Intro Story / Scrumpy

Intro Story — Scrumpy

by Rah

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Black Spaghetti
Artist
23 comments
# 12   Posted: Oct 9 2013, 09:27 PM
Love'n this, the style is beautiful, the expressions are great, and the comedy was gold. Very nice.

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 11   Posted: Nov 1 2012, 12:58 PM
Really professional quality! Way to be, BecHahns! :D

Rah
Artist
57 comments
# 10   Posted: Oct 29 2012, 12:47 PM
Thanks everyone! Also, Bobo- I was totes about to hitlist Nyle so, yay! We must battle soon :)

bl00chikin
Artist
54 comments
# 9   Posted: Oct 29 2012, 12:36 PM
Nice comic! I loved the colors, the paneling, the story and the dialog! Aces all around!

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 8   Posted: Oct 29 2012, 11:18 AM
MOARRRRR. (PS--Hitlisted)

Julz
Artist
411 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 25 2012, 08:41 PM
Peeps are going to be climbing over eachother to get a chance at fighting you >:D

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 25 2012, 03:26 PM
oh my god there is nothing that isn't perfect about this comic.

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 25 2012, 02:36 PM
Fabulous colors, great panel variation and total gross out on how he 'fixes the problem' lol!
Definitely one of the standouts by way of character intro. Welcome aboard!

Rah
Artist
57 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 25 2012, 02:06 PM
Thanks guys! I'm nervously excited about this :) I'll try and get battling as soon as I can!

Atomicfish
Artist
115 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 25 2012, 12:48 PM
Love it. Love everything about it. The colors and backgrounds are great, and Scrumpy is just loveable! Awesome intro, let's fight!

MyHatsEatPeople
Artist
408 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 25 2012, 12:28 PM
I NEED TO YOU FIGHT YOU.

Tofubeast
Artist
254 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 25 2012, 11:51 AM
Welcome to void!

You've got some dynamic paneling going on, and I like the polished look of your pages! There's some cases I think where the placement of the demon head's word bubbles don't quite help move the reader's eye along from panel to panel--like on page two, panel two, where the demon head's word bubbles line up directly with the word bubbles in the panel directly underneath it, so that you skip over the bottom left panel--but that's a very minor nitpick to a fairly solid comic. Get battling!

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