Nakia:


Yeah...SG profile says that the only thing she wants is to get out of void so thats the Trophy. keepin it real yo!!

Gavin!! Sweet battle, mang. I loved the Butcher cameo. Plus all of the character interaction was great. It sucks that the pages were out of order, it hurt the story a little, but sweet backgrounds as always man, I love your stuff, and it's nice to see you back in the game.

Dave, awesome as always man. Your art is like am ever evolving creature with a life of it's own. You never fail to impress and have quickly become one of my faves here in Void. In fact my only gripe was what was the trophy? The ticket out of void?

Great job both of you, and as soon as this school is out (one week) I wanna throw down with you guys.

400 AM It started strong, the first page was really good! I would try to get every page like that, I liked the color scheme. I think you're like the second person who didn't draw Rev EXACTLY like on the character page, I like that. I would just focus on timing yourself to get the same level of quality throughout the book, instead of kinda half doing the backgrounds in the last half of the story.  Keep working on Anatomy and perspective too. OVerall GOod Job!

Dave. First of all this only cool cause I am in it... I like the scratchy texture but it got a little too scratchy and haphazard for me and well as the anatomy got a little too exaggerated, but then thats how I always feel about your stuff. I really liked the color scheme and the textures. word.

4AM
fucking EPIC destructed cityscape here, I really liked it, too bad about the page order, cuz it really hurt the entertainment, I just couldn't get into it much after the first few pages. really liked Shrap's expressions on page 6. kinda liked the inks I saw without the colors in your GFB thread, maybe just experiment with more muted color palettes, so they don't overpower your line-work.

Dave:

For what I assume is a bic pen, you made it work, and I liked the wash colors and you do some kickass splash pages.
Story was good, and believable interactions. Some panels were hurting due to lack of BGs.

overall really cool dudes!

amazingdavid, I dig this style it's too coooool.

4:00AM, Nice! the colors were too messy at times though D;

gaavvviii, that was siiiick, shrap is super funny and her outfits are always fierce i must say. i gotta say though i like when your inks are more in depth then with just solid no airbrush coloring. it ends up looking like just okay, ya know? i personally liked the colors you chose, they were really dark and broody, just up the contrast between the objects next time, atmospheric perspective and all. also! page 3! the foreground and background are all the same line width! i cant separate them! but i know you already know all that SO i'll just say the pacing was good and oooh man nostaliga overcame with the fight scene, shrap fights are THEE best. now we must fight.

daviiid, i love that you always keep your stuff clean and readable and everything is kind of equal quality, its not like crap story, good art or vice versa, its all just goood. page 2 is very yes. awesome. the story was cute and the art was very nice too, so swell all around.

the pages are out of order and theres a couple missing man  i worked on this for a while so i did lose some of the quality  if i would have done  a month long battle it would have come out alot more polished but i wantedto see what i could get done  in that amount of time  it just felt good to turn in a full battle again  

I'm going to post  everything in order  in the forum so you can see it there to see f it makes more sense  in my thread ........   thanks alot  aribooboo  i'm taking all these lessons into account so  i'm better each time i battle

4:00Am: hmm pretty good! I liked the detail you put into the city scapes; that must have taken a while. The colors you were using were ok to me, though your coloring started to get way messy. Try and keep it tighter next time, I think it'd look great in your style! I dunno if you ran out of time, but the quality dropped way off towards the middle. I liked where you had it, but I'm not gonna preach on that. Storywise, I was pulled into it in the beginning, but it got confusing and I couldn't follow it as it went on. Maybe your pages ARE out of order? XD Either way, it was ok. The dialouge you used ran pretty smoothly for me and wasn't forced. You're getting better at writting there. I can't really say much but to keep working at it! Nice <3

