GODDAMN. you guys rule I aint critting shit this was amazing.
I will break down my scores a bit, Dave i preferred your art and your story was more dynamic, that segway to the sdt arena was epic. Perca I liked all the little creative extras like the action figs. and the elimination chart and xtra NPCs/cameos/etc..
Both of you bring so much life to your characters. Champion effort and execution here.
Both of you are truly a triple threat of writing+drawing+design.
oh so slight nod to Perca for more consistent quality and aforementioned creative extras.
Bear vs. Ethel Chu
Critiques & Comments
# 39
Posted:
Feb 10 2010, 04:33 PM
# 38
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 08:43 PM
Angie...yes..you are very right...
Next battle I will slow slow slow...down
Next battle I will slow slow slow...down
# 37
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 08:41 PM
I'll start out by saying this was the only comic this round I gave equal scores to, you both had a lot going on here.
Perca-I think you don't need me to tell you not to kill yourself doing a thousand pages haha a million pages aren't always necessary to win battles and I think your entry would have been just as strong with 10 pages. I enjoyed the simple style and you had a great story here. The only thing I'd suggest is your linewidths were all kind of a same, but I imagine that was because this was all made with the intention of being colored.
David-I really enjoyed the action here, it was solid and dynamic and easy to read. I think the only thing that really bothered me was the lettering, it was difficult to read at times, I think just slowing down on it just a tad would have made a big difference.
Perca-I think you don't need me to tell you not to kill yourself doing a thousand pages haha a million pages aren't always necessary to win battles and I think your entry would have been just as strong with 10 pages. I enjoyed the simple style and you had a great story here. The only thing I'd suggest is your linewidths were all kind of a same, but I imagine that was because this was all made with the intention of being colored.
David-I really enjoyed the action here, it was solid and dynamic and easy to read. I think the only thing that really bothered me was the lettering, it was difficult to read at times, I think just slowing down on it just a tad would have made a big difference.
# 36
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 07:06 PM
You're both monsters and I will eat your brains to gain your superpowers.
That said, this was a great matchup. The stories were almost polar opposites especially when it came to Bear. But this was a great read from both of you and it's hard to say one way or the other. Truly a clash of Titans. Scary monsters there be out there.
But I think my favorite line of all is "Calmness Brother Bear Calmness!"
Oh and though I said this in Barata's battle, yeah Perca I don't like the lines on their own though I was told you had trouble uploading the color. Well even with my tiny miniscule gripe, it pales in comparison to the rest of this Herculean effort. Monsters I say.
That said, this was a great matchup. The stories were almost polar opposites especially when it came to Bear. But this was a great read from both of you and it's hard to say one way or the other. Truly a clash of Titans. Scary monsters there be out there.
But I think my favorite line of all is "Calmness Brother Bear Calmness!"
Oh and though I said this in Barata's battle, yeah Perca I don't like the lines on their own though I was told you had trouble uploading the color. Well even with my tiny miniscule gripe, it pales in comparison to the rest of this Herculean effort. Monsters I say.
# 35
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 05:25 PM
Jeez, I hope I don't have to go up against EITHER of you next round.
Perca - Even simpler than your usual work, but it was a fun read and easy on the eyes. I liked the way you worked the characters together, though, as you know, the ending was a bit anticlimactic. Sometimes the backgrounds were a little too thick-lined, but it wasn't a big problem.
David - To be honest, I felt your other comics were uninteresting and looked rushed. This, however, looks really great. The story was zany but not overly so and I enjoyed it. The art was surprisingly clean and communicated a lot.
Perca - Even simpler than your usual work, but it was a fun read and easy on the eyes. I liked the way you worked the characters together, though, as you know, the ending was a bit anticlimactic. Sometimes the backgrounds were a little too thick-lined, but it wasn't a big problem.
David - To be honest, I felt your other comics were uninteresting and looked rushed. This, however, looks really great. The story was zany but not overly so and I enjoyed it. The art was surprisingly clean and communicated a lot.
# 34
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 12:53 PM
Holy crap! I'm gonna need a week to know who to vote for!
# 33
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 11:06 AM
Battle of the year? I would certainly say so.
# 32
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 09:12 AM
If you want to see the final page for mine...
http://comicmunky.deviantart.com/art/SDT-missing-Page-153364894
there it be...
http://comicmunky.deviantart.com/art/SDT-missing-Page-153364894
there it be...
# 31
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 08:05 AM
David, you are the best thing ever, nuff said. You blew me in each page, your inks made me want to sit and try my best to be something. Your pacing made my eyes get wet.
I won't even start, this was the best match I ever had, it was a pleasure to fight against you. No matter the results, I would like to thank you for the oportunity and say that this will trully make me try my best to step up with my stuff.
One more thing, if angie or anyone else couldn't put your last page, could you link it in here? I would like to see the ending and I bet so do everybody else, I need to know how it ends!
I won't even start, this was the best match I ever had, it was a pleasure to fight against you. No matter the results, I would like to thank you for the oportunity and say that this will trully make me try my best to step up with my stuff.
