The Pig vs. Wynn

The Pig vs. Wynn

by Hiemie

51.1%
1260 points
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by JAZ

48.9%
1205 points
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JAZ
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114 comments
# 23   Posted: Mar 31 2010, 01:26 AM
Jack Hates You: JAZ, I really really didn't like this entry at all.
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Me either, I'm surprised no one's said that sooner.
I did it in a day, and that pretty much guaranteed it to be shit.
*shrug* Still, I regret nothing. Life<Void.

Phill
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895 comments
# 22   Posted: Mar 29 2010, 11:40 PM
Gonna make this quick

Hiemie: The bad thing is I didn't fully understand a few of the jokes. The good thing is that I really liked how you set up that power for Pig rather than just having it emerge at the last minute. You should work on the text like you mentioned, brush letters would work for moments where you want your character to sound really creepy.

Jaz: For a last minute entry, this was pretty good. I do see that you burnt out quite easily here. I really hope you do more battles after this with a longer deadline, you can make some really good comics when you put your best into it. This comic however isn't your best.




Vote went to hiemie, but I hope the finals are as good as this round.

JoshuaEliGilley
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462 comments
# 21   Posted: Mar 29 2010, 03:54 PM
PIG FTW.
HAHA the pig snuggling on Wynn whilst burning him was the greatness. Hilarious characterizations as usual. Lots to enjoy in here. GOGOGO WIN IT ALL!

JAZ,
Glad you did something, impressive for the last day! Left me feeling neutral and I wanted to see pig stabbed or something, I got a couple chuckles though.

Jack
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225 comments
# 20   Posted: Mar 28 2010, 09:08 PM
JAZ, I really really didn't like this entry at all. I mean, it's better than a default, yes, but that doesn't make it good. It's sloppier than it is simple, it's more gimmicky than it is original, and the awkward and jilted rhyming scheme combined with the choppy art made this a really tough read. The concept of doing an illustrated book in lieu of a comic is something we've seen in the SDT before, it's a fine idea, but this was still poorly executed, and I understand your situation in doing this. I'm glad that you made it, don't get me wrong: This is infinitely better than a default, but it's miles away from good.

JAZ
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114 comments
# 19   Posted: Mar 24 2010, 12:45 PM
Yeah, sorry guys, I’m a lazy bastard and didn’t do anything until the day before.  
But hey, I figured it would be better than a default.

Charlie
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# 18   Posted: Mar 23 2010, 03:11 PM
I voted equally for both, I did like both of the entries =). I thought Jaz yours was really good but near the end the rhyming lost its flow, but regardless it is a cool idea and glad you turned something in for this. I enjoyed your comic as well Heimie (of course!) and I was glad to see in a way that you didn't end the comic the same way as you did your previous ones on the last page, which I think is nice.

Both of you guys did good!

luniara
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528 comments
# 17   Posted: Mar 23 2010, 02:15 PM
Jaz, Very creative and full of quality. I adore the textures and the linework you used. I agree with Nachte on your general execution of the story though.

Heimie, where do you come up with these random ways to kill ppl? LOL! I didn't find it too sloppy artwork wise. In general, it fits your art and you always pull it off well in the end.

Hiemie
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511 comments
# 16   Posted: Mar 23 2010, 12:41 PM
Hey, thanks guys, the sloppy text has a reason. I wanted to try brushed lettering. It didn't work. I'll stick to tech pens for text from now on.

Nachte
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# 15   Posted: Mar 23 2010, 12:00 PM
Jaz: The idea and execution were excellent in this battle, I really love the texture you've got and the style really feels like it walked right out of a childrens book. Overall the quality was impressive, but I feel the rhyming fell short and the end seemed somehow flat. I was expecting more of a finality like an actual murder, but I can understand you were trying to keep it light hearted and children's story like.

Hiemie: Seems a little messier in the beginning but it cleans up in the end and I agree your handwriting can get a bit out there. Not much to say, the accidental death was handled well and it was an entertaining read, I got a good chuckle. I feel bad for lack of critique but you're in your element with the SDT.

sixtem
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# 14   Posted: Mar 23 2010, 11:54 AM
Jaz- It may have been last minute, but I thought your idea and execution were pretty creative. I think if you'd had the time to polish the rhyme and spend on the artwork, it would've worked really well.

Hiemie- You are the master of coincidental deaths in these tourneys. The 8 souls in a bag thing was hilarious, and I love the expressions you use. I'm glad you stick with all traditional media, sometimes the dialogue looks a little messy, but the style is very fun and consistent. Only thing that bugged me was that the art seemed sloppier than your usual stuff. Still, solid comic.

JAZ
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114 comments
# 13   Posted: Mar 22 2010, 10:51 PM
UPLOADED >=I

JAZ
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114 comments
# 12   Posted: Mar 22 2010, 09:44 PM
Ahahah, I guess I'll have to pull something out of my ass just for you Carlito.

carlito
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375 comments
# 11   Posted: Mar 22 2010, 07:59 PM
Jaz, I did that fanart for you just now, before this fight, in cause you really DO default
and I don't want to talk to you for awhile. haha.

Darius Corry
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426 comments
# 10   Posted: Mar 22 2010, 02:48 PM
Man , this is definitely a big deal.

Hiemie
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511 comments
# 9   Posted: Mar 21 2010, 10:30 AM
Aaand uploaded.

JAZ
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114 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 18 2010, 01:28 PM
Phillip C: It's going to be really really tough to chose between these two characters.
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It'll probably be easier than you think =I

Phill
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895 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 17 2010, 12:08 PM
Hiemie, you're a real powerhouse when it comes to these tournaments, just don't underestimate this round. Jaz, don't burn out on this round, go for broke! It's going to be really really tough to chose between these two characters.

JoshuaEliGilley
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462 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 17 2010, 08:59 AM
A PIG FOR THE WYNN!!!!!!!

amazingdavid
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441 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 17 2010, 08:15 AM
I wanna see some Jaz hands mother fuckers!!!

carlito
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375 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 16 2010, 08:54 PM
TAKE IT ALL JAZ!!! PUT IN THE WORK!!!

Qyzex
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670 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 16 2010, 10:06 AM
:D


8D


YEAH. YEAH. YEAHYEAHYEAHYEAHYEAH!

King_Pong
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601 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 16 2010, 09:57 AM
Keep it up hiemie. GO FOR THE GOLDD DDD.

luniara
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528 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 16 2010, 05:35 AM
The Pigs out the bag! Oh wait....
G'luck, Boyos!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Mar 29th, 2010
Votes Cast: 51
Page Views: 1570
Winner: Hiemie
 

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