Lazereyes, I'm a big fan of traditional mediums, especially Inkwash. Your limited use of colour is fairly effective, and the pacing and dialogue are very clear. Nice entry. I feel like you set up a solid scene, but there was very little conflict. I hope that this cliffhanger has a continuation.

Betito: Simple lineart, simple backgrounds, it was cute and lighthearted and I enjoyed it. The art was a little off in places-- the first panel on the third page is much weaker than the rest-- but it was a good joke and it got a chuckle outta me.

      Edited Apr 1 2012,  08:51 AM by J.Vandermeer

Really, Cult, really?

I'll write crits later, hard on an iPhone lol.

I've submitted what I had finished and was comfortable with submitting. It got a little sloppy at the end and I apologize.
hyup. Sorry for being a lame-o.

Can't wait for some Pinn comix!

thnks i jus wanna actually finish this

Cultmasterflex has requested an extension on this comic, so the deadline is now extended and cannot be extended again.

Fixed!

I suppose you're gonna have to mention it on the bug thread! I'm sure it'll be easily fixed.

no im sayin because if you above this comment none of the characters are correct as a matter of fact they are all sayin Sebastian Rockwell

Since the site was integrated with the forum, it's the forum icons that take prevalence.

wassup wit our icons?

This looks exciting!