Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 1 / Gregory T. vs. Jules Saphir
Critiques & Comments
# 18
Posted:
Apr 15 2012, 08:03 PM
I was really looking forward to this fight, I like both characters. But one has no entry and the other entry is so big I couldn't even read it =( super sad. Maybe next time.
# 17
Posted:
Apr 13 2012, 08:41 AM
Vid: Jules is a creepy, dangerous character that I love to see in action and you managed to keep the clash interesting and bloody. Its interesting that you made Gregory the main character and Jules more of the phantom like villain when I'm more interested in his motives. You've got some good expressions and coloring going on but its inconsistent in terms of quality and your compositions/perspective could do with some tightening up. Overall I liked it, can't wait to see who Jules haunts next.
# 16
Posted:
Apr 11 2012, 11:57 AM
Popo: Hey, I saw you were turning in a BB, so it's good you did the work. Misjudging what time you have left is a common problem for new people. I can understand that. Looking forward to the comic though.
Video: Shrink your pages. I know you know that. Also, it looks like you ran out of time. After this tournament, you should play around with longer deadlines. In the meanwhile, know your limits, and perhaps write shorter comics so you can have a more finished looking comic. There's art basics you need to work on, but who doesn't. Practice makes perfect, so keep drawing. See you next round.
Video: Shrink your pages. I know you know that. Also, it looks like you ran out of time. After this tournament, you should play around with longer deadlines. In the meanwhile, know your limits, and perhaps write shorter comics so you can have a more finished looking comic. There's art basics you need to work on, but who doesn't. Practice makes perfect, so keep drawing. See you next round.
# 15
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 09:14 PM
Too bad there was no entry on your part, Popo. I'd love to see what you can do, since your character is pretty interesting.
And as for you Vid, I liked yours. Sloth beat me to it yet again. Watch the size/consistency and you'll improve! Nice work!
And as for you Vid, I liked yours. Sloth beat me to it yet again. Watch the size/consistency and you'll improve! Nice work!
# 14
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 09:14 PM
My first double post. Ffffffff-
# 13
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 03:43 PM
A nice effort, video320. My primary critique would be to watch the scale, both between characters and backgrounds. Consistent sizes make a big difference! Good luck in the next round!
# 12
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 03:04 PM
Video320:Awww, I was really looking forward to seeing them. Are you gonna upload them on Da?Popokoli: Good god, that's good. It's a shame I wasn't able to finish mineQuote
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# 11
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 02:19 PM
Popokoli: Good god, that's good. It's a shame I wasn't able to finish mine
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# 10
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 02:18 PM
I'm really sorry about the sizes. I wont make that mistake again.
# 9
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 10:46 AM
Good god, that's good. It's a shame I wasn't able to finish mine
# 8
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 10:19 AM
Good stuff Video320 but uhhh.. smaller pictures next time, alright?
# 7
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 10:13 AM
Holy large images, batman! Hard to read, just so huge! Next time shrink them down some!
# 6
Posted:
Apr 4 2012, 11:24 PM
Oogh, I just realized I won't be able to draw or do anything over this coming weekend @___@
GOTTA FINISH THIS QUICKLY.
GOTTA FINISH THIS QUICKLY.
# 5
Posted:
Apr 2 2012, 08:05 AM
I just wanna say i'm having a really fun time drawing Gregory.
# 4
Posted:
Apr 1 2012, 06:16 PM
MAKE IT ROCK GUYS.
# 3
Posted:
Apr 1 2012, 06:12 PM
Oh my goodness, this was a match made in Hell. I'll have a helluva great time thinking up solutions!
# 2
Posted:
Apr 1 2012, 05:25 PM
*waves pom-poms* You can do eet!
# 1
Posted:
Apr 1 2012, 11:37 AM
Man, that poor boy just looks scared looking at the ghost! Work hard and best of luck, you guys!
Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Apr 16th, 2012
Votes Cast:
42
Page Views:
1778
Winner:
Video320
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