Star Child / Wizzie Belles

Star Child — Wizzie Belles

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Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 29   Posted: Jul 11 2012, 05:36 PM
Really reeeeally love your comics. You can truly tell you love doing this as you put so much love and attention to your paneling and lights/shadows. Definitely a cool hook to keep members reading on over what is up with Wizzie :)

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 28   Posted: Jul 5 2012, 07:30 PM
Hats, you always infuse every character you draw with life and energy--I was quite intensely entertained by this. Can't wait to read Wizzie's next adventure!

Fed
Artist
162 comments
# 27   Posted: Jul 4 2012, 05:08 AM
spoooooky..

And excellent. As always. Keep up the great work Hats!

Cracking Skulls
Artist
354 comments
# 26   Posted: Jul 2 2012, 02:28 PM
Hatabatta, great read and development for Wizzie! I enjoyed the color choices and tones you used for this comic and you've seriously leveled up in quality.

I've spotted something that you could be more careful with next time, for example, on page 4 first and second panels, be careful of how you lay the panels out and close to each other when it comes to border less panels. The colors merge together to the point that for a split second I thought it was all one panel.

Another thing that's probably just me, but the 'bong' sounds could have been clarified more of what it was. I know it was connected to Nyasuu being posessed, but it was a bit confusing as to what it was exactly.

Those are my only two cents, other than that it was nice pacing. Can't wait to see more!

Frazzler
Artist
34 comments
# 25   Posted: Jul 1 2012, 07:43 AM
Awesome shit, Hats. First thing I want to say is nice work with the half-tone. It was placed well and really added a lot of tangible depth. And I can't fault your use of a pretty much monochromatic pallet either. I don't think that there's anything else to mention that hasn't been covered.

One thing I really dig about Wizzie is that even though she has all of her own freaky and traumatic shit going down, it's not the be all and end all of her character or her story. I love the movie nights, the getting pissed, the boy issues. I think it's a pretty honest reflection.

I also really enjoyed "complete and utter plonker"

Bonus points for that.

MyHatsEatPeople
Artist
408 comments
# 24   Posted: Jun 30 2012, 12:00 PM
bl00chikin:
Bl00: WE WILL FIGHT.... UGH. AFTER 2 OTHER COMICS I GOT PLANNED, ones a BB collab and the other is a short transition BB because I want to do comics but I'm tied up in life commitments (like sodding learning to drive, euuegghh) to feel confident enough to put up a decent battle. BUT WE WILL FIGHT, BECAUSE I LOVE YOU. AND I LOVE ROY. AND I'M SURE ROY AND WIZ WILL GET ON PROPERLY /SOME HOW/.
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Omg <3<3<3<3 I wanna battle you soo bad it ain't even funny! But I know you're super busy and that's cool. btw I think Roy and Wizzie are gonna have a problem, ...well, maybe not Wizzie but Roy certainly will :x
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A problem, how so? But yeah totally totally wanna fight you. Hopefully you can be my next battle! Annnnddd I'll get my arse kicked but it will be worth every moment. PM me.


bl00chikin
Artist
54 comments
# 23   Posted: Jun 30 2012, 10:42 AM
Bl00: WE WILL FIGHT.... UGH. AFTER 2 OTHER COMICS I GOT PLANNED, ones a BB collab and the other is a short transition BB because I want to do comics but I'm tied up in life commitments (like sodding learning to drive, euuegghh) to feel confident enough to put up a decent battle. BUT WE WILL FIGHT, BECAUSE I LOVE YOU. AND I LOVE ROY. AND I'M SURE ROY AND WIZ WILL GET ON PROPERLY /SOME HOW/.
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Omg <3<3<3<3 I wanna battle you soo bad it ain't even funny! But I know you're super busy and that's cool. btw I think Roy and Wizzie are gonna have a problem, ...well, maybe not Wizzie but Roy certainly will :x

MyHatsEatPeople
Artist
408 comments
# 22   Posted: Jun 30 2012, 05:00 AM
;A; aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa You're all SWEETHEARTS!

For people that mentioned the type in this comic, yeaaaaaah it didn't seem this bad on photoshop, but now on Void it is a little bit of a pain in the arse to read. So I'll probably go on a hunt to find a clearer font and work on spreading out text little bit more too - thanks on the heads up bros!

BenT: You're a total babe

Atomic: You're also a total babe

Sap: Haven't seen you around before, hi and thank you!

Bl00: WE WILL FIGHT.... UGH. AFTER 2 OTHER COMICS I GOT PLANNED, ones a BB collab and the other is a short transition BB because I want to do comics but I'm tied up in life commitments (like sodding learning to drive, euuegghh) to feel confident enough to put up a decent battle. BUT WE WILL FIGHT, BECAUSE I LOVE YOU. AND I LOVE ROY. AND I'M SURE ROY AND WIZ WILL GET ON PROPERLY /SOME HOW/.

