Master of Disaster: Marooned / Nova vs. Shrapnel Girl vs. Sam Oinko vs. Kotori Ky LaDiablo

Master of Disaster: Marooned — Nova vs. Shrapnel Girl vs. Sam Oinko vs. Kotori Ky LaDiablo

by fowlie

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snager
Artist
415 comments
# 31   Posted: Feb 3 2022, 03:53 PM
oh god, i haven't read these before. Just Fowlie's side on her old DA account. I thought it was lost forever. it's been probably 10 years. god, this site is a blessing.

i'll just be cooking dinner and 'we can cut them off and dry them in the sun and feast like kings' still pops into my head.

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 30   Posted: Aug 12 2009, 11:22 AM
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay

Jetaime
Artist
100 comments
# 29   Posted: Aug 10 2009, 09:52 PM
good work, guys.

phil pretty much nailed my thoughts on this one; i can't think of anything relevant to add.

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 28   Posted: Aug 7 2009, 04:54 PM
Am I the only one who was expecting a survivor parody out of this tournament? I hope not cause I think that reflects poorly on my behalf.



Fowlie: OK, this is both funny and disturbing and I think you pulled it off quite well. This is another comic out of this tournament that really needs to be longer, but that sudden ending was a bit of a let down. Aside from that, I have nothing much to say about this comic. It's entertaining and has left me interested for more from ya.



4am: Lots of effort on your part dude, but I think it would of been nicer had you just focused on this round's characters as the entire comic was pretty lengthy. It's not a bad thing to have a very big comic, but in my opinion I think your comic would of been better if it was shorter as this was very sloppy. The colors need a lot of work as you've got background colors mixing into characters and a character's shading and lighting bleeding into the background, it just doesn't look good man. Anatomy still needs a lot of work as well, mainly with consistency, sometimes it looks great like Nova on page six, but the next page his eyes are on his forehead and they're gigantic!

Story here was a bit confusing for me honestly, again I think you could of gone for something much simpler instead and worked with the 4 characters in this tournament instead of trying to work in all 8 of them.



Joshua: Dammit man! This could of easily won my vote if you finished! I liked how easy it was to follow without the dialogue and really shows your skill quite nicely. Always next time though, right?



Kotori: Nice, I haven't seen this level of quality from ya in a while, but you still have that bad habit of placing eyes on a character's forehead (mainly with your female characters it seems). Story was pretty good, but it did get a bit wordy for me in the first half, but you're getting better with your action, backgrounds and expressions. You just need to find more time to improve on these things.



Great efforts from everybody, hopefully the finals will be just as great.

cultmasterflex
Artist
125 comments
# 27   Posted: Aug 7 2009, 10:02 AM
nice work everyone sorry sam, go Nova (he is my fav in the tourney)

Corny
Artist
217 comments
# 26   Posted: Aug 5 2009, 08:26 PM
Those nipples are perfectly fine.

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 25   Posted: Aug 5 2009, 05:38 PM
Fowlie: Everything is better with Bowie.  Your nipples might need some work though (not yours but Nova's) and that is really painful to think about.  Otherwise, it's really great.  I can't imagine what Nova tastes like though since he's not actually an octopus/squid.  Bowie compelled me to write this.

4:00 AM: While I'm not necessarily freaked out by your subject matter, I can't say I enjoy the colors very much.  They have this kinda loose spray painted thing going on which might be your thing but...eh...I'm just not a fan of those colors.  Plus, maybe you could try to change up your line widths, everything seems to be pretty even and I feel like you're depending on your colors and their contrast too much.  I applaud you for the effort though and for including everyone's character.  I really liked Belial's portrayal.  

Joshua: I too am disappointed because this was really awesome.  One of Nova's best iterations.

Kotori: The art was not bad but it suffered because of the contrast between the pencils and the digital text.  I think if you have something all in pencil, the words should follow suite because really that's what the sharpest black in your entry is, the words and the effect is jarring.  Your story wasn't bad and I liked the focus on Sam.   There's too much negative space as a whole, probably brought on by background deficiency.

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 24   Posted: Aug 5 2009, 05:27 PM
Haha, thanks a lot Fowlie, I'm glad you could mostly follow it.
I am finishing the inks to stay in practice, so I'll post up a finished one in the forums sometime.

