Intro Story / Clock&Friction

Intro Story — Clock&Friction

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beardedMenace
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# 11   Posted: Feb 16 2011, 05:41 AM
I am a man who loves banter.  I'll be keeping an eye on these two, I hope for good things!

Mister Kent
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# 10   Posted: Feb 15 2011, 09:54 PM
It takes place in SHOCK so you know this has to be epic
I love these characters already - much style and I can't wait to fight them!

Kevin Birtcher
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# 9   Posted: Feb 15 2011, 09:21 PM
I Guess I can't count, because I hadn't realized I'd already read most of this through the preview images you were sending my way.  Still, I like the last panel (the only bit I hadn't seen previously) and that there isn't a resolution to the cops outside yet.

London
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# 8   Posted: Feb 14 2011, 11:23 PM
Hmmm alright, well thanks for clarifying on that. Was just curious. I do like them though. It makes me think of Kick-Ass, except they decided to be baddies and they actually got super powers :P

Chia
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# 7   Posted: Feb 14 2011, 05:42 PM
Cat woman would win.

4:00am
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# 6   Posted: Feb 14 2011, 12:28 AM

I'm usually not into comments and replies London  so  screw you for asking a good question....

1.)Quoting the comic   "I'm not saying these guys were the most badass or even ruthless of supervillians."
Besides..it's just the intro dude i don't think you get a full idea of if they are evil or whatever but you should understand they aren't  law abiding citizens

2.)  I said he's in a constant state of superspeed i said he hasn't discovered the full extent of his speed but i never specified that  he was constantly moving at light speed just constantly moving. basically he can travel faster than light but isn't all the time






      Edited Feb 14 2011,  12:54 AM by 4:00am

London
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# 5   Posted: Feb 13 2011, 11:02 PM
I like these guys, the banter is entertaining. Though they don't come across very evil… Maybe thats the point but I just kinda feel a lack of malice in them. Not sure if that makes sense haha. Would be fun to have Tony go up against these two

Also… I know this is Void and you can kind of do whatever you want regardless of everything and whatnot.. But constantly moving faster than light? Isn't light the universal speed limit of sorts, and isn't that pretty much time control as well? Being as the closer you get to the speed of light the slower time goes? I feel like an ass arguing the physics of super villains but its bugging me haha

William_Duel
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# 4   Posted: Feb 13 2011, 10:38 AM
Shock City is more of an in-joke among the veterans of Void.  I have only heard of it in hushed whispers.  

The Bent One
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# 3   Posted: Feb 13 2011, 09:49 AM
These guys make me want to create a superhero just to fight them. Also, I love that more people are using Shock City in their comics... maybe this is the start of something new for VOID

Iketeruguy
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# 2   Posted: Feb 13 2011, 09:47 AM
I really like the designs of these two, but I think Clock's design should be broken up just a little bit more.  Like maybe have some actual black areas at his neck and collar bone area and a few more spots instead of having everything the same dark red.  That's just my opinion obviously and I think that the designs themselves are great.

I like the nerdebate they've got going on.

I like the detail on the backgrounds, the perspective on it is a little wonky but it still looks good.  It's a pain to work out, so I applaud you for committing to it and working on it.  I know you'll be getting even better than this so I'm excited to see more of your battles with these two.

The only other thing worth mentioning (and maybe this will be more evident in part 2) is I noticed Clock's eye's change and I guess that means he's using his power.  I thought that should have been more evident in the intro, especially since Friction's power was so pronounced.  

Great work!  

jho
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# 1   Posted: Feb 13 2011, 04:10 AM
love these two and the banters, fuck man cant wait to see more of em!

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