Jiisuri - (Thanks for the Vespertina cameo) I loved how CP shows up at the end--she's more like a force of nature than a character here, which is cool. The art is a bit scratchy--I'd definitely say I enjoyed the story more than the art. Perhaps next time you can try some bolder outlines, on some of the figures (like CP especially) but also on panel borders. Can't wait to see what you have in store in Round 2!

Juke - Aww! I was hoping to see Kray Kray in action!

Ack doublepost

A piece of paper as a block-out huh? Neat idea, I'll give it a shot.

Jiisuri: Well, since kray kray has been defaulted, I'd say this is an excellent introduction to your character. Simple, makes sense, and a great way to introduce the height comparison. And...you just had to use the word 'Titan' too...

Whatever you're using to hatch the drawings, have a little more patience and work them into straighter and neater hatchmarks. you can see them running through some of the other drawings in the foreground. You can always take a piece of tape or paper to block that small area out while you're hatching as a safety.

Jiisuri: That's how you drop a mic! I want to see more of her backstory.

Juke: Dang

Jiisuri         -

             Man I love all these references to the princesses that didn't make it. I like to think Colossal Princess isn't even a part of the tournament, she's just rolling up and messing up errything! That pose as she's lifting up the sword is really good dude, definitely my favorite thing I've ever seen you draw. Also, great job putting in that work on your city scapes. You've chosen something super difficult that needs to be constantly be featured in your comics, and you're doing an awesome job sticking to your perspective.

                   I think the impact on the sword slam could've be drawn more dramatically, just massive columns of smoke and debris shooting everywhere.

Juke    -

         Dude I hope you'll read this! It sucks the default happened, but don't let that stop you from making comics! 1 week fights are incredibly hard, even for veterans of the site. Go make another character and jump back in, don't let this stop you.

Sadly, that was the only plot I could come up with against Princess Kray Kray here within the time limit I set myself. I should have more material to work with next round so here's to a nice fight next round. o7

Awww, I was really hoping for a little more from you Jiisuri. I have to admit, Colossal Princess popping out of nowhere and slicing Kray Kray made me chuckle, but I just wanted more. (Fun fact: my headcanon for this comic is that Colossal Princess was so enraged by Kray Kray's terrible rapping that she went crazy and smashed her.) You got a nice freebie into round 2, so I hope you step it up next week! I love this character and want to see more!

Oh no! What happened to Princess Kray Kray??

Hey Juke, since you are new and have never uploaded a comic before, I wanted to make sure you saw this post:
http://entervoid.com/index.php?topic=12302.msg223040#new

I just want to make sure you get to upload your pages correctly! Please let us know if you have any problems as soon as possible!!

It hath been done, and it hath been uploaded. Twas a short comic, may the best one survive.

OH MANNNNN i want to see how this turns out!

Bahahaha this is an odd match up. Good luck!!!

I am so freakin' excited for this one, so you have no idea.  You might even say I'm Colossally Kray for it!

Make this as epic as it should be!