I can't help but feel the buildings in the background of page 1 should have also been bouncing for joy.
The second panel on the second page also feels a little wasted. Maybe a more thoughtful expression would have helped.
I do love the looks of joy you've got going there. And the sudden transition to colour is pretty awesome. The street seems remarkably free of cars though.
Intro Story / Pip Poodle
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# 7
Posted:
Mar 26 2012, 10:17 AM
# 6
Posted:
Mar 23 2012, 06:39 PM
oh my god, this character. STOP BEING SO ADORABLE.
# 5
Posted:
Mar 23 2012, 06:39 PM
oh my god, this character. STOP BEING SO ADORABLE.
# 4
Posted:
Mar 22 2012, 11:54 AM
Yeah, I think I could have toned down the eye reflections a bit more. XD; THANKS GUYS. <3
# 3
Posted:
Mar 22 2012, 11:24 AM
;A; I just want to fluff up his hair I love him so much already. The third page has a lot of impact, I like the light reflecting off his face but I think it may have been slightly over done, his face looks pretty glazed over. Other then that LET ME JUST CUDDLE HIM.
# 2
Posted:
Mar 21 2012, 07:37 PM
Awesome.
# 1
Posted:
Mar 21 2012, 04:36 PM
jesus this is brilliant.
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Beyond Battle
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Mar 28th, 2012
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