tdk: shame about the scanner situation, but it actually looks good regardless. One gripe i had is the trollface gwen made. for your sake, please avoid internet memes in your comics. it took me a while to do that myself, but the writing is so much better when you dont use them.
gregly: i enjoyed that you conveniently eliminated 8 racers at the end of your comic to make way for the next round. while its not apparent in this comic, i'd like to take this opportunity to critique the flatness of regi's waist and legs in your design sheet. you do a great job at establishing regi's shape and depth with simple shapes, but his waist is always a flat rectangle.
Wacky Races Tournament: Round 1 / Elle vs. Gwen & Regi
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# 12
Posted:
Aug 21 2012, 02:25 PM
# 11
Posted:
Aug 20 2012, 02:33 PM
Way to go, guys!
# 10
Posted:
Aug 20 2012, 10:52 AM
TDK, it's a shame you didn't get to scan those, because those blurry pages look lke a real step up.
Good job, guys!
Good job, guys!
# 9
Posted:
Aug 20 2012, 09:35 AM
Aww man I would have loved to see these both in color. Elle's vehicle has those reds and that would make them really stand out. Love both of your styles and good work
# 8
Posted:
Aug 19 2012, 09:47 AM
But there's no FedEx in this corner of the country D:
# 7
Posted:
Aug 19 2012, 09:10 AM
TDK, that's lame! You could always run over to FedEx and scan it in there... Either way, I can't wait to read it!
# 6
Posted:
Aug 19 2012, 06:34 AM
Uploaded. Sorry this looks like ass, but hey, camera phone.
Because the scanner died on me you see
Because the scanner died on me you see
# 5
Posted:
Aug 17 2012, 12:22 PM
You can do this TDK! Keep it up! You, too, Gregly!
# 4
Posted:
Aug 13 2012, 11:02 PM
Goddamnit why is it so hard to write a race?!
# 3
Posted:
Aug 12 2012, 02:30 AM
Yay!
# 2
Posted:
Aug 11 2012, 11:34 PM
I'm expecting some really cool shit from both of you.
# 1
Posted:
Aug 11 2012, 10:22 PM
Well, how 'bout that.
Tournament Match
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Aug 26th, 2012
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Winner:
Gregly
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Gregly: I liked your story, it was really cute and Gwen is an adorable smart ass. Watch your perspective and anatomy though. You pull it off well in most places, but sometimes your people and animals look a bit wonky. For example, War Beast on the first page doesn’t look level with the rest of the scene. Keep doing what you’re doing with your line work, it looks great!