Star Child / Wizzie Belles
Critiques & Comments
# 28
Posted:
Jul 5 2012, 07:30 PM
Hats, you always infuse every character you draw with life and energy--I was quite intensely entertained by this. Can't wait to read Wizzie's next adventure!
# 27
Posted:
Jul 4 2012, 05:08 AM
spoooooky..
And excellent. As always. Keep up the great work Hats!
And excellent. As always. Keep up the great work Hats!
# 26
Posted:
Jul 2 2012, 02:28 PM
Hatabatta, great read and development for Wizzie! I enjoyed the color choices and tones you used for this comic and you've seriously leveled up in quality.
I've spotted something that you could be more careful with next time, for example, on page 4 first and second panels, be careful of how you lay the panels out and close to each other when it comes to border less panels. The colors merge together to the point that for a split second I thought it was all one panel.
Another thing that's probably just me, but the 'bong' sounds could have been clarified more of what it was. I know it was connected to Nyasuu being posessed, but it was a bit confusing as to what it was exactly.
Those are my only two cents, other than that it was nice pacing. Can't wait to see more!
I've spotted something that you could be more careful with next time, for example, on page 4 first and second panels, be careful of how you lay the panels out and close to each other when it comes to border less panels. The colors merge together to the point that for a split second I thought it was all one panel.
Another thing that's probably just me, but the 'bong' sounds could have been clarified more of what it was. I know it was connected to Nyasuu being posessed, but it was a bit confusing as to what it was exactly.
Those are my only two cents, other than that it was nice pacing. Can't wait to see more!
# 25
Posted:
Jul 1 2012, 07:43 AM
Awesome shit, Hats. First thing I want to say is nice work with the half-tone. It was placed well and really added a lot of tangible depth. And I can't fault your use of a pretty much monochromatic pallet either. I don't think that there's anything else to mention that hasn't been covered.
One thing I really dig about Wizzie is that even though she has all of her own freaky and traumatic shit going down, it's not the be all and end all of her character or her story. I love the movie nights, the getting pissed, the boy issues. I think it's a pretty honest reflection.
I also really enjoyed "complete and utter plonker"
Bonus points for that.
One thing I really dig about Wizzie is that even though she has all of her own freaky and traumatic shit going down, it's not the be all and end all of her character or her story. I love the movie nights, the getting pissed, the boy issues. I think it's a pretty honest reflection.
I also really enjoyed "complete and utter plonker"
Bonus points for that.
# 24
Posted:
Jun 30 2012, 12:00 PM
bl00chikin:Bl00: WE WILL FIGHT.... UGH. AFTER 2 OTHER COMICS I GOT PLANNED, ones a BB collab and the other is a short transition BB because I want to do comics but I'm tied up in life commitments (like sodding learning to drive, euuegghh) to feel confident enough to put up a decent battle. BUT WE WILL FIGHT, BECAUSE I LOVE YOU. AND I LOVE ROY. AND I'M SURE ROY AND WIZ WILL GET ON PROPERLY /SOME HOW/.Quote
Omg <3<3<3<3 I wanna battle you soo bad it ain't even funny! But I know you're super busy and that's cool. btw I think Roy and Wizzie are gonna have a problem, ...well, maybe not Wizzie but Roy certainly will :x
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A problem, how so? But yeah totally totally wanna fight you. Hopefully you can be my next battle! Annnnddd I'll get my arse kicked but it will be worth every moment. PM me.
# 23
Posted:
Jun 30 2012, 10:42 AM
Bl00: WE WILL FIGHT.... UGH. AFTER 2 OTHER COMICS I GOT PLANNED, ones a BB collab and the other is a short transition BB because I want to do comics but I'm tied up in life commitments (like sodding learning to drive, euuegghh) to feel confident enough to put up a decent battle. BUT WE WILL FIGHT, BECAUSE I LOVE YOU. AND I LOVE ROY. AND I'M SURE ROY AND WIZ WILL GET ON PROPERLY /SOME HOW/.
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Omg <3<3<3<3 I wanna battle you soo bad it ain't even funny! But I know you're super busy and that's cool. btw I think Roy and Wizzie are gonna have a problem, ...well, maybe not Wizzie but Roy certainly will :x
# 22
Posted:
Jun 30 2012, 05:00 AM
;A; aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa You're all SWEETHEARTS!
For people that mentioned the type in this comic, yeaaaaaah it didn't seem this bad on photoshop, but now on Void it is a little bit of a pain in the arse to read. So I'll probably go on a hunt to find a clearer font and work on spreading out text little bit more too - thanks on the heads up bros!
BenT: You're a total babe
Atomic: You're also a total babe
Sap: Haven't seen you around before, hi and thank you!
Bl00: WE WILL FIGHT.... UGH. AFTER 2 OTHER COMICS I GOT PLANNED, ones a BB collab and the other is a short transition BB because I want to do comics but I'm tied up in life commitments (like sodding learning to drive, euuegghh) to feel confident enough to put up a decent battle. BUT WE WILL FIGHT, BECAUSE I LOVE YOU. AND I LOVE ROY. AND I'M SURE ROY AND WIZ WILL GET ON PROPERLY /SOME HOW/.
Video: You're also a total babe alongside BenT and Atomic
Kinu: Read the babe comments and they refer to you too.
