Intro Story / Izanami

Intro Story — Izanami

by JCee


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# 7   Posted: Oct 27 2011, 01:21 PM
*looks at it again and again* ... ... oh wait. They are. Yes, he's restraining her from behind. Sorry, I used to place thumbs on the wrong side back when I started drawing.

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# 6   Posted: Oct 27 2011, 07:29 AM
Tatsura:
mintley: looks pretty good! but on the second page's first panel - your thumbs are on the wrong side!
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Awww damn you're correct! How did I not notice that!? *facepalm*



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errrr... No, they are on the correct side? provided he turned her around and he is holding her from behind? At least that's how it reads for me

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# 5   Posted: Oct 26 2011, 10:41 PM
Funfetus: The pages look great!  I wish we got more of a sense of who the character is, though.  Looking forward to seeing more!
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Don't worry, when Iza gets her first battle you'll be able to see what she's like.

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# 4   Posted: Oct 26 2011, 09:05 PM
The pages look great!  I wish we got more of a sense of who the character is, though.  Looking forward to seeing more!

JCee
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# 3   Posted: Oct 26 2011, 08:10 PM
mintley: looks pretty good! but on the second page's first panel - your thumbs are on the wrong side!
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Awww damn you're correct! How did I not notice that!? *facepalm*




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# 2   Posted: Oct 26 2011, 07:04 PM
looks pretty good! but on the second page's first panel - your thumbs are on the wrong side!

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# 1   Posted: Oct 26 2011, 06:18 PM
good start! looking forward for more.

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