wooow by the skin of your teeth! congrats, Dure.
In regards to tourneys I find it a big deal to overcome Hiemie.
Anya vs. Hiemie the Fishboy
Critiques & Comments
# 32
Posted:
Mar 28 2011, 04:27 AM
# 31
Posted:
Mar 27 2011, 08:26 PM
Wow this one is so close! From a 1% difference to a tie in 10 minutes!!
# 30
Posted:
Mar 27 2011, 05:08 PM
I have to agree with Elio.
# 29
Posted:
Mar 25 2011, 12:08 PM
Love the alt. version of Hiemie!
# 28
Posted:
Mar 23 2011, 10:14 PM
Oh noooo Fedra died like Poochie!!!!
# 27
Posted:
Mar 22 2011, 08:47 AM
oh $%&#, Fedra's dead!? D:
Dure: I am a fan of seeing re-imaginings of beloved characters, but I'm torn with the execution in this story. I might pardon it if, provided you make it to the next round, Hiemie actually WAS immortal and came right back up, but with the allusion that Koba may have tricked the boy, idunno. I'm also disappointed that Anya is going THAT route (bloodthirsty obsessed with revenge until an innocent character shows her the light prematurely, which may likely affect her perspective on the mission at hand), at least, going that route so early. I'm not sure how much sympathy I would even want to feel for Anya at this point, it seemed clear with P2's club destruction that she doesn't care one bit about friends or innocents anymore (at least, that is what was portrayed of Anya in that episode). To have her suddenly show a soft spot after mass murder, idunno. At this point Anya seems just as dangerous as the Orphanage, if not moreso.
Hiemie: The art wasn't as great as last one methinks, BUT I absolutely LOVED the Popeye gag going throughout the comic. I agree 100% with Qyzex: The 'Tuesday' line should have been in there! You coulda even replaced 'hamburger' with 'hennessy'.
Great job both of you!
Dure: I am a fan of seeing re-imaginings of beloved characters, but I'm torn with the execution in this story. I might pardon it if, provided you make it to the next round, Hiemie actually WAS immortal and came right back up, but with the allusion that Koba may have tricked the boy, idunno. I'm also disappointed that Anya is going THAT route (bloodthirsty obsessed with revenge until an innocent character shows her the light prematurely, which may likely affect her perspective on the mission at hand), at least, going that route so early. I'm not sure how much sympathy I would even want to feel for Anya at this point, it seemed clear with P2's club destruction that she doesn't care one bit about friends or innocents anymore (at least, that is what was portrayed of Anya in that episode). To have her suddenly show a soft spot after mass murder, idunno. At this point Anya seems just as dangerous as the Orphanage, if not moreso.
Hiemie: The art wasn't as great as last one methinks, BUT I absolutely LOVED the Popeye gag going throughout the comic. I agree 100% with Qyzex: The 'Tuesday' line should have been in there! You coulda even replaced 'hamburger' with 'hennessy'.
Great job both of you!
# 26
Posted:
Mar 21 2011, 02:40 PM
Dure, I was actually a fan of the alternative Fishboy, but yeah his interaction was presented kind of lackluster. B/W wins for me as well, thought your colors have yet to be a problem to me either. Great job.
Heimie, you consistency comes to no surprise, my man. Funny and even took the time to have continuity.
Kudos, guys.
Heimie, you consistency comes to no surprise, my man. Funny and even took the time to have continuity.
Kudos, guys.
# 25
Posted:
Mar 21 2011, 02:28 PM
I love critique guys. I'm just amazed at how close to home people hit with the stuff i had plotted out in case i got to the next round XD.
# 24
Posted:
Mar 21 2011, 02:23 PM
All you guys are being silly. One of the best aspects of Void is recreating characters. That was the most creative take I've seen of Hiemie the Fishboy on the site (outside of Hiemie, of course), AND HE LOOKED FUCKING HILARIOUS. LOOK AT HIM!!!! The reasoning is ridiculous, yes, but that doesn't change the result.
# 23
Posted:
Mar 21 2011, 01:30 PM
duredhel:
Anya is vurneable and the Orphanage gets real - nice.
There's two problems with your take on Hieme:
1) In crazy world of Anya there are demons so there should be no problem making a furry character - I know that cartoony character's are the harderst to draw in drama way. Then again we never got to see his actual face so he might still be a furry under the mask.
(I think Hieme should be taller though)
2)Like everyone before me said he feels out of place since he just busted in. He feels more like a guy that saw Hieme on the TV or a comics book and decided to he's him - it would be all fogiven if we were to wittness that he is actually invincible as for me
Hiemie:
I enjoy popye joke, but I have hard time portraing all the character's in that universe.
Artwise I have to admit that you have an unique style, and art wise you give a complete and good performance I won't say it's awesome. Colors feels a little too dirty than textured or shaded, and with wonky proportions and perspective it feels like you don't explore - or even don't improve from between battles other than writting and panel layout. Sorry to say, but it feels as if you'd be to maximum use if 2 or 3 artists were drawning pages you set them up to do.
