Rockwell x Locke Redux / Sebastian Rockwell

Rockwell x Locke Redux — Sebastian Rockwell

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amazingdavid
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# 8   Posted: Dec 18 2009, 08:07 PM
I thought the action in this was great. I think the variation on the random meet and fine is perfectly fine. I've always thought that if the action is quality then sometimes storylines are unnecessary. The comic essentially functions as a vignette and vignettes are perfectly okay
Thirding what Mike and DF said...the BnW balace needs to be worked on some pages were nearrly impossible to read without several look throughs. but most I enjoyed what was going on here.  Good work I'm glad you finally got it up.

GET PUSSY POSSE SQUADRON SUPREME IS GO!!

PyrasTerran
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1392 comments
# 7   Posted: Dec 18 2009, 01:39 PM
Hm... I was very confused, I couldn't tell what was going on through half of the comic. :(

JAZ
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# 6   Posted: Dec 17 2009, 05:56 PM
This was a pretty cool comic from you, glad you got it done. I think it was a real improvement from your last comic. There was a lot more dynamic anatomy and perspective. Sometimes I think the perspective was a little off though. It’s most evident on page 1, panel 4 Flint and Sebastian kind of look like chibi versions of themselves. Also on the 4th panel of page 7. To me it looks like Flint is just floating there instead of lying on the ground. Overall, it was an interesting fight scene and a cool use of Sebastian’s powers. Keep it up man.

DrasticFantastic
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# 5   Posted: Dec 17 2009, 03:43 PM
Good stuff, your pacing and your sense of balance was done well and I could follow the action pretty well for the most part. I was a little confused however on page three with that sequence but I was able to figure it out. Your sense of anatomy and motion is well developed but somehow I'm getting a sort of "squashed' effect on  the proportions in a few area, such as on page one. I don't know if this is meant to be foreshortening but you might want to work a bit more on it.

Also be more attentive to your faces...some were great, others were obviously off. Consistency is very important in sequential works. Micheal's comment regarding the amount of black/white is also seconded. Good stuff, this is really nice and you obviously know how to choreograph a good fight scene. Keep up the good work.

michaelharris
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# 4   Posted: Dec 17 2009, 12:05 PM
I did like this, it was well-paced. I would suggest you focus on clarity more. You have about an equal amount of black and white so its easy to get confused especially with some of the angles. The story did seem like a variant of meet and fight and I would have liked a little more in that department, but it was enjoyable.

Darius Corry
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# 3   Posted: Dec 17 2009, 06:47 AM
Yeah, I agree with Kon; it was wall paced and executed aside from a couple panels. You made it as thought Flint wouldn't stand a chance against Rockwell, which I guess is cool being as though no one knows your character better than you.

Meet the challenge next time,buckaroo so we can make em count.

Kon
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# 2   Posted: Dec 17 2009, 02:38 AM
How could I say it? I liked the fact that we could see how Rockwell uses his power, the action scenes were pretty clear except for one or two panels but I felt like you were trying out something with the art. Like a new technique, but I didn't feel it came out so well. Except the black shading, I quite liked your comic, keep it up! I'd like to battle you when I have time ahah

Angie
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1937 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 15 2009, 08:02 PM
I'm currently having major net problems that'll hopefully get repaired tomorrow. Will put this up hopefully then.

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