Intro Story / Bullet Princess
Critiques & Comments
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# 12
Posted:
Jan 23 2015, 12:57 PM
Im very found of the intro it reminds me of the american revolution.
# 11
Posted:
Apr 25 2013, 05:12 PM
I really love the world-building we get from just two pages. It'd be awesome to learn bits of info about the other princesses as the comics continue. I like the map, and Bullet Princess's overall design. Horses are hard to get right, but yours is lovely Can't wait for PPT!
# 10
Posted:
Apr 23 2013, 03:03 PM
Oh man, I'm totally hype for PP! BLOOD AND FRILLS!
# 9
Posted:
Apr 18 2013, 10:08 PM
Void's TV programs just got more interesting.
Good job rendering all those background elements btw. And that horse.
Good job rendering all those background elements btw. And that horse.
# 8
Posted:
Apr 18 2013, 08:38 PM
Nice gun puns. I like it.
# 7
Posted:
Apr 18 2013, 05:01 PM
very neat, it brings back fond memories of Valkyria Chronicles for me personally. In the bottom panel of page 1, Bullet Princess' eyes are a tad too close. In page 2, it looks like you're still struggling with people out of your usual gamut (in this case, the face of the older male), but I'm pretty confident you'll figure it out sooner than later. The horse in the background actually looks drawn better than Bullet Princess' horse, but it's commendable to be braving the dreaded horse to begin with anyway.
Excited to see the princesses in action~
Excited to see the princesses in action~
# 6
Posted:
Apr 18 2013, 12:40 PM
That. is. awesome!
# 5
Posted:
Apr 18 2013, 12:31 PM
PRINCESSES!
I'm actually kinda more interested by the other princesses in page one? Not sure if that's a good thing or not. But still, this is a totally fine comic, and Bullet princess is very interesting too,(I guess it's the part of mystery that makes me interested in the others) and I can't wait to see more. Although Beast Princess is very weird looking with her crazy pose, her disjointed arm and her inequal and huge legs and Calamity Princess as short arms.
I'm actually kinda more interested by the other princesses in page one? Not sure if that's a good thing or not. But still, this is a totally fine comic, and Bullet princess is very interesting too,(I guess it's the part of mystery that makes me interested in the others) and I can't wait to see more. Although Beast Princess is very weird looking with her crazy pose, her disjointed arm and her inequal and huge legs and Calamity Princess as short arms.
# 4
Posted:
Apr 18 2013, 10:55 AM
shes in!! Huzzah!! I can't wait to see her battle!
# 3
Posted:
Apr 18 2013, 10:28 AM
AWWWW YEAH!
# 2
Posted:
Apr 18 2013, 10:28 AM
Yay, finally get to see her in action!
# 1
Posted:
Apr 18 2013, 10:17 AM
3 years of sitting in the Incubator, the wait is finally over.
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