Intro Story / Capslock & Shift

Intro Story — Capslock & Shift

by Evi


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jho
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# 11   Posted: Mar 4 2013, 06:40 AM
wow this is adorable! makes me wish i'm still battling :P

TINMAN
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# 10   Posted: Feb 3 2013, 02:21 PM
One of the better intro comics I've seen in awhile. You've got a charming style and some very fun characters to play with here, I suspect you'll be a popular battler! Clearly you've devoted a long time devising these creations and their story arch, and it shows in your intro. Your paneling and color scheme are super dynamic, angles and overlaps all over creates a wonderful constant reading flow I'm sure you're aware of. The only place it falters is where the Doctor figures panel overlaps the upper panel on the last page rather than carrying us down and being overlapped by the interruption of the Twins. Can't wait to see you get into the mix and welcome.

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# 9   Posted: Jan 31 2013, 11:52 AM
Great intro comic! My only crit would be that I felt we needed a better more zoomed out establishing shot somewhere so we could get an even better idea of where they were. Aside form that everything looks good! I love your style and these characters seem very fun. The characters have very lovely colors and designs. I look forward to the comics you plan to make with them. :D

Gregly
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# 8   Posted: Jan 28 2013, 03:19 PM
Super great! I want to battle them!

Julz
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# 7   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 04:08 PM
AAAA I want more!!!!

Bobo
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# 6   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 12:55 PM
Beautiful.

Magistelle
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# 5   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 12:51 PM
IS THIS LATE CHRISTMAS. I THINK IT IS.

Minteh
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# 4   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 09:53 AM
AAAAHHHHH! You're in! yes! congrats Evi, I'm so glad ; ^ ;

Your pages are looking excellent, I love all the screens you added in, I'm still not super fond of the stark bright yellow backgrounds, especially on the fourth page where tosh, tues and thurs are in front of the good professor - I feel like the professor bot should have had a slightly darker hue or different colour background to set him back slightly.  As it is I see the two panels on the same plane and find it a little odd to look at, but overall not a major concern.

Rah
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# 3   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 08:41 AM
YESSS PLEASE

E.W. Schneider
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# 2   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 08:40 AM
Congrats!

MyHatsEatPeople
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# 1   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 08:28 AM
Hooray they're in!

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