BTW YOU GUYS DID A GREAT JOB!!  I liked all of your comics and you all did cool Oinkos!  Fowlie your colors were awesome and you always do nice stuff with the sequential form like in this case the nipple stab.  4AM your characterization of oinko/rats was especially hilarious,  I was lovin that shit! In general I found the dialogue/interaction entertaining. Very ambitious to include all 8 characters and I think you did a pretty good job for the time limit.  Kotori, your character drawings were really amazing here, and I liked how you were able to fit in a lot of character interaction without a ton of pages.
Def. an honor to fight all you vets here, on to the next shit!!

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 23   Posted: Aug 4 2009, 09:50 PM
Just wanted to let Joshua know that I am super sad he didn't finish.  That was looking great, and even without dialog i could understand 85% of what was going on no problem. Seems rare on here.  I hope you'll come back to it, partly because I love the zipper mouth look on Nova. ahah

King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 22   Posted: Aug 4 2009, 07:34 PM
HEY 4AM.  YOU KNOW WHAT IS WORSE THAN A SHORT PAINFULLY BAD COMIC?  

A REALLY LONG ONE.


CONGRATS YOU SADIST.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 21   Posted: Aug 3 2009, 07:43 AM
Because Neoicarus' last 2 pages were manually uploaded by Wei the tournament can't go up until Toast can put it up because manually uploaded pages don't show up in the manager for us. He'll get to it ASAP.

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 20   Posted: Aug 3 2009, 12:02 AM
Think I just made it, it said 1 min. left :)

hey everyone sorry on mine there's no lettering+ruffness.
My script sucked anyway :D
Hope u guys can still find something u like in there!

4:00am
Artist
64 comments
# 19   Posted: Aug 2 2009, 11:06 PM
wow  mine sucks.....um  *SPOILER ALERT * Shrapnelgirl is the meteor

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 18   Posted: Aug 2 2009, 10:56 PM
Uploaded.

I hope you all enjoy my opus.

Kotori Ky
Artist
216 comments
# 17   Posted: Aug 2 2009, 09:51 PM
Alright, my disaster of an entry is uploaded. ^^' Thanks for letting me take part and I hope it isn't too much of a let down for people. I can't WAIT to see everyone's entries!

cultmasterflex
Artist
125 comments
# 16   Posted: Jul 16 2009, 10:06 PM
i cant wait

Dahque
15 comments
# 15   Posted: Jul 15 2009, 10:24 PM
Let the games begin!

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 14   Posted: Jul 15 2009, 09:18 AM
Yosai: fowlie : ..the pig is for eating, right? >3>
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I dunno, he is the only man besides Nova on the island....

Yosai
Artist
74 comments
# 13   Posted: Jul 13 2009, 09:55 PM
fowlie : ..the pig is for eating, right? >3>

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 12   Posted: Jul 13 2009, 07:29 PM
fowlie: NOVA TRAPPED ON AN ISLAND WITH 2 SEXY LADIES AND A YUMMY PIG?!?!? THIS COMIC WRITES ITSELF!!
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LMFAO

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 11   Posted: Jul 13 2009, 05:26 PM
NOVA TRAPPED ON AN ISLAND WITH 2 SEXY LADIES AND A YUMMY PIG?!?!? THIS COMIC WRITES ITSELF!!

Craqued
Artist
202 comments
# 10   Posted: Jul 13 2009, 01:37 PM
gaaaav rock it ooout

Santana
Artist
123 comments
# 9   Posted: Jul 13 2009, 11:48 AM
Blow that island up gav!

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 8   Posted: Jul 13 2009, 11:03 AM
Awesome!

Have fun everybody  >:D

Dr.Salt
Artist
96 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 13 2009, 06:30 AM
Get ready for comics about rape on a desert island!

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 13 2009, 06:14 AM
At last! Looking forward to this!

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 13 2009, 05:50 AM
Tourney Thread Updated with new info     http://entervoid.com/board/index.php?topic=10818.msg178923#msg178923

Yosai
Artist
74 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 13 2009, 12:57 AM
whoa sexy~

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 12 2009, 11:26 PM
Dayum :) Good luck everyones!
This Disaster's about to get Master'd

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 12 2009, 11:10 PM
haha oh Kotori

I'm curious about what you'll all come up with

Kotori Ky
Artist
216 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 12 2009, 10:47 PM
Oh  hell

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