I was looking forward to this one & loved the shit out of both of these, regardless of their completion.
Sloane's felt a bit more complete artwise & I really liked the space angle & the thought put into it, so I think my vote opted that way a little. Sheldon, your art was on point & the prison stuff was great. Liked the cyborg call back too. It stinks you guys couldn't finish, but I liked the coincidence of the opponent character just popping in on the last page with both. Hope there are continuations, be it as the tourney progresses or in the form of BB.
Charlie vs. Swallow
Critiques & Comments
# 27
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Mar 2 2011, 10:27 PM
# 26
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Mar 1 2011, 10:16 PM
You know Sheldon, if you did finished versions of what you did here, I think you could go pro.
You both did absolutely amazing.... I just wish you finished.
You both did absolutely amazing.... I just wish you finished.
# 25
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Mar 1 2011, 09:43 AM
Sheldon your work speaks for itself! you are an excellent artist, even though all of the panels weren't finished it still looked amazing. Great job!
Craqued, you are definitely on a different level. The trip you took my mind on through you panels are unforgettable; I felt like I was on acid (and I never even touched the stuff lol). Great job!
Craqued, you are definitely on a different level. The trip you took my mind on through you panels are unforgettable; I felt like I was on acid (and I never even touched the stuff lol). Great job!
# 24
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 10:04 PM
Ahahah Sheldon. Man, finished or not, you still have a rad sense of style. I really enjoyed your facial expressions and- as always- your backgrounds. The humor was awesome, really fun comic bro!
Craqued, totally digging your colors and crazy environments. Lots of lovely texture in your linework. I can always appreciate textured linework that doesn't come off as messy. I gave you a slight push ahead because your comic seemed to be the most complete.
Not much to say in terms of critiques, since neither of you really finished your comics. Nice pacing in both entries. Me like.
Craqued, totally digging your colors and crazy environments. Lots of lovely texture in your linework. I can always appreciate textured linework that doesn't come off as messy. I gave you a slight push ahead because your comic seemed to be the most complete.
Not much to say in terms of critiques, since neither of you really finished your comics. Nice pacing in both entries. Me like.
# 23
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 09:39 PM
shelde youre amazing, since youre going to win im stked to see more of charlie!! hes so cuuute AND JEEZ i like seeing your pencils and the inks its cool getting to see how you lay down the bones
thanks for all the nice comments guys!
thanks for all the nice comments guys!
# 22
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 06:13 PM
Sheldon, would have loved to see this shit finished more because goddamn. The self referential humor sort of excuses the cliffhanger ending so I'll let you off for that one. Would have liked to have seen more Swallow in the battle, because fuck yes, women in uniform.
Craqued, I absolutely love this comic and I will mercilessly hunt you down for not finishing it. Really like the abstract futurevibe you've got going on.
Craqued, I absolutely love this comic and I will mercilessly hunt you down for not finishing it. Really like the abstract futurevibe you've got going on.
# 21
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 04:20 PM
Sloane, i must retreat to my nearest church for I have committed the sin of envy. Your ideas, art and overall story were so damn GOOD. This has been a pleasure.
# 20
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 02:04 PM
hey craqued, I always forgot how psychedelic your stuff can be. I always like the feeling of this unsureness from your comics, not in bad way but it's like that feeling of "something aint right". Your designs are very interesting, i like the intestines/brain imagery on the first page. The whole entry makes me remember back time when i was in high school and was learning how intestines work. It's a pretty cool setting. Charlie is a riot in your style. looking forward to see more of your personal work ive followed on tumblrrrrrrrrrrr
sheldon, shame on you, but what you have inked are fantastic, and shel- i mean CHARLIE looks amazing here :PPP I like the setting too, i always envy that fucking brain of yours, it's like i always end up saying how the fuck anyone can come up with THAT/why i didnt think of that kinda stuff ever befroe? blablablah I know you always get complimented all the time but I'll say it anyway, i envy the way you write people dialogue sometimes, maybe because i know it's something that I can't ever do. Anyway, even if they are unfinished pages, they're damn cool. I really wish i could battle you someday
sheldon, shame on you, but what you have inked are fantastic, and shel- i mean CHARLIE looks amazing here :PPP I like the setting too, i always envy that fucking brain of yours, it's like i always end up saying how the fuck anyone can come up with THAT/why i didnt think of that kinda stuff ever befroe? blablablah I know you always get complimented all the time but I'll say it anyway, i envy the way you write people dialogue sometimes, maybe because i know it's something that I can't ever do. Anyway, even if they are unfinished pages, they're damn cool. I really wish i could battle you someday
# 19
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Feb 28 2011, 01:47 PM
lol you went all old school referrence sheldon(eww cyborg)lol. man i wish they was all inked.. was that the wanabego from spaceballs in one of them pages. love the more adult charlie. good stuff.
craqued. awesome stuff love the line work. i was very amused.
i love both but gave the higher points for finished quality to craqued... since i know sheldon is a busy man he still got good marks. but it was unfinished and im just being fair.
craqued. awesome stuff love the line work. i was very amused.
i love both but gave the higher points for finished quality to craqued... since i know sheldon is a busy man he still got good marks. but it was unfinished and im just being fair.
# 18
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 11:51 AM
Man do I ever want to fight Charlie sometime, he is such a cool character.
# 17
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 10:25 AM
SHELDON YOURE AMAZING even if its unfinished your environments and hottotrot Charlie are AMAZING and yea, you are my hero. thanks for fighting meeee~
# 16
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 08:22 AM
Craqued 2 of your pages don't work, please reupload asap so I can put the comics up!
# 15
Posted:
Feb 25 2011, 05:47 PM
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN
# 14
Posted:
Feb 16 2011, 12:21 PM
So excited for this!!!
# 13
Posted:
Feb 15 2011, 07:49 PM
lol shit everything i love will be in this fight... chix robots and a sock puppet.
# 12
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 10:23 AM
Slloooannne, make us proud!!
This is gonna be a great one, so many awesome match ups for round 1, good luck guys!
This is gonna be a great one, so many awesome match ups for round 1, good luck guys!
# 11
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 08:22 AM
This is going to be great! I'll prepare for my mind getting blown
# 10
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 05:32 AM
hahaha sloane draw your butt off lady!!
# 9
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 04:11 AM
Someone had to battle sheldon, and someone had to be swallowed XD
Good Luck - as if you need it XD
Good Luck - as if you need it XD
# 8
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 03:33 AM
AUSTRALIA ULTRAMATCH RAW
# 7
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 01:40 AM
Shit. It's like my first time. All over again.
LET'S ROCK, SLOANE.
LET'S ROCK, SLOANE.
# 6
Posted:
Feb 13 2011, 10:47 PM
OHMYGODTHISISHISTORYRIGHTHERELSDJFLSEJLSJLD!
# 5
Posted:
Feb 13 2011, 10:19 PM
6 years late.
BUT BETTER LATE THAN NEVER. GOOD LUCK.
BUT BETTER LATE THAN NEVER. GOOD LUCK.
# 4
Posted:
Feb 13 2011, 10:02 PM
DAMN. JUST DAMN.
# 3
Posted:
Feb 13 2011, 09:58 PM
this...... amazing.
# 2
Posted:
Feb 13 2011, 09:49 PM
Good luck! This one's gonna be fun
# 1
Posted:
Feb 13 2011, 09:41 PM
shit
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I enjoyed sheldon's panel layouts more since they felt more profesional or rather thought through in sense of composition and merging dialoques and art.