Jira vs. Aesimi & Beethoven

Jira vs. Aesimi & Beethoven

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Fred v2.0.1
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# 10   Posted: Aug 6 2011, 09:24 PM
aaww, I love Aesimi and Beethoven, they're so cute.
I feel like this ended rather abrubtly, but an enjoyable comic.

Coatl
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# 9   Posted: Aug 6 2011, 05:27 PM
aww this has been a disappointing season as far as people not uploading their work. even I might fall victim to it if I'm not careful.

Pelica, I think the use of tones, or black or rendering may help brign some focus on your drawing since I felt there was a lot of empty space. also if you use illustrator, learn to use that for speech bubbles or use templates to draw in the ovals.
other than that, always practice bgs and anatomy to tighten your technical skills. this was an alright story, helt that it lacked something but it's alright.

William_Duel
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# 8   Posted: Aug 6 2011, 11:00 AM
Pelica...I've missed your comics.  (Don't leave... ;.;)
While not an indepth crit, I feel like your expressions have gotten even better and more detailed.  Man-Terrier Man is the best hero ever too.

Ronin Inc
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# 7   Posted: Aug 6 2011, 08:39 AM
Hey sry  guys im gonna have to ppost mne as a bb. Was forced to work double shifts straight througn the last two weeks. Sry again. Hate construction jobs. X(

Ronin Inc
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# 6   Posted: Aug 6 2011, 08:39 AM
Hey sry  guys im gonna have to ppost mne as a bb. Was forced to work double shifts straight througn the last two weeks. Sry again. Hate construction jobs. X(

William_Duel
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# 5   Posted: Aug 6 2011, 04:50 AM
Tacos!

Mister Kent
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# 4   Posted: Aug 5 2011, 10:00 AM
Oh I cant wait for this!

E.W. Schneider
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# 3   Posted: Jul 1 2011, 06:29 PM
Can't wait to see what you pump out!

Angie
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# 2   Posted: Jul 1 2011, 05:06 PM
Nice to see you both back!

Dimension
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# 1   Posted: Jul 1 2011, 04:58 PM
Ooooo neat!

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Aug 12th, 2011
Votes Cast: 14
Page Views: 870
Winner: Pelz
 

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