I agree with Angie, the lines are good, but it would be great to see the art pop with some more, dark shades.
But it's still great, keep up it up.
Round Interlude / Morrow Stone
Critiques & Comments
# 10
Posted:
Apr 16 2012, 06:04 PM
# 9
Posted:
Apr 15 2012, 06:29 PM
Very cute comic! I would like to see you explore his powers more in time, because all the plant stuff is a cool idea. Someday I would like to see you tone your comics, it'll give your stuff a bit more depth.
# 8
Posted:
Apr 15 2012, 04:43 PM
I liked this. It helped us understand more about Morrow, and how genuinely good of a guy he is. I'd like to see you try some more perspective shots/bgs and different tones/greys/colors in future rounds. Overall a solid entry! Good job!
# 7
Posted:
Apr 14 2012, 10:54 PM
Thanks for all the feedback and comments guys, much appreciated.
# 6
Posted:
Apr 14 2012, 04:18 PM
Your character is just so good natured. I want to hate him because of that (haha), but I can't because he crosses over that boundary into loveable territory.
Really nice comic man.
Really nice comic man.
# 5
Posted:
Apr 14 2012, 02:36 PM
That is just so cute I love the way your characters move--so believable when he was taking her out of the street, and the body language was really enjoyable throughout. Good job!
# 4
Posted:
Apr 14 2012, 12:43 PM
Wow, this was a great comic! Adding some tones or contrasting values would make this absolutely sizzle.
# 3
Posted:
Apr 14 2012, 09:53 AM
I feel this is such an improvement on the last comic! Well done.
the backgounds look great, but quite a few panels are left blank. It sortof works but I'd like to see you do a comic with a background in every panel just to compare.
the backgounds look great, but quite a few panels are left blank. It sortof works but I'd like to see you do a comic with a background in every panel just to compare.
# 2
Posted:
Apr 14 2012, 08:30 AM
Sooo sweet.. I dare you to be more daring with your blacks and lineweights
# 1
Posted:
Apr 13 2012, 11:58 PM
I've decided to try something new each time I load up a comic here. Last comic was silent, this time I'm working with traditional media which I neglect a fair amount. Toward the end I also tried to get a little braver with my use of black and inks in general, also trying to practice a bit of line weight.
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Apr 20th, 2012
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