Anya is vurneable and the Orphanage gets real - nice.
There's two problems with your take on Hieme:
1) In crazy world of Anya there are demons so there should be no problem making a furry character - I know that cartoony character's are the harderst to draw in drama way. Then again we never got to see his actual face so he might still be a furry under the mask.
(I think Hieme should be taller though)
2)Like everyone before me said he feels out of place since he just busted in. He feels more like a guy that saw Hieme on the TV or a comics book and decided to he's him - it would be all fogiven if we were to wittness that he is actually invincible as for me
Hiemie:
I enjoy popye joke, but I have hard time portraing all the character's in that universe.
Artwise I have to admit that you have an unique style, and art wise you give a complete and good performance I won't say it's awesome. Colors feels a little too dirty than textured or shaded, and with wonky proportions and perspective it feels like you don't explore - or even don't improve from between battles other than writting and panel layout. Sorry to say, but it feels as if you'd be to maximum use if 2 or 3 artists were drawning pages you set them up to do.
# 22
Posted:
Mar 21 2011, 11:58 AM
Dure: While overall your story was pretty nice, I gotta say I'm more than a little disappointed in the fact that Hiemie was just some guy in a mask. It was a funny take on the character, but with how crazy everything else is, it didn't seem far fetched that there'd be a real fish guy running around in Anya's world. Your Hiemie just wasn't "Hiemie" to me. Still an enjoyable read. Nice pacing, good solid inks. I'm with Qyz when he says the inking seems to suit you better than the colored pencil work.
Hiemie: I could tell you weren't really feelin' this one, but it was still very amusing. Got many good laughs from me, for sure. The pacing was nice, easy to follow. Coloring got a bit messy in spots, but I know you were pressed for time. I think all the gangsta speech is what got me the most. Good stuff, good stuff.
Both are pretty much even to me! Nice work, you two.
Hiemie: I could tell you weren't really feelin' this one, but it was still very amusing. Got many good laughs from me, for sure. The pacing was nice, easy to follow. Coloring got a bit messy in spots, but I know you were pressed for time. I think all the gangsta speech is what got me the most. Good stuff, good stuff.
Both are pretty much even to me! Nice work, you two.
# 21
Posted:
Mar 21 2011, 11:35 AM
Dure: Great work and really solid arc. I think the Hiemie = normal kid in a fish mask could have worked quite well, I actually like the concept. However, I'm going to have to agree with what qyz and monday said. I think partially it has to do with something you said yourself - hiemie doesn't fit well into Anya's story she's got going on, so it seemed really out of place.
Hiemie: Nice Popeye comix. You're very consistent in the stuff you put out, so major props for that. Nothing too special to say about this comic other than it was pretty solid. I'd like to see you try going out of your element more, I think drawing a fight like this one is one way to do it.
Hiemie: Nice Popeye comix. You're very consistent in the stuff you put out, so major props for that. Nothing too special to say about this comic other than it was pretty solid. I'd like to see you try going out of your element more, I think drawing a fight like this one is one way to do it.
# 20
Posted:
Mar 21 2011, 11:22 AM
Dure: I will say this right away, I do prefer the hard inks compared to the pencil and coloring you tend to do. IT PLEASES ME. As for the plot, I really couldn't get into it. I felt like, not only was the fact that you made Hiemie just a dude in a mask kind of a copout to not actually draw a fish-human, the character really felt forced. He just kinda burst in (literally) and made himself comfortable as a plot device. And it was super obvious what he was there for, too. Since Anya went and explained it to herself right away. The ending just... kinda happened to. Well, the fishboy served his purpose, and he was gone. Ultimately, while I enjoyed the art more, I much preferred your plot in your first round. Good job on the complete comic!
Hiemie: I think you're quality faltered a bit here, but your humor excelled! And, if I'm not mistaken, is this the first fight you've done here on the site? It really feels like it. The whole while I read it, I really wanted P2 to spout the "I'll gladly pay you Tuesday for a hamburger today" line, so much! It was a damn funny comic, and the Missy Elliot bicep made me chuckle. As for the quality... I felt while your drawing and inks were good, your colors got way too muddy in some parts, and the needed contrast in certain panels was not there, making it slightly difficult to read
Good job to both of you! It's a close battle!
Hiemie: I think you're quality faltered a bit here, but your humor excelled! And, if I'm not mistaken, is this the first fight you've done here on the site? It really feels like it. The whole while I read it, I really wanted P2 to spout the "I'll gladly pay you Tuesday for a hamburger today" line, so much! It was a damn funny comic, and the Missy Elliot bicep made me chuckle. As for the quality... I felt while your drawing and inks were good, your colors got way too muddy in some parts, and the needed contrast in certain panels was not there, making it slightly difficult to read
Good job to both of you! It's a close battle!