One more thing, if angie or anyone else couldn't put your last page, could you link it in here? I would like to see the ending and I bet so do everybody else, I need to know how it ends!
# 30
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 07:16 AM
Just to let everybody know..and I don't know if you can even tell..but the last page is missing from my battle..it was there then it wasn't there...ugh..andn ow one page is missing.. oh well..
# 29
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 06:14 AM
I'm glad I didn't face any of you, or else I'd bre crying right now.
Good job guys, very entertaining and well made stuff.
Good job guys, very entertaining and well made stuff.
# 28
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 12:40 AM
Ok, after several tries... was able to send by email - with thumbs and all.
Just half the colored version since my internet was being so ghei and didn't allow me to send the goddamn files. Hope you guys forgive me for that, but half colored entry is better than no entry at all.
No way in hell I'm defaulting!
Just half the colored version since my internet was being so ghei and didn't allow me to send the goddamn files. Hope you guys forgive me for that, but half colored entry is better than no entry at all.
No way in hell I'm defaulting!
# 27
Posted:
Feb 7 2010, 11:57 PM
Having issues to upload my pages here... Sending by mail soon - very soon >: II
# 26
Posted:
Feb 7 2010, 02:41 AM
Nachte: INTENSE
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Whoops, that was me accidentally posting on Nachte's account.
# 25
Posted:
Feb 7 2010, 02:39 AM
amazingdavid:
no I cut out 10 pages...my entry is significantly longer...I rocks those bitches..
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INTENSE
# 24
Posted:
Feb 5 2010, 01:52 PM
sixtem: Only ten pages? Light weight!
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no I cut out 10 pages...my entry is significantly longer...I rocks those bitches..
# 23
Posted:
Feb 5 2010, 11:11 AM
Only ten pages? Light weight!
# 22
Posted:
Feb 5 2010, 09:17 AM
Uploaded...for now...
# 21
Posted:
Feb 4 2010, 03:49 PM
halfway done lettering..clean ups...then a cover...I cut 10 pages of this story...
I will upload tonight BOOYAH!!!
I will upload tonight BOOYAH!!!
# 20
Posted:
Feb 3 2010, 04:56 AM
oooh shit...hmmm...look at all this stuff in my mouth...I don't think I can chew it.
I wonder what this means for the future...
I wonder what this means for the future...
# 19
Posted:
Feb 2 2010, 05:36 AM
I-I-I have no words
# 18
Posted:
Feb 2 2010, 12:05 AM
Ahahaha! Ouh shit I can't wait to see this battle!
# 17
Posted:
Feb 1 2010, 06:51 PM
Putting these two together dramatically increases the chances for everyone else.
# 16
Posted:
Feb 1 2010, 03:03 PM
I am voting for Perca. Cause Dave is fat.
# 15
Posted:
Feb 1 2010, 11:23 AM
Thank god, one of the powerhouses out of the way right off the bat--
Er, good luck you two!
Er, good luck you two!
# 14
Posted:
Feb 1 2010, 08:31 AM
WHOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
# 13
Posted:
Feb 1 2010, 06:05 AM
Man!
# 12
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 04:26 PM
Damn you guys, I lol'ed.
# 11
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 04:23 PM
Baratacom: It's just like a bat fight, it's a battle of skills, a game of gentlemen, who's gonna win?
You never know who.
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BAAAAAAAATT FIIIIIGGGHHTT!!!
hahah YES!!
# 10
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 04:13 PM
It's just like a bat fight, it's a battle of skills, a game of gentlemen, who's gonna win?
You never know who.
You never know who.
# 9
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 04:03 PM
It's so Bear raping time...
# 8
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 03:54 PM
WHY WHY WHY!!!! I was hoping to coast to the finals and meet Perca there....
well this week is now gone...
well this week is now gone...
# 7
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 03:47 PM
aaahh shit i was just thinking about who would win in this situation; i didn't know I'd actually get it! Good luck to you both!
# 6
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 03:08 PM
Haha oh man. THis should be entertaining!
# 5
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 02:50 PM
Right off the bat, nice. Good way to get shit started!
# 4
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 02:26 PM
ROOTING FOR BOTH HERE!! GO DAVID GO PERCA GO!
# 3
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 02:21 PM
OH DAYMMNS.
i won't lie, i was anticipating this being one of the possible matchups for the final.
Bring much ruckus each of you.
i won't lie, i was anticipating this being one of the possible matchups for the final.
Bring much ruckus each of you.
# 2
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 02:20 PM
Oh mans! David's one of the few people I could see being able to take on Perca, lets see how this goes! Good luck you two!
# 1
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 02:17 PM
... Ok... this is... bad.
WHAT A RAPE!!!!!! I HATE MY LIFE.
WHAT A RAPE!!!!!! I HATE MY LIFE.
Speed Death Tournament Match
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excellent work you two. no complaints from me. david, just keep tightening up that lettering. i enjoyed them both a lot.