Under New Management: Finals / Penelope vs. Miette

Under New Management: Finals — Penelope vs. Miette

by Dr.Salt

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by squid

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William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 32   Posted: Jan 20 2019, 05:55 AM
One of my personal favorites.  To me this is one of the best and most creative comics on Void.  People may disagree but it's still a sequential series of panels telling a story in a choose your own adventure that's clever and well made.  And it is sized perfectly for monitors.  We no longer have a record of who won Best of 2010 but I'd be very disappointed if it wasn't this comic.  I am a fan of many of Dr. Salt's comics as I felt they often pushed convention.

This is the year 2019 and I declare this the Bandersnatch of Void.  

Slagglle
Artist
61 comments
# 31   Posted: Oct 2 2010, 02:16 PM
http://entervoid.com/bestof2009.php

Consider yourself enlightened

alberto311
Artist
374 comments
# 30   Posted: Oct 2 2010, 01:28 PM
I still don't see it... enlighten me.

HAVEN!
Artist
51 comments
# 29   Posted: Oct 2 2010, 11:10 AM
cool!

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 28   Posted: Sep 30 2010, 04:34 AM
There.

alberto311
Artist
374 comments
# 27   Posted: Sep 30 2010, 04:29 AM
Where?

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 26   Posted: Sep 29 2010, 05:45 PM
alberto311: My vote for best  void comic of the year.... congrats... Btw .... that would be cool if there was a best comic of the year award from the community.....Just thinking..
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there is

alberto311
Artist
374 comments
# 25   Posted: Sep 29 2010, 03:52 PM
My vote for best  void comic of the year.... congrats... Btw .... that would be cool if there was a best comic of the year award from the community.....Just thinking..

squid
Artist
421 comments
# 24   Posted: Sep 28 2010, 06:33 PM
way too awesome!

Coatl
Artist
320 comments
# 23   Posted: Sep 28 2010, 05:06 PM
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

amazingdavid
Artist
441 comments
# 22   Posted: Sep 28 2010, 12:36 PM
You sir are the Chris Ware of Void...except funnier and less asinine

Fred
Artist
550 comments
# 21   Posted: Sep 28 2010, 08:47 AM
Haaa, I love that kind of things! Greatly entertaining indeed, I particularly liked the bonus rpg XD

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 20   Posted: Sep 28 2010, 08:00 AM
And I don't think it fails as a comic though it really stretches out the definition of what a comic is, but you do have a narrative formed by panels though in this case we have multiple stories.

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 19   Posted: Sep 28 2010, 07:58 AM
Well I liked the scrolling aspect of the comic which is why I rated it so highly.  it works perfectly for what it is.  A lot of times people tend to incorrectly size things especially on other sites so you have to read a comic section by section and it's annoying.  But the scrolling works here as well as the open amount of space because it prevents you from being spoiled as to how the other paths end.  So to this end I did not mind the scrolling.

Fetus Man
Artist
94 comments
# 18   Posted: Sep 28 2010, 06:43 AM
Hahaha, now that was fun, reminds me of activities in Highlights magazine,except this one ends with goofus and gallant baked on the couch.  Great work Dr.S, you've got a very charming style.  While some complained about scrolling, i enjoyed it, mainly for the fact that i couldn't be spoiled by seeing the next panel.  Good stuff!

Squid, sorry :c

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 17   Posted: Sep 28 2010, 06:43 AM
Fails as a comic, I guess, but everything else about it is perfect!

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 16   Posted: Sep 28 2010, 04:33 AM
ALMOST reminded me of Ultimate Dude Tourney finale...

Though Salt did turn in something completed, even if initial looks are deceiving.


Salt: Enjoyed it. Hard to read (wish i could just use the hand tool to move like in Photoshop... uguu~) but really nice concept and execution. I approve :3

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 15   Posted: Sep 27 2010, 11:39 PM
Awesome times, sorry you defulted Squid, but you know I can't stay mad at you <3

Salt, this was fantastic, as were all your comics in UNM.  I know you want crits but I find it way too hard to crit someone as stylized and out of the box as you.  Make more comics.

Rara/Ipsen
Artist
21 comments
# 14   Posted: Sep 27 2010, 11:25 PM
Salt: WHOA MAN, that was really a neat idea! Great work! Can't say much except what's been said about how much all that scrolling was a pain in the ass. Still great, though! Definitely an Entertainment 10!

That is one of my favorite EnterVOID quotes: "I'M DEAD. DEAD FROM DRUGS". LOL <3

Squid: Awwman, default! But you've never failed to entertain me, so I can't be hatin' on you, bby. I look forward to your future comics!

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 13   Posted: Sep 27 2010, 11:10 PM
Salt you are magnificent - I enjoyed ev'ry panel (especially that one part, with the things - I can't say cuz its a spooooiler!)

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 12   Posted: Sep 27 2010, 10:44 PM
Oh karma you terrific bitch.

SQUIDMAN: Hey, tough luck. For what its worth, I've actually really enjoyed the comics you have done with Miette. I think the approach of losing is just a funny one. I hope you get back to do comics soon.

Dr. Salt: This is very cool. I have no complaints, because it's a really cool idea and an interesting take on the choose your own adventure format. I actually think I'll have to try something like this one year for a 24 Hour Comics Day when I get my tablet back.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 11   Posted: Sep 27 2010, 10:23 PM
It's pretty damned rare I will ever give anyone a 10 in anything but you definitely earned one from me in creativity. I think the only thing that really hurt you here is the format. It's a great idea and I enjoyed all the outcomes but having to scroll all over creation for each outcome kind of sucked. But them's the breaks and I can't think of any way you could have done this without resorting to flash since it would have been awesome if you could have clicked on the outcome and it would have navigated you to the appropriate panel on the page. But I also understand that the site doesn't support flash so I didn't count that against you. It would be well worth trying that sometime outside of Void though and see what you can do with it.

http://scottmccloud.com/1-webcomics/index.html has some cool ass ideas. Since you do a lot of things outside of what happens in traditional comics I'd love to see you try your hand at that kind of stuff.

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 10   Posted: Sep 27 2010, 10:22 PM
Hahahahaha oh my, that was really creative : D

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 9   Posted: Sep 27 2010, 10:13 PM
Amazing.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 8   Posted: Sep 26 2010, 04:30 PM
Salt, this is the one time where it's very appropriate for you to have upload issues haha I will forward your page to Toast.

squid
Artist
421 comments
# 7   Posted: Sep 26 2010, 04:26 PM
I failed, sorry.

Dr.Salt
Artist
96 comments
# 6   Posted: Sep 26 2010, 12:29 PM
I'm having upload problems, so I've emailed Wei and Angie.

alberto311
Artist
374 comments
# 5   Posted: Sep 25 2010, 08:52 AM
Almost there. Looking forward to this.

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 4   Posted: Sep 21 2010, 01:26 AM
aw yeah.  good luck!!!!!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 3   Posted: Sep 20 2010, 07:19 AM
Good luck, you guys!

squid
Artist
421 comments
# 2   Posted: Sep 20 2010, 06:53 AM
what. I have to do ANOTHER one?

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 1   Posted: Sep 20 2010, 05:23 AM
I had a pretty good feeling it was gonna end up going down something like this. Kick some ass, you twoes.

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