Wah. He's actually just so insane. (I love it.)

I got really excited the first time I read through this, because you know how much I was looking forward to seeing the visualization of his powers, and the graffiti dragon was such a pay-off! Ahhhh <3

I really enjoy your cityscapes and I think your inking is very intense. I would suggest that you might need to cool off a tad; you ink everything in a frame rather heavily and what happens is the real focus gets a little lost.
It's good to have detail but the whole frame doesn't need to be inked all-out, keep that for the most important part of the image! This will draw the viewers eye to that specific thing, while everything else around will compliment it as opposed to fighting it for attention. You'll have to play about with that for yourself though; I don't really know much about your style of inking to recommend anything specific to help it but It'll probably be more beneficial for you to discover the balance for yourself.

I'm so so stoked to read your next battle and see where this goes! I'm loving Zedan and his story! Best of luck!

(ps  Dream walking! I can't wait to see the dream walking!! <3 Ahhhh!)

I thought I had made it clear, since he says that he needs to form a network of people to get answers, but I'll be focusing more on the exact reasons in my battle with Moss...

Glad you like the story!

Bent, I'm loving how you're playing off Zedan's unfamiliarity with reality and how it affects his body and everything around him. I did feel like his personality didn't make much sense, but I assumed that was what you were going for, like you said. Dreams shift and change and are completely under the control of the subconscious, so a person from that kind of world would probably have difficulty understanding their own personality in the real world, so it makes sense. I'm really enjoying your story so far, and all the characters you're introducing. My only beef is that I don't fully understand why he wanted to start the Marked Guard, but I'm guessing that's just because you haven't fully revealed his back story yet. Anyway, I look forward to more!

Nice, Zedan is going to wreck some shit up. One the 5th page, the 5th panel, Hell Stain. That "looking down your nose" look, feels a little off. But thats a minor complaint, very minor. I enjoyed this a lot! especially the Monster Zed is riding towards the end.

This comic has taught me one thing: I am not good at drawing in full digital yet. And I need to use less hatching.

That was part of my goal, to show that his personality is eratic, since he comes from a world of dreams, but you make a good point. I need to find a balance between him acting crazy and it not fucking up the flow of the story.

Thanks Hats!

You've got a nice style but I feel that your inks are rather messy and it's quite distracting.  Good use of panels and varied shots too! I'd work on your script writing though, Zedan sort of contradicts himself in personality by seeming rather friendly to then picking a fight with a gang, and it's sort of like he's forcing them to join by scaring them? It hard to tell.

Good work, it'll be interesting to see your next comic planned

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This takes place between ZEDAN VS NYASUU and ZEDAN VS MOSS