Jane's Brain Part 2: Wok of Ages / Jane Blonde
Critiques & Comments
# 9
Posted:
Jun 23 2013, 12:06 AM
ahh, I love yours colours, and I'm so interested where Jane's story is going!
# 8
Posted:
Jun 22 2013, 05:35 PM
woo wooo! Your Jane Blonde stories keep luring me in ahaha
# 7
Posted:
Jun 22 2013, 05:12 PM
I know some of the shading's kinda rough--sorry about that! I think, though, that I've worked out a nice smoother technique to be debuting soon. Supergaiden has some material originally intended for Round Up Week 2, which I never got around to finishing, but also sets up a few things for my upcoming stories!
# 6
Posted:
Jun 22 2013, 01:35 PM
I laughed at the last panel ... then looked closer and CRIED!
# 5
Posted:
Jun 22 2013, 12:24 PM
can't wait for supergaiden!
# 4
Posted:
Jun 22 2013, 12:16 PM
"ORGY...i mean...RIOT"
EDIT: Ironically I just noticed that the page views said "69" OHOHOHO
EDIT: Ironically I just noticed that the page views said "69" OHOHOHO
# 3
Posted:
May 24 2013, 02:48 PM
Haha, OH KENT.
# 2
Posted:
May 24 2013, 02:14 PM
Man, you're last fight hasn't even cooled and you're throwing this one in the pan! OHOHOHOHOHO
# 1
Posted:
May 24 2013, 01:27 PM
FOR REALS THIS TIME! NO FOOLIN'!
Beyond Battle
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Jun 28th, 2013
Votes Cast:
27
Page Views:
1311
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As always, the writing and story pacing is wonderful. I totally laughed at the orgies joke, and I loved the bit about the secret herbs and spices.
I think you could stand to push the expressiveness of your line quality. Sometimes it feels a little too uniform, and it makes your figures and settings feel less dynamic than they are.
Awesome comic, but now I need to wait the next one! You're a terrible person Kent, keeping us all on hook like this.