Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 2 / Ridley von Clayborne vs. Linsey Pescion

Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 2 — Ridley von Clayborne vs. Linsey Pescion

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Blinkspeed
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# 24   Posted: Aug 22 2010, 06:31 PM
cool comic Ridley! short, sweet, and to the point. was clever of you to continue off of Slagglle's entry, can't wait to see more of your comics!

Runic
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# 23   Posted: Aug 19 2010, 10:50 PM
@Shojin Hah! Thanks! I was actually wondering when somebody was going to catch that! The punch thing with Linsey's face.

Shojin
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# 22   Posted: Aug 19 2010, 10:08 PM
@Runic: Love the comic.  Everything has pretty much been covered here.  Except i feel like the action where she punched her looked awkward because the action of her swing does not match up with the action of the head/body of Linsey.  Her head should have been turned in the direction the punch had been thrown.  Other than that, nice work.  Hope to you what you'll do in the next round.

@ Slagglle:  I hope you'll put up a BB of the fight.  Good luck on your future battles.

Fred v2.0.1
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# 21   Posted: Aug 19 2010, 05:17 PM
Sure the story was short and not too developed for now, but quite entertaining, I must say! Love the second panel, last page. She screams of badassery.

alberto311
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# 20   Posted: Aug 17 2010, 03:33 PM
Good job Runic.. everything has pretty much been covered... good luck in the next round.

beardedMenace
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# 19   Posted: Aug 17 2010, 07:13 AM
Runic - Props for having such a rich, full comic done again.  Keep doin what you're doin, cause it's working!  Unfortunately it came at the price of story, which admittedly wasn't terrible.  I do appreciate the nod to Slag's previous comic.  Solid work!!

Slaggle - Bummer, but if this means you're free to really give it your all, I'm all for it.

trickstersGambit
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# 18   Posted: Aug 17 2010, 02:49 AM
Aaah Slagglle. Sorry to see you default.

RUNIC: I love the selective use of colour, and the grey scale. You did a fantastic job. There's a little bit of a perspective issue on page two frame two but that's about the only nit-picky thing(artwise) I can think of right now. Good job picking up where her last left off. It looks like it could have ended a little further on, but I like it as is anyway. Keep on trucking *fistpump* I'm loving your work~

Phill
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# 17   Posted: Aug 16 2010, 12:53 PM
Dammit Slagglle! I had such high hopes for you in this tournament!


Runic: OK, second battle... first I have to say, be aware of your perspective and how characters are affected by it, it looked like your characters turned into Chibi's whenever you zoomed out for a wide angle shot, don't do that! Perspective is a fickle mistress, so don't try to cheat her or you'll wind up with an awkward looking comic. The story... well it wasn't bad, standard void battle affair. I really hope you push yourself further in this next round.

William_Duel
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# 16   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 11:06 PM
This was funny in a random sort of way.  I love how crisp and clean this comic felt at times.  Though I found the painterly effects at times to be of contrast to that ideal.  Colors choices, while I'm not an expert, I find them odd at times and interesting at other points.  I guess that's more of an experimental thing so I guess I can only give vague thoughts there.  You showed me the first page before which I thought was great, those steam effects are great and I love those.  I may have to bug you  and ask you how you did them some other time.  Page 4, Ridley's proportions, basically her legs look really wierd in that top panel.  I'd watch out for that.  Overall I liked it, though a bit short, considering the deadline and the quality though, it was great.  

Slaglle, it's unfortunate but you definitely wowed people the first round, so I hope to see some kickass comics from you soon.

Slagglle
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# 15   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:51 PM
And this certainly was half a battle.

Runic
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# 14   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:50 PM
Thanks angieness! =D Helpful for sure because I was really unsure if I was laying in too thick with my colors/tones.  Now I know. And you know what they say? Knowing is half the battle!

Angie
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# 13   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:36 PM
I know about the short deadline so I'm gonna cut you some slack for the bgs, I do think you should lay off on things like blur though for clarity sake. I think the comic was a lot of fun and I like the way you draw the characters, you have a fun style! One thing I'd like to see you work on is your toning. Overall everything feels like it's kind of one overall tone so it kind of makes your coloring look muddy. There's rarely a true light light or dark dark, you just have a lot of medium tones.

Charlie
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# 12   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:21 PM
The cool panel makes me laugh for some reason, I really like it. This is a cool comic though dude I like what you did with it. TO THE NEXT ROUND YOU GO! I hope to see you there (if I win my round)

Angie
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# 11   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:17 PM
Awww you guys are breaking my heart. I'll toss this up then.

Runic
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# 10   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:17 PM
= ( !
Aw man... I was on pins and needles all week!
Sorry Slagglle...

Slagglle
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# 9   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:15 PM
Nope

Angie
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# 8   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:13 PM
Are you going to submit what you have?

Slagglle
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# 7   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:04 PM
I've got next to nothing to submit. Sorry everyone. I will make this up to you Runic.

Runic
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# 6   Posted: Aug 14 2010, 09:43 PM
Uploaded my pages. No problems. Will send thumbnails in a bit.

Angie
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# 5   Posted: Aug 14 2010, 10:17 AM
Very excited about this one!

Nachte
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# 4   Posted: Aug 12 2010, 06:53 PM
Good luck! :D

Cherubas
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# 3   Posted: Aug 9 2010, 08:51 AM
Gotta say I'm looking forward to it too. I'm officially a Slagglle fan, but Runic put out some pretty solid work in the first round so I'm looking to see some fireworks here.

Charlie
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# 2   Posted: Aug 9 2010, 08:47 AM
good luck guys!

Qyzex
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# 1   Posted: Aug 9 2010, 05:44 AM
Seriously looking forward to this one! Good luck, you two!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Aug 22nd, 2010
Votes Cast: 36
Page Views: 980
Winner: Runic

 

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