Video: You're also a total babe alongside BenT and Atomic

Kinu: Read the babe comments and they refer to you too.

TKDZen: Nudity, sex, violence, gore, swearing, drug abuse. They're all allowed, there used to be a disclaimer on the site that warned visitors the site was NSFW but it's not there anymore since the new site got updated, but I'm pretty sure it still applies because we haven't been informed other wise. As for the dialogue, yeaaah It's one of my week points at the moment. I don't want to scatter a page with bubbles but then I'll clutter bubbles instead, It's a hard balance for me to grasp yet but I am working on it. Also yes, yes we shall battle in the future and it shall be beaut'.

TKDZen
Artist
33 comments
# 21   Posted: Jun 30 2012, 01:30 AM
I enjoyed this a lot, Hats! There were a couple of individual panels where I thought there were a little too much dialogue, but only slightly. I love your style, and the layout was great! And i was Not expecting nude Wizzie! I didn't even know nudity was Allowed lol. Anyway, great work, you and I have to battle one day, believe it!

TKDZen
Artist
33 comments
# 20   Posted: Jun 30 2012, 01:30 AM
I enjoyed this a lot, Hats! There were a couple of individual panels where I thought there were a little too much dialogue, but only slightly. I love your style, and the layout was great! And i was Not expecting nude Wizzie! I didn't even know nudity was Allowed lol. Anyway, great work, you and I have to battle one day, believe it!

TKDZen
Artist
33 comments
# 19   Posted: Jun 30 2012, 01:30 AM
I enjoyed this a lot, Hats! There were a couple of individual panels where I thought there were a little too much dialogue, but only slightly. I love your style, and the layout was great! And i was Not expecting nude Wizzie! I didn't even know nudity was Allowed lol. Anyway, great work, you and I have to battle one day, believe it!

Kinu
Artist
150 comments
# 18   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 09:22 PM
This was great. Awesome job, Hats.

Video320
Artist
116 comments
# 17   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 08:59 PM
whoa, nice. That was pretty suspenseful.

bl00chikin
Artist
54 comments
# 16   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 08:29 PM
So, Hats, I don't think I told you just how much I LOVE Wizzie! This was too epic! I was THOROUGHLY entertained! God you make me wanna draw a comic so bad!

xSapKapx
Artist
7 comments
# 15   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 04:21 PM
That was great! I like the comics layout.

Atomicfish
Artist
115 comments
# 14   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 04:12 PM
Amazing comic, Hat lady! So suspenseful! I really like your panel layouts and backgrounds.

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 13   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 02:25 PM
And this cements my opinion that Wizzie is the coolest fucking character on VOID right now. This was a real treat to read. Great build up of suspense and foreshadowing.

MyHatsEatPeople
Artist
408 comments
# 12   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 01:40 PM
Julienya: TOTALLY worth the wait :D I reaaally can't wait to see where wiz goes from here as Star Child and I'm dying to know who that Eyeball fellow is.
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Thanks Julie! I was a litttttttttttttles nervous about how you'd react to how I used Nyasuu but I'm fglad you enjoyed it! :D Also the Eyeball fellow is called "The Voice" COZ IM IMAGINATIVE AS FUCK.

Julz
Artist
411 comments
# 11   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 01:30 PM
TOTALLY worth the wait :D I reaaally can't wait to see where wiz goes from here as Star Child and I'm dying to know who that Eyeball fellow is.

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 10   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 12:51 PM
Awwww, man! Now I'm in even more suspense! Awesome work, Hats. I love your use of tone and keeping the blue throughout the comic. The text was a little hard for me to read, though; maybe a little bit bigger would be better in the future. Uh... what else can I say? It was just a solid comic, and I enjoyed it.

MyHatsEatPeople
Artist
408 comments
# 9   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 10:12 AM
Theres no rush guys! It'll be up as soon as Angie can! I'm happy it's getting a warm welcome though.

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 8   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 09:47 AM
Angie: just joking! I know you're the only person who puts comics up. super pumped about this, though

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 09:39 AM
The_BenT_One: Literally, I can't wait. WHERE IS IT
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I'm at work, you'll have to wait longer.

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 09:10 AM
Literally, I can't wait. WHERE IS IT

Kinu
Artist
150 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 29 2012, 09:04 AM
*Flails*

TKDZen
Artist
33 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 28 2012, 10:43 PM
DRAW, HATS! DRAW! WITH SOUL!

bl00chikin
Artist
54 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 28 2012, 10:10 PM
ONE HOUR O_______O!

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 28 2012, 01:44 PM
Bobo liked this.

MyHatsEatPeople
Artist
408 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 28 2012, 01:34 PM
OKAY LETS DO THIS.

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