Anya vs. Todd Susser

Anya vs. Todd Susser

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Zest
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# 24   Posted: Jan 21 2011, 09:43 PM
Wow, guys, this was a really entertaining story. I can't wait to see the next part! Duredhel, your pencils looked great, but for some reason your font was very pixelated. I had an issue with mine when I didn't use bicubic sampling, perhaps that might help smooth it out in the future. And Mister Kent, I feel like a little bit more line variation in certain panels (top of page 11, for example) will make your art really pop. Both of you guys had a great script and snappy dialogue, and even though this is my first time reading your characters, I'm really intrigued to see more.

Angie
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# 23   Posted: Jan 21 2011, 04:12 PM
If he did the text in Photoshop it can be fixed by going up to the toolbar. Next to the font and font size, there's a dropdown menu. If it's on "None" the text will look like ass. "Strong" or "Smooth" usually looks pretty nice. But that's only if Dure's text was done in PS, for other programs I wouldn't know.

William_Duel
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# 22   Posted: Jan 21 2011, 04:06 PM
Just an immediate thing that comes to mind, Dure's text needs some antialiasing or something, it's very pixel-y and I find it distracting.

Angie
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# 21   Posted: Jan 21 2011, 11:31 AM
haha no worries, I just wanted to make sure there wasn't a bug.

cultmasterflex
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# 20   Posted: Jan 21 2011, 11:03 AM
this was cool and jus so u kno im holding my breath for the conclusion so get crackin

Mister Kent
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# 19   Posted: Jan 21 2011, 10:59 AM
To Angie: Oooh Yeah I did them a bit at a time - that's probably why! Sorry - I didn't realize it would do that

It feels cathartic to see the story finally up here! Dure, your art is gorgeous as always. Thanks for collaboration!


      Edited Jan 21 2011,  11:01 AM by Mister Kent

Fred v2.0.1
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# 18   Posted: Jan 21 2011, 10:58 AM
Generic Diner is the place where I go every day to eat my generic lunch before my generic classes!
And god, that is some georgious art you make.
Good job guys, I'm eager to see that conclusion :)

Angie
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# 17   Posted: Jan 21 2011, 08:41 AM
I'm about to put this up but I have a question for Mister Kent. Are you uploading all your pages at one time or are you uploading a page at a time? Because I just got 23 messages saying you uploaded a comic at random intervals so I'm trying to figure out why I got 23 messages about you uploading haha

InkyBrain
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# 16   Posted: Jan 20 2011, 03:44 PM
Good luuuuuuuuuuuuck!

Duredhel
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# 15   Posted: Jan 20 2011, 01:35 PM
Uploaded :O! Sucks I couldn't do colour, but I gotta go get on a plane now :O!

alberto311
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# 14   Posted: Jan 20 2011, 11:50 AM
Good luck you two... Mr. Kent I'll see you on the 1st.

Mister Kent
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# 13   Posted: Jan 20 2011, 10:46 AM
Make no mistake though, it'll still be spectacular
Dure + MK = AWESOMETOWN

Mister Kent
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# 12   Posted: Jan 20 2011, 09:55 AM
*sigh* I have to rescan the original pages, as my files are lost
I'll have things pretty well tidy by tonight, though :(

Orion
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# 11   Posted: Jan 20 2011, 09:01 AM
Pins and Needles guys pin and needles. :)

cultmasterflex
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# 10   Posted: Jan 20 2011, 08:35 AM
good luvk u too i hope everything is well

ledes87
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# 9   Posted: Jan 17 2011, 09:33 AM
Dure: ¿Es posible que podamos ver dinosaurios en su parque de dinosaurios?

PD: ¡¡¡Lucha fuerte macho!!!

Good luck you two!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Orion
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# 8   Posted: Jan 1 2011, 02:25 PM
It'll be worth it I am sure. :)

Mister Kent
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# 7   Posted: Dec 28 2010, 09:54 PM
Still can't wait~!

      Edited Dec 29 2010,  09:05 AM by Mister Kent

Mister Kent
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# 6   Posted: Dec 28 2010, 09:54 PM
No prob :D

Duredhel
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# 5   Posted: Dec 28 2010, 09:48 PM
Had to get an extension because I'm going back home to Peru earlier than I had anticipated >__>

      Edited Dec 28 2010,  10:21 PM by Duredhel

Ten Dead Kings
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# 4   Posted: Dec 24 2010, 07:21 PM
Well now ain't this gonna be INTERESTING HMM?

Angie
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# 3   Posted: Dec 23 2010, 09:41 AM
Nice to see you back Dure! Good luck you two!

E.W. Schneider
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# 2   Posted: Dec 23 2010, 09:23 AM
Hey, welcome back Durd. Hope to see something great from the both of you.

Wolcik
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492 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 23 2010, 08:24 AM
Bitchin' XD Two long complex stories comin' up XD

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Jan 27th, 2011
Votes Cast: 25
Page Views: 1185
Winner: Duredhel
 

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