Gypsy Moth in / Gypsy Moth

Gypsy Moth in — Gypsy Moth

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Revelarts
23 comments
# 10   Posted: Mar 13 2011, 05:53 PM
Beautifully rendered engaging attention to detail!
somewhat intriguing story need more to really draw me in.

alberto311
Artist
374 comments
# 9   Posted: Mar 13 2011, 11:33 AM
thanks Mr Kent more to come with Gypsy Moth vs. The Octavian.

Thanks Kevin. Sound advice.

Thanks anonymous....

Will be definately working on more concise stories, the will be manageable with the page count Bent one..

Gracias RTV.... I suddenly seem to be having trouble sizing my pages correctly... I'm not sure why...sucks.. Will work on balloon and caption placement for next battle.... I have some ideas about the black hoods, we'll skype sometime soon to chat about.... Hasta luego mi compadre.

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 9 2011, 01:30 AM
That;s what i like about ya, captain Melendez. You BB your defaults.

VERY nice lines you got there. Pages are a lil small though, but still sharp.
I agree with Toast on text.  Not sure if you stumbled upon our favourite problem: Not taking in account the dialogue and puzzling to make it  fit while not covering the art.
Left hanging and i wanna see more!  Great set up. I like how yer the first to actually include other members. :D

But i think it's gonna be just you, me and the frequency. lol

Great stuff man.

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 8 2011, 10:00 AM
The art was very well executed, but I didn't get a good idea of where the story was going.

anonymous
91 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 8 2011, 09:20 AM
Great line work and inking as well. You have some much detail in every panel, its wonderful.

Kevin Birtcher
Allfather
289 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 8 2011, 05:06 AM
I like the art, and the story is interesting, albeit confusing since this is only a small piece without a conclusion. My one suggestion for you would be to make all the text boxes free-floating instead of butting up against the edges of your panels.

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 8 2011, 01:15 AM
Alberto I enjoy your line work - and also envy your city design :D Can't wait to read the rest.

alberto311
Artist
374 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 6 2011, 02:00 PM
GOD DAMN IT ROFLQU: Gypsy Moth in Gypsy Moth? That's deep.
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hahaha...wooooopppsss.... kinky though.

btw the pages uploaded...i just had to resize them.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 6 2011, 01:57 PM
Gypsy Moth in Gypsy Moth? That's deep.

alberto311
Artist
374 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 6 2011, 01:44 PM
Thanks again Todd for the battle... Im still trying to develop as a artist... not the complete saga, but more to come...

btw... the uploader said that my pages didn't upload... but the BB is here.... can someone let me know if the pages went through.

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