Losing Control / Edgar Grimsette

Losing Control — Edgar Grimsette

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Sid_Bane
Artist
53 comments
# 11   Posted: Jan 11 2011, 01:48 AM
Thanks for the feedback. I will try to keep in mind some of the advice about panel size and such.

Sid_Bane
Artist
53 comments
# 10   Posted: Jan 6 2011, 08:02 PM
William_Duel: You know I'm staring at the sixth page, second panel...and I can't figure out what's going on there.  Someone please explain it to me.  I see teeth.
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It's supposed to be him smelling the blood on his fingers. I tried to represent something that would be indicative of a strong scent visually, but I can see where something like that can come across as visually confusing.

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 9   Posted: Jan 6 2011, 04:34 PM
Will: it's his mouth, and nose. he's holding up his blood covered hand and smelling the blood. I think.

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 8   Posted: Jan 6 2011, 04:02 PM
You know I'm staring at the sixth page, second panel...and I can't figure out what's going on there.  Someone please explain it to me.  I see teeth.

PONBIKI
Artist
185 comments
# 7   Posted: Jan 3 2011, 03:40 PM
excellent.. i know the feeling of losing control and its actually kinda cool but coming out of it is the best calming feeling in the world... i really dig this comic keep it up, and i did go back and read your battle you asked to be read. yeah im cool! peace

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 6   Posted: Jan 3 2011, 02:38 PM
This was a very interesting comic. As usual, the writing is excellent. I'm not sure how hot I am on the blank figures, but the coloring fits you style well. You might be able to expand the panels to help with the mood of the story, but this was very intriguing. I can't wait to see where you are going with this character.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 3 2011, 04:05 AM
MUSIC MAKE YOU LOSE CONTROL, MUSIC MAKE YOU LOSE CONTROL

Cracking Skulls
Artist
354 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 2 2011, 10:32 PM
Niiice. Can't wait to read it.

Orion
Artist
224 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 2 2011, 09:36 PM
ooooh. Can't wait to see what the old dog...wolf...fox...um...dude back in the stories.

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 2 2011, 09:36 PM
This is probably going to be awesome : D

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 2 2011, 09:22 PM
It's awesome to see you doing stuff again! I can't wait!

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