Thanks, I'll try to work on the backgrounds more from now on.

For those that can't follow the story and are wondering how it all affects the plotline: This is all to clean up the children mess and the past so Awesome can be more fun without him worring about his chidren or being in two places at a time - no more sir Awesome.

Your art is like Puzzlething said getting GREAT, I'm a big fan of that, (I like how you draw noses!) though i'm not completely entirely sure whats happening here.... but I guess I don't clearly remember Mr Awesome's backstory right now and who all his children are. Or his dad... and did he, like... melt and then he was there again? =\ Although I know Cassandra is one of his so that last panel tugged at the heartstrings a little!

      You're getting really good at drawing people dude, that directional hatching and attention to form is niiiice. I just wanna stare at Mr. Awesome's backside all day. I wish you would show that same love and attention to your environments though. Anything that's not a person comes off rushed and sloppy.

I like the art, but I don't really understand the story here. It might be just because I don't remember the comics before it very well, but I'm also confused by who that girl with the braindome is. Also, Mr Awesome's... dad? Breaks into a room where apparently there's only Mr Awesome, and then burns up Cassandra? Where did she come from? What? I'm really confused by what happened in that part. I hope we get to see more of this story move along, though! It's really interesting... at least as much as I can understand.

No thumbs because I'm at work and Wolcik said he doesn't care.

Just to clean my to-do-list. I got stuck with it for a long time because I wanted to add colors to that, but then I decided that those lines can work with black and white and Ill train it while photoshop inking.