ROFL; DAMN THOSE HANDS! I thought I had gotten rid of that during summer...
Alberto; You're one to talk, mister black 'n' white cowboy!
Michael; Yeah, the textures didn't come out quite like I intended them...
Hiemie; NO.
Mister Kent; Seems unanimous I should work on anatomy, then.
thank you all for nice comments, I'll try to keep all that in mind

Fern; Looks like you captured the heart of the second half of voters, congratulations man!

LeFred - Very interesting new character. I enjoyed your limited color scheme, and I think you did quite well with the shading and I also liked the story. Some of the figures were a little rough, so I'd recommend practicing those a bit. But I definitely want to see more from you!

Fern - You've improved a lot since last I saw you I loved the colors, and the details you put in your scenes and backgrounds. Sometimes the lines are a little too thick for the details, which is something that can muddle up a panel. Distant shots of characters might benefit from thinner lines. I never get tired of those fishies. That underwater scene was really great, and I'm glad you're back.

Fred: Please Stay

Fern: Keep up the good work.

Fern
I like what you are doing artistically. The brush stroke does seem very large however to the relative size of the characters, making it kind of distracting. I would encourage you to try to use some vanishing points as well. I do like the saturated colors and I think that works well with your style.

Frederick
I like the color scheme, personality, and pacing of the story. The bar does look a little sparse, especially for a place where we spend the entire comic. I would start experimenting with perspective as well. I wasn't a big fan of the textures either maybe try something else.

Good job guys....

Fred More colors

Fern less colors

thats all for now.

Fredddd, thanks for da fight too I loved your colours. With regards to my colours, they were done FAST and during the process I realized how much I CAN'T colour. Just picking the right colours that go nicely with each other... Uhhhh

RoflQuiyfQBdkSBfLOL: Cheeeeers for critique! the action shots were an experiment (the usual excuse when something doesn't work out very well and you're like on a crit at uni). I did some half-research looking at funny perspectives, but I know it didn't quite work very well. At least they do look quite DYNAMIC.

With regards to monsters, I agree, I should have. No excuses here on my end

AND IM HAPPY TO BE BACK TOO HOPEFULLY DIS TIME I WONT VANISH OFF THE FACE OF VOID FOR TOO LONG. I think that improvingwise, void is really given me a lot. At least when I compare the first few comics with newer ones eh eh eh

Mr. Flintstone - I loved the selective coloring choice, very nice. I'm really enamored with the speech bubble connection between Lophii and Lucy you did. Very interesting way to make her abilities shown without being all action lines about it. You need to work more on your anatomy, your body types are somewhat inconsistent and you don't give enough size to your hands. But, all in all, it was super to see you start of Lucy with a good story and I hope to see more from you soon.

Ferngully - I really liked how you had someone actually expression revulsion at your character's scars, that's something that is usually taken for granted in people's stories. I like how you handle faces and you've got some decent anatomy working on you, although it needs some tightening up, specifically action shots like when they leap into Lophii's fish-mouth. But, that's perspective and foreshortening and that takes time to learn.

When the monster attack happened, I think more detail and care to making those panels clearer would have really helped, because it's fairly unclear first time around. I think your coloring is messy, but I can tell the direction you're going with it and it's a cool direction. Try and take a little more care when you're coloring with it though, it'll make all the difference. I'm glad you're back in the ring again and I hope you do more comics soon.

Fern, I dig what you tried with the colors here, but it comes out messy at times. Though page six is absolutly glorious, I think. I found the convienient placement of the school's foundations quite funny. Thanks for the fight!

Fred, you suck, go back to kiddie school and learn how to use crayons.

Cherubas, so you're into THAT kinda thing, uh?

Fred, your first Mortimerr comic had a male kissing a male. This one has a female groping a female. Please make an elephant character.

I'll give real reviews later.

Uploadeeeed....
No thumbs cos I already had enough of it
You used to be able to view the files once you uploaded them to see if they are working, is that not possible anymore?

I'm now gonna be paranoid that I messed somehting up...

Uploaded and sent the thumbs, there doesn't seem to be any problem. Doing it right away because it might be quite the busy weekend for me...

Good luck, Fern! I'm happy you find Lucy to be a fun challenge, she sure is for me XD
I really had fun drawing Miss Formes, such a pretty woman.

...I am just realising how difficult to write someone that knows what everyone else thinks AND be convincing AND make it interesting!

It's well challenging. I am loving this.

Nice to see you back in the saddle so soon le Fred! Good luck you two!

This battle is gonna be awesome!

Nice to see you back at it. Best wishes on the battle.

Good luck you two!

And Le Fred, I really like Lucy

AAAAW YEAAAH!
Lets rock this joint and rock it well!