Two fun T-Rex battles!
Zest, I enjoyed the lack of dialogue. I wasn't expecting that, but I could still tell what was happening. Also liked the inventive "catalog" power Qr uses. Another great comic.
Umbrella, I really like how you drew your opponent, and of course I admire your ability to draw dinosaurs Keep up the good work!
Prettiest Princess Tournament, Round 1 / QR vs. Dino Princess
Critiques & Comments
# 14
Posted:
Jun 16 2013, 02:30 PM
# 13
Posted:
Jun 13 2013, 05:35 PM
MUTHAF$%&#ING T-REX!!
These both rocked hard for me, I'm afraid I haven't much else to say :X
These both rocked hard for me, I'm afraid I haven't much else to say :X
# 12
Posted:
Jun 12 2013, 12:23 PM
Zest
I actually thought the pixelated lines were intentional too, even though I didn't like it very much. Your art is so amazingly clean I wish I could see this smooth. Sometimes when I'm resizing stuff, certain percentages will cause the lines to get all messed up, so maybe it was that? I'm not really sure.
I like how you're playing around with page layout, it's super interesting. Like you're actually using the shape of a computer screen for 1 page, it's brilliant. Have you thought about doing something in the gutters? Like stuff coming out of panels or stuff behind them? I think it works great as it is, but there is a lot of negative space there.
The silent storytelling is awesome, you did a great job. Everything is clear and easy to read; emotions, pacing, action. You make it seem effortless.
UmbrellaFrog -
Wow Dude! On just your last fight, you were getting roughed up by the deadline, and now look at you! That was a 4 week comic, and this is one week of hell. I knew you'd get used to it but this is ridiculous!
It's an amazing comic, so funny! Those gurren lagaan shades killed me. Your backgrounds are really nice too, I think you have a good balance between dropping the city in the back there and letting the panel rock without it. The only real criticism I have is that I'd like to see you push more solid blacks into stuff other than QR, just to help her fit into the setting a little more and aid with the balance between the blacks and the whites.
I actually thought the pixelated lines were intentional too, even though I didn't like it very much. Your art is so amazingly clean I wish I could see this smooth. Sometimes when I'm resizing stuff, certain percentages will cause the lines to get all messed up, so maybe it was that? I'm not really sure.
I like how you're playing around with page layout, it's super interesting. Like you're actually using the shape of a computer screen for 1 page, it's brilliant. Have you thought about doing something in the gutters? Like stuff coming out of panels or stuff behind them? I think it works great as it is, but there is a lot of negative space there.
The silent storytelling is awesome, you did a great job. Everything is clear and easy to read; emotions, pacing, action. You make it seem effortless.
UmbrellaFrog -
Wow Dude! On just your last fight, you were getting roughed up by the deadline, and now look at you! That was a 4 week comic, and this is one week of hell. I knew you'd get used to it but this is ridiculous!
It's an amazing comic, so funny! Those gurren lagaan shades killed me. Your backgrounds are really nice too, I think you have a good balance between dropping the city in the back there and letting the panel rock without it. The only real criticism I have is that I'd like to see you push more solid blacks into stuff other than QR, just to help her fit into the setting a little more and aid with the balance between the blacks and the whites.
# 11
Posted:
Jun 11 2013, 07:53 PM
You may have used the wrong method to shrink them or had them saved in black and white only or something. That's too bad though.
# 10
Posted:
Jun 11 2013, 06:23 PM
Thanks for the feedback, Bobo!
Aww nooooo I don't know why the pages came out like that, they weren't meant to be pixelated. The original files are something like 8.5 tall and 600 dpi, guess I made them too small? I'm glad you liked it either way, though.
Aww nooooo I don't know why the pages came out like that, they weren't meant to be pixelated. The original files are something like 8.5 tall and 600 dpi, guess I made them too small? I'm glad you liked it either way, though.
# 9
Posted:
Jun 11 2013, 04:35 PM
Fun battle, both of you guys! Zest, mad props for the silent comic; you pulled it off well. I'm not sure I like the pixelated look, though. It's not quite pixel-art-like enough to feel like she's in a digital world, so it just feels like you drew it in MS Paint on accident or something. Your style, though, I just love it. The personality in everything, from the characters to the piles of junk in the background, just really makes it feel professional and polished. Well done, and I look forward to much more art from you in the future
Froggy: You made a million babies' days probably. Your sense of humor is beautiful, from the classic-looking font to the BSOD. I have nothing negative to say about this comic except that there's not more of it for my eyes to make love to with reading. Bravo, and keep it up!
Froggy: You made a million babies' days probably. Your sense of humor is beautiful, from the classic-looking font to the BSOD. I have nothing negative to say about this comic except that there's not more of it for my eyes to make love to with reading. Bravo, and keep it up!
# 8
Posted:
Jun 11 2013, 11:24 AM
this is my favorite so far
# 7
Posted:
Jun 11 2013, 09:30 AM
Damn good comic, man.
# 6
Posted:
Jun 11 2013, 08:40 AM
I am a M.F. T-REX!!!!
# 5
Posted:
Jun 10 2013, 07:05 PM
Battle has been uploaded and the thumbs have been sent off! Can't wait to see my opponent's side.
# 4
Posted:
Jun 3 2013, 07:23 PM
DDD: can't wait!
# 3
Posted:
Jun 3 2013, 12:39 PM
Ahahah! Battle of the century!
# 2
Posted:
Jun 3 2013, 10:58 AM
FUCK YES. Let's DO this.
# 1
Posted:
Jun 3 2013, 10:49 AM
Cyber punks and dinosaurs. It's what I've been waiting for all my life. <3
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Zest: Toast gun is super adorable! The lines seem a bit pixellated..just a hunch, but did you convert this to black+white only/bitmap/greyscale/.gif version while doing this? Anyhow, compared to everything I've seen from you, it does not look like it was intentional. Took me a double take to suck in exactly what happened. Maybe a few sound effects would have helped.
UmbrellaFrog: Sudden ending, but I don't mind. Great line quality too. Regarding the color-I understand what it indicates, but the color choice might be too strong for the white and black, making the rest of the comic feel a bit bland. Still, good concept for that.