Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 1 / Gregory T. vs. Jules Saphir

Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 1 — Gregory T. vs. Jules Saphir

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Popokoli
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16 comments
# 19   Posted: May 3 2012, 05:15 PM
Animeshen: I was really looking forward to this fight, I like both characters. But one has no entry and the other entry is so big I couldn't even read it =( super sad. Maybe next time.
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Ooh, I did post the pages that I had finished over here: http://entervoid.com/index.php?action=comic%3bid=4115

Animeshen
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1490 comments
# 18   Posted: Apr 15 2012, 08:03 PM
I was really looking forward to this fight, I like both characters. But one has no entry and the other entry is so big I couldn't even read it =( super sad. Maybe next time.

TINMAN
Artist
140 comments
# 17   Posted: Apr 13 2012, 08:41 AM
Vid: Jules is a creepy, dangerous character that I love to see in action and you managed to keep the clash interesting and bloody. Its interesting that you made Gregory the main character and Jules more of the phantom like villain when I'm more interested in his motives. You've got some good expressions and coloring going on but its inconsistent in terms of quality and your compositions/perspective could do with some tightening up. Overall I liked it, can't wait to see who Jules haunts next.

Hiemie
Artist
511 comments
# 16   Posted: Apr 11 2012, 11:57 AM
Popo: Hey, I saw you were turning in a BB, so it's good you did the work. Misjudging what time you have left is a common problem for new people. I can understand that. Looking forward to the comic though.

Video: Shrink your pages. I know you know that. Also, it looks like you ran out of time. After this tournament, you should play around with longer deadlines. In the meanwhile, know your limits, and perhaps write shorter comics so you can have a more finished looking comic. There's art basics you need to work on, but who doesn't. Practice makes perfect, so keep drawing. See you next round.

Kinu
Artist
150 comments
# 15   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 09:14 PM
Too bad there was no entry on your part, Popo. I'd love to see what you can do, since your character is pretty interesting.

And as for you Vid, I liked yours. Sloth beat me to it yet again. Watch the size/consistency and you'll improve! Nice work!

Kinu
Artist
150 comments
# 14   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 09:14 PM
My first double post. Ffffffff-

slothvert
Artist
71 comments
# 13   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 03:43 PM
A nice effort, video320. My primary critique would be to watch the scale, both between characters and backgrounds. Consistent sizes make a big difference! Good luck in the next round!

Popokoli
Artist
16 comments
# 12   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 03:04 PM
Video320:
Popokoli: Good god, that's good. It's a shame I wasn't able to finish mine :'(
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Awww, I was really looking forward to seeing them. Are you gonna upload them on Da?
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Yes! No point in deleting them, hahaha.

Video320
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116 comments
# 11   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 02:19 PM
Popokoli: Good god, that's good. It's a shame I wasn't able to finish mine :'(
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Awww, I was really looking forward to seeing them. Are you gonna upload them on Da?

Video320
Artist
116 comments
# 10   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 02:18 PM
I'm really sorry about the sizes. I wont make that mistake again.

Popokoli
Artist
16 comments
# 9   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 10:46 AM
Good god, that's good. It's a shame I wasn't able to finish mine :'(

Fed
Artist
162 comments
# 8   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 10:19 AM
Good stuff Video320 but uhhh.. smaller pictures next time, alright? :)

purplemuffin
21 comments
# 7   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 10:13 AM
Holy large images, batman! Hard to read, just so huge! Next time shrink them down some! :)

Popokoli
Artist
16 comments
# 6   Posted: Apr 4 2012, 11:24 PM
Oogh, I just realized I won't be able to draw or do anything over this coming weekend @___@
GOTTA FINISH THIS QUICKLY.

Video320
Artist
116 comments
# 5   Posted: Apr 2 2012, 08:05 AM
I just wanna say i'm having a really fun time drawing Gregory. :D

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 4   Posted: Apr 1 2012, 06:16 PM
MAKE IT ROCK GUYS.

Popokoli
Artist
16 comments
# 3   Posted: Apr 1 2012, 06:12 PM
Oh my goodness, this was a match made in Hell. I'll have a helluva great time thinking up solutions!

DelBarrio
Artist
426 comments
# 2   Posted: Apr 1 2012, 05:25 PM
*waves pom-poms* You can do eet!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 1   Posted: Apr 1 2012, 11:37 AM
Man, that poor boy just looks scared looking at the ghost! Work hard and best of luck, you guys!

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