After Race / Jules Saphir

After Race — Jules Saphir

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Majikura
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469 comments
# 9   Posted: Nov 10 2012, 02:37 PM
i like jules more as a character now since theres a little more to him than just "rwar kill everyone".  I'd like to see you try to do that no line style you did for your backgrounds and apply it to the entire comic sometime.

neens
Approval Committee
266 comments
# 8   Posted: Oct 20 2012, 08:23 PM
hm! this one is interesting. the art is very clean and bold. the colors, and those first two drawings of jules, look nice. I feel like the art may be.. too clean though? the bgs in particular. they look vector, which isn't a bad thing, but it's almost clip-art like. some things being outlines while others aren't is kind of odd too. it'd work I think, if you maybe had it a little more uniform- having JUST figures with outlines, all outlined, or utilizing colored outlines, I dunno. some of the drawings themselves look kinda off too- weird anatomy/shapes, asymmetry to point of looking crooked, stuff like that. lastly, the flashback thing. I like that you made him in the same pose when you introduced it, but I think the effect would have been better if the two panels were on the same page next to each other. establishing shots would have benefitted it as well. all that said, this looks a lot better than your other race comic.

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 19 2012, 10:42 AM
Awwww.... I wanna see more pre-zombie Jules! I think the difference in his personality is really intriguing. Way to go on adding more depth to your character, Video!

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 19 2012, 12:44 AM
...commenting again to say, I don't know what you did, but I just remembered that last night I had a dream about Jules Saphir, and now I think we have to battle sometime. BUT STAY OUT OF MY MIND.

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 17 2012, 09:57 PM
aww! Jules is breaking my heart! This story was bittersweet, and your colours are getting really great! (though some of the kids had some weirdly big heads)

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 17 2012, 08:45 AM
Isn't Jules already dead anyways? ...

Video320
Artist
116 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 16 2012, 08:32 PM
What?! Are you saying there is more to Jules's story after his death? Thats so ... foreboding! Jeez, I wish I knew what that meant.

Anyway, premonitions aside, I didn't really do this in 24 hrs, I was working on it off and on for the last few weeks. I didn't have any time for comics but now I do. So expect some more from me in the near future.

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 16 2012, 04:33 PM
That deathiness will have some interesting aftereffects if I have anything to say about it...

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 16 2012, 12:36 PM
Alright! Glad to see more of this clown in action. Here's hoping we get ot see some awesome battles out of him before you set him up for deathiness.

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