TKDZen: Nudity, sex, violence, gore, swearing, drug abuse. They're all allowed, there used to be a disclaimer on the site that warned visitors the site was NSFW but it's not there anymore since the new site got updated, but I'm pretty sure it still applies because we haven't been informed other wise. As for the dialogue, yeaaah It's one of my week points at the moment. I don't want to scatter a page with bubbles but then I'll clutter bubbles instead, It's a hard balance for me to grasp yet but I am working on it. Also yes, yes we shall battle in the future and it shall be beaut'.
For people that mentioned the type in this comic, yeaaaaaah it didn't seem this bad on photoshop, but now on Void it is a little bit of a pain in the arse to read. So I'll probably go on a hunt to find a clearer font and work on spreading out text little bit more too - thanks on the heads up bros!
BenT: You're a total babe
Atomic: You're also a total babe
Sap: Haven't seen you around before, hi and thank you!
Bl00: WE WILL FIGHT.... UGH. AFTER 2 OTHER COMICS I GOT PLANNED, ones a BB collab and the other is a short transition BB because I want to do comics but I'm tied up in life commitments (like sodding learning to drive, euuegghh) to feel confident enough to put up a decent battle. BUT WE WILL FIGHT, BECAUSE I LOVE YOU. AND I LOVE ROY. AND I'M SURE ROY AND WIZ WILL GET ON PROPERLY /SOME HOW/.
Video: You're also a total babe alongside BenT and Atomic
Kinu: Read the babe comments and they refer to you too.
TKDZen: Nudity, sex, violence, gore, swearing, drug abuse. They're all allowed, there used to be a disclaimer on the site that warned visitors the site was NSFW but it's not there anymore since the new site got updated, but I'm pretty sure it still applies because we haven't been informed other wise. As for the dialogue, yeaaah It's one of my week points at the moment. I don't want to scatter a page with bubbles but then I'll clutter bubbles instead, It's a hard balance for me to grasp yet but I am working on it. Also yes, yes we shall battle in the future and it shall be beaut'.
# 21
Posted:
Jun 30 2012, 01:30 AM
I enjoyed this a lot, Hats! There were a couple of individual panels where I thought there were a little too much dialogue, but only slightly. I love your style, and the layout was great! And i was Not expecting nude Wizzie! I didn't even know nudity was Allowed lol. Anyway, great work, you and I have to battle one day, believe it!
# 20
Posted:
Jun 30 2012, 01:30 AM
I enjoyed this a lot, Hats! There were a couple of individual panels where I thought there were a little too much dialogue, but only slightly. I love your style, and the layout was great! And i was Not expecting nude Wizzie! I didn't even know nudity was Allowed lol. Anyway, great work, you and I have to battle one day, believe it!
# 19
Posted:
Jun 30 2012, 01:30 AM
I enjoyed this a lot, Hats! There were a couple of individual panels where I thought there were a little too much dialogue, but only slightly. I love your style, and the layout was great! And i was Not expecting nude Wizzie! I didn't even know nudity was Allowed lol. Anyway, great work, you and I have to battle one day, believe it!
# 18
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 09:22 PM
This was great. Awesome job, Hats.
# 17
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 08:59 PM
whoa, nice. That was pretty suspenseful.
# 16
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 08:29 PM
So, Hats, I don't think I told you just how much I LOVE Wizzie! This was too epic! I was THOROUGHLY entertained! God you make me wanna draw a comic so bad!
# 15
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 04:21 PM
That was great! I like the comics layout.
# 14
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 04:12 PM
Amazing comic, Hat lady! So suspenseful! I really like your panel layouts and backgrounds.
# 13
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 02:25 PM
And this cements my opinion that Wizzie is the coolest fucking character on VOID right now. This was a real treat to read. Great build up of suspense and foreshadowing.
# 12
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 01:40 PM
Julienya: TOTALLY worth the wait I reaaally can't wait to see where wiz goes from here as Star Child and I'm dying to know who that Eyeball fellow is.
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Thanks Julie! I was a litttttttttttttles nervous about how you'd react to how I used Nyasuu but I'm fglad you enjoyed it! Also the Eyeball fellow is called "The Voice" COZ IM IMAGINATIVE AS FUCK.
# 11
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 01:30 PM
TOTALLY worth the wait I reaaally can't wait to see where wiz goes from here as Star Child and I'm dying to know who that Eyeball fellow is.
# 10
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 12:51 PM
Awwww, man! Now I'm in even more suspense! Awesome work, Hats. I love your use of tone and keeping the blue throughout the comic. The text was a little hard for me to read, though; maybe a little bit bigger would be better in the future. Uh... what else can I say? It was just a solid comic, and I enjoyed it.
# 9
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 10:12 AM
Theres no rush guys! It'll be up as soon as Angie can! I'm happy it's getting a warm welcome though.
# 8
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 09:47 AM
Angie: just joking! I know you're the only person who puts comics up. super pumped about this, though
# 7
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 09:39 AM
The_BenT_One: Literally, I can't wait. WHERE IS IT
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I'm at work, you'll have to wait longer.
# 6
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 09:10 AM
Literally, I can't wait. WHERE IS IT
# 5
Posted:
Jun 29 2012, 09:04 AM
*Flails*
# 4
Posted:
Jun 28 2012, 10:43 PM
DRAW, HATS! DRAW! WITH SOUL!
# 3
Posted:
Jun 28 2012, 10:10 PM
ONE HOUR O_______O!
# 2
Posted:
Jun 28 2012, 01:44 PM
Bobo liked this.
# 1
Posted:
Jun 28 2012, 01:34 PM
OKAY LETS DO THIS.
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