# 19
Posted:
Mar 21 2011, 09:59 AM
Dure that was all cute dark and had little reward storywise. The art was good but personally didn't stand out for me. The use of Heimie was pretty much just another tool for your plot progression which didn't serve the ending too well at all. Because then I'm all like , " Who the fuck is this fucker and why do I care "
If there was a reaction or a moment of catharsis at the end then perhaps the story would be better served perhaps she fights the guy and there was a twist at the end where heimie really was indestructible. That would have done something. But i think this cut off too soon.
Heimie you pulled no less than 5 emotional reactions [see; laugh] out of me. Each page felt like it really was bringing the story forward and I'm literally spinning with ideas on how to fight you properly next time. Your art is getting more solid, which is unfortunate for your opponnent because that is usually your biggest weakness. However, your figures are more informed now and every page felt like a joke i was in on.
Solid work, good job to the both of you.
If there was a reaction or a moment of catharsis at the end then perhaps the story would be better served perhaps she fights the guy and there was a twist at the end where heimie really was indestructible. That would have done something. But i think this cut off too soon.
Heimie you pulled no less than 5 emotional reactions [see; laugh] out of me. Each page felt like it really was bringing the story forward and I'm literally spinning with ideas on how to fight you properly next time. Your art is getting more solid, which is unfortunate for your opponnent because that is usually your biggest weakness. However, your figures are more informed now and every page felt like a joke i was in on.
Solid work, good job to the both of you.
# 18
Posted:
Mar 21 2011, 09:13 AM
Wow. Those were two VERY different comics. I liked both of them equally for different reasons. Great work, both of you.
Duredhel, I really liked your take on Hiemie. I had thought of doing something similar if I had to fight him, but now I can't. Your execution of the idea was a bit darker than mine would've been and it works better that way I think.
Hiemie, that was crazy. I really liked the Popeye parody, the only thing was that Anya and her crew looked so much like the Popeye characters to me that I initially didn't associate them with who they were supposed to be. It was very funny. Did Hiemie spit out watermelon bones? Weirdly genius!
Duredhel, I really liked your take on Hiemie. I had thought of doing something similar if I had to fight him, but now I can't. Your execution of the idea was a bit darker than mine would've been and it works better that way I think.
Hiemie, that was crazy. I really liked the Popeye parody, the only thing was that Anya and her crew looked so much like the Popeye characters to me that I initially didn't associate them with who they were supposed to be. It was very funny. Did Hiemie spit out watermelon bones? Weirdly genius!
# 17
Posted:
Mar 21 2011, 08:35 AM
Yup. For a while I considered doing just a one-shot type of thing because it was so hard fitting Hiemie in Anya's story XD. Hope you don't mind me butchering the char a bit >_<
# 16
Posted:
Mar 21 2011, 08:31 AM
Neato, we did the same amount of pages!
# 15
Posted:
Mar 20 2011, 11:44 PM
Last minute uploading >__<
My net keeps dying, I hope it goes up before 15 minutes pass.
My net keeps dying, I hope it goes up before 15 minutes pass.
# 14
Posted:
Mar 19 2011, 09:44 AM
OOOH This is gonna be a loooong weekend waiting for these matches to go up
# 13
Posted:
Mar 17 2011, 10:11 AM
Hiemie: Aaaand uploaded. Now I don't need to worry about this during my sister's wedding.
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Congratulations! XD
# 12
Posted:
Mar 17 2011, 09:48 AM
Aaaand uploaded. Now I don't need to worry about this during my sister's wedding.
# 11
Posted:
Mar 8 2011, 06:41 PM
hacelo mierda juan diego!!!
# 10
Posted:
Mar 7 2011, 03:24 PM
I expect nothing short of insanity.
# 9
Posted:
Mar 7 2011, 01:17 PM
god these are brutal matchups
# 8
Posted:
Mar 7 2011, 12:52 PM
Way to be thrown way out of your comfort zones, eh? This one is gonna be fun. XD
# 7
Posted:
Mar 7 2011, 11:57 AM
# 6
Posted:
Mar 7 2011, 09:16 AM
Hahaha, omg can't wait for this~
# 5
Posted:
Mar 7 2011, 08:29 AM
Oh wow... how the hell am I gonna fit this into Anya's story arc? XD
Guess it will be fun to figure out.
Guess it will be fun to figure out.
# 4
Posted:
Mar 7 2011, 08:03 AM
SDT Winner's Battle it out for supremacy. Who will win?!
Good luck you two
Good luck you two
# 3
Posted:
Mar 7 2011, 07:54 AM
For fucks sake.
# 2
Posted:
Mar 7 2011, 05:29 AM
Oh SNAP.
# 1
Posted:
Mar 7 2011, 05:14 AM
Oh FUCK.
Tournament Match
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Ended:
Mar 27th, 2011
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Duredhel
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