David: MAAAAAN, i LOVED the style you used! Art wise, this is probably my favorite from yours. You know how to work with sketchy and still keep it clean. ANd I just can't stop looking at page 4, DAMN i love that hatching. I really hoe you do something like this again, 'cause for real, i keep looking at the pages. The colors were ace for me; you limited it and i like where you went there. Your figures have a lot of motion to them too, i love it. Story, man, that ran really smooth too. Your dialouge is always so natural sounding and I love reading things like that. How you started this comic off and how you ended it was prefect. Didn't feel awkward or anything. And I love how Flint can kick the shit outta any guy, but still get his ass beat by a woman haha I can go on and on about what I liked from this, but I'll stop here before I start sounding hella psycho. I can't say on what you can improve. I know you can, but i have no idea on what! Nice one, man. OOHHH We gotta battle sometime, WE DO.

4:00 are they in the right order??

 not that it matters  but  my pages are out of wack  or am i just reading this wrong

4:00:colorful but the colors are too bold in the 5 to last page i really like when u color the ist 5

mazingdavid:were both much the same when we draw but sometimes it makes the comic a liitle dirty but the best part of it is in the story

great one

Marin: No time travel...just love traveling...too be honest Ive always kind of thought of void as a decaying city with many places that have the appearance of a holocaust...but its just destroyed...or barren...

thats my void...

that was something new for david!! something mushy this time eh! tell me did he time travel again hehehe!

Very enjoyable comics, from both of you.

Gavin: Angie will say it, but I'll say it first. The font didn't fit. You should get different fonts if you continue with digital texting

4:00am: yoooooo this was great...hahah I laughed so hard (I don't know if you intended it to be funny...but hey) The writing for me was inspired and fresh.  While it was not Dostievsky (who wants to be him anyway) it did have a realness and pertinence to the setting that you created.  I really like your destroyed void....I wager I will use in future battles simply because destroyed urban landscapes are more fun to draw...I think you had a few anatomical problems with turning the characters in 3D space but nothing that no one else has problems with.  Some of your action scenes were a bit hare to discern. In the future I would use color to help define specific points of action you want to show.  Over all I was quite impressed with this...and Im glad you challenged me I enjoyed your story very much especially the first 4 pages with Ghost...HILARIOUS...GRIPPNG...good go of it...

Amazingdavid: Impressive, you actually got me to leave a comment....the variety of styles I've seen in your last few battles, with this one pushing the proverbial envelope even further, has made me a fan. Nothing short of amazing...pun intended.

Amazingdavid> WOA. Just amazing you see? I didn't really like the last comic but this one was pretty good with romance and shit. WOA WOA. The drawings fitted perfectly the story, there was a lot of nice bg and this wasn't rush. Well done.

4:00am> The biggest problem you have are colors, just train more and more to make them nicer. Because some time the colors feel a bit off, like it's hard to read and all.
You also have to work harder on anatomy, I saw you liked doing big backgrounds but you need to work more on the characters. Make their outline bigger so they outstand more in the panels.
I don't know if my english was good enough to make this clear but I'll try to watch closely how you progress!

uploading  ok ahead of time  sorry for the shitty lettering and  shotty pages  i just wanted to make sure i got the story IDEA across  so it came out kind  MEH if only i had another week  but  pff whatever but i got somthing complete  in  and thats what i really wanted  i missed the rush of these battles

uploaded....

lettering...lettering...shitty shitty shitty lettering...i suck so hard at lettering

I resolve to only do silent comics from now on...

13 hours 53 minutes  fucckkkkkkkkkkkk i can't color all of this damn it

Oh no....yeah..I'm an idiot...teehee

you have 25 hours silly, unless I'm misreading the due date

unless I suck at math

holy shit...I dont know if Im going to make it...
work work work work work work work....I have like 1 hour

oh neato

fuuuuuuuuuck man

WHAT NO WAY
aight aight destroy this gaaav

Yessss, gonna be a great one

WOW!!!!! Long wait is going to kill me T_T

The fuck, how'd I miss this?

Good luck Gavin! Good luck David!

Ooooo :0 good luck!

THIS LOOKS REALLY COOL!!!