Intro Story / Nadya Averin

Intro Story — Nadya Averin

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mvm
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# 3   Posted: May 16 2011, 11:46 PM
welcome to void

Penryn88
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# 2   Posted: May 16 2011, 06:46 PM
HEY B.V.! Grats on getting in! I like your character and your concept, I think you'll be able to do a lot with it. Your comic had good pacing and was executed well as far as your narrative goes. One thing I think you should do that would improve your comic art would be to add some line variation. Thicker lines on your characters and foreground objects will make them pop out and give your line art a more interesting look. I can't wait to see more.

PyrasTerran
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# 1   Posted: May 16 2011, 08:09 AM
quick question: does the venom strengthen her physically, in a sci-fi manner, or is it something else? I'm asking because if it's simple enhanced strength it would make sense for her punches and blade cuts to deal more damage, but a bullet can't get any stronger than the gun that fires it makes it to be. If she transfers her strength to her weapons though, then that fixes that.

Overall, I think you're aware that backgrounds are what's weakest here. You should consider shading or coloring as well to make the piece look more complete. It's clear that you've got good color sense from your design sheet, the more you can apply that to your future work the better.

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