own fault.

Kinda pimping this, but it's, like, AWESOME!

So to show that my extension did not go to waste, here's what I helped work on this weekend (for the 48-hr game jam)! Check it out! (I did the backgrounds, some speech bubbles, some ink work, and clean-up!) It's kind of like a choose your own adventure type of game (comic style!)

http://backtothefirstdate.com/

dang, my plan to ride off your continuity has switched to plan B :T
[good move on your part Thresh~ ]

P.S. Good luck on the game jam ! Just remember to do a lot of these and your chances of getting a game jorb pretty much goes up by 50%

*HEAVY SIGH*

Well, as long as its BANGIN', I guess we'll let it slide this time :p

OMG, SORRY FOR EXTENDING THE DEADLINE, GUYS (courtesy of Thresher).

So this game jam called MolyJam  (making games, not playing them) is happening this weekend and it's VERY important that I go to it so I can network with people in the gaming industry and to have something in my portfolio. I underestimated how important this thing was and didn't manage my time accordingly. God bless I don't have to default though!

In return, you guys will see a BANGIN' comic from me!

FFFFF, I've been stoked about this battle for the past week! Gah! Almost done with my comic, I'm so excited!

*crawls back into her hobbit hole*

OH SWEET JESUS YES

HOOO BOOOY

Let's rock this shit!

Woo hoo! Two years since I did my last (and first) battle. Hope I'm not too rusty. XD Looking forward to the challenge, Thresher!