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Intro Story — Charlie Burns

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Dimension
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# 6   Posted: Dec 30 2012, 10:57 AM
Thanks guys!

Kozi, yes I don't think I'll be making my speech bubbles like that for the next comic. I think they are too hard to follow. Thanks for the crit/compliments. :3

Kozispoon
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1211 comments
# 5   Posted: Dec 30 2012, 10:33 AM
Whew! Little late, but I wanted to toss in my two cents since you cleave me such good feedback on my B.B.

I really dog the personality you afford your backgrounds. The chunky inks and color splatter really gives the enviorment a dirty look I think we all try to strive for when creating Void City. I was thrown by the word bubble on the first page though. I thought the character was saying the words nervously due to the 'shakey' lines surrounding the word bubble. It wasn't until later I figured out it was a stylistic choice. You add such detail already in the backgrounds/color I'm wondering if you need that extra nitty gritty you add on the word bubbles.

I see based off your comments you're an old Void veteran, so welcome on back!

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 4   Posted: Dec 21 2012, 04:04 PM
The loose style is a god experiment! It's certainly vibrant, and that's always interesting. Can't wait to see more from these characters! ;)

Kinu
Artist
150 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 20 2012, 04:53 PM
All you can do is experiment! I'm loving it. Good to see ya back in action again.

Dimension
Artist
489 comments
# 2   Posted: Dec 20 2012, 03:06 PM
Thanks Tofu!

And to the approval commitee, thanks for the critiques! I'll totes work on what you guys mentioned.

I am trying to find a faster, but effective drawing style for my comics on Void. I myself am not super fond of this looser style, so I am still gonna be experimenting for my next comic.

Tofubeast
Artist
254 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 20 2012, 11:22 AM
Welcome back to void! I'm interested in seeing where you take these two.

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