Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 3 / Salvatore Galactore vs. Six and the Hat

Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 3 — Salvatore Galactore vs. Six and the Hat

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by wade

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Shojin
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# 7   Posted: Sep 5 2010, 09:51 PM
@ Jim: I love your stories as always, Salvatore is a fun character and I'm always looking forward to what he'll do next.  Though, I feel like this time it wasn't as strong as your last two stories, but I chalk that up to the one week deadline and stuff.

@ Wade:  Major improvement from the last two stories you did.  I'm glad you got to finish your work this time around, makes it easier to follow through everything.  The hat is quite the troublemaker and scary as well.  I hope you continue Six and the Hat's story and keep up the good work.

Fred v2.0.1
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# 6   Posted: Aug 31 2010, 04:46 PM
Wade, great to see some finished stuff! The story was nice, though a bit circular (we know he thinks he's evil from the first time he said it)
Ballon tails would be nice?

Jim, Counselling is a sure way to go, very nice as always.

JimValid
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# 5   Posted: Aug 31 2010, 02:07 AM
Oh my god, Wade. What the hell? XD
Punchlines aside, it's so good to see some nice, polished work from you. This contribution far surpasses your previous entries, well done, man! I hope to see more like this from you in the future.
You portrayed Salvo beautifully, I love all the gags about his niceness like the key to the city thing. Pure gold!

I too look forward to some critique; it's still early days for voting though, I'm sure the comments will flow soon enough.

wade
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# 4   Posted: Aug 30 2010, 09:49 PM
I think you captured the dynamic between the two perfectly, Jim!  I'm also digging the mouths you drew for the hat.  Ice cream and old lady joke ftw!

I'm curious as to what everyone thinks of my last page.  Do you think it was necessary or should I have just ended on the punchline (nonna)?

I felt like a needed a page to wrap up the story and provide some closure.

      Edited Jul 3 2013,  03:10 AM by wade

wade
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# 3   Posted: Aug 29 2010, 11:58 PM
Uploaded looks like I needed every second for this one.  Can't wait to see your side, Jim.  I loved drawing Salvo.

JimValid
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# 2   Posted: Aug 29 2010, 12:34 PM
Pages uploaded and thumbnails sent. Looking forward to your entry, Wade :)

E.W. Schneider
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# 1   Posted: Aug 23 2010, 01:10 PM
Hey, hey, alright! Let's see some good god damn comicing here!

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Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Sep 5th, 2010
Votes Cast: 24
Page Views: 879
Winner: JimValid
 

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