H.E.A.T. vs. Huesitos the Warrior
Critiques & Comments
# 31
Posted:
Feb 13 2009, 10:50 AM
a mi me gusto mas la de beto, que quieren que les diga!
# 30
Posted:
Feb 12 2009, 04:37 PM
these were both pretty sweet, and you both had very awesome ink work goin' on~
great battle and nice improvements ledes
great battle and nice improvements ledes
# 29
Posted:
Feb 12 2009, 03:22 AM
Ps. (just in case) The disclaimer was a joke. You don't need to read it to understand the story. Seriously. I am a bad person for reals.
# 28
Posted:
Feb 12 2009, 02:57 AM
I thank you all for the compliments and am really glad that you guys enjoyed the read. I must confess that the plot was supposed to be completely different, the original thumbs for this idea was 22 pages (without cover or bullshit pages), but since I had some ir stuff going on I had to cut it short - but the to be continue was planed for either long or short ideas har har har (I'm not continuing this, there's nothing to be continued!)
Anyway, I thank you Ledes again for this opportunity and apology for all the random characters I abused in this story (an I war everybody that it will happen again!). This was a good opportunity to practice toning,even not being 100% satisfied with the results, it was a good try. I don't think I'm doing this again so soon XD
All in all... Thank you everybody. Never stop believing!
Anyway, I thank you Ledes again for this opportunity and apology for all the random characters I abused in this story (an I war everybody that it will happen again!). This was a good opportunity to practice toning,even not being 100% satisfied with the results, it was a good try. I don't think I'm doing this again so soon XD
All in all... Thank you everybody. Never stop believing!
# 27
Posted:
Feb 10 2009, 04:14 PM
Perca-love the intro page, I might just have to copypaste that thing.
# 26
Posted:
Feb 9 2009, 02:18 PM
perca: awesome, love your interpretation of the characters. steve=lulz
ledes: wow, great improvement! (but dont let it go to your head and get too lazy to improve even more!)
i still think you need to keep characters consistent with their descriptions and stuff. perca even mentioned that huesitos was interrupted from his previous fight. things like that can help tell the story better.
and now the dragon can talk! its even more awesome! (hint: include it in the character bio)
good job both of you! ^_^
ledes: wow, great improvement! (but dont let it go to your head and get too lazy to improve even more!)
i still think you need to keep characters consistent with their descriptions and stuff. perca even mentioned that huesitos was interrupted from his previous fight. things like that can help tell the story better.
and now the dragon can talk! its even more awesome! (hint: include it in the character bio)
good job both of you! ^_^
# 25
Posted:
Feb 9 2009, 07:42 AM
Fishy Fish Fish: BWAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!! oh man...you just might be the funniest person (chick) I know...luckiily this time you get to keep your ovaries...don't make me come after you with a spoon...
Ledes: This is like a million billion gazillion times better than your first one. Your lines are cleaner your panels aren't as cluttered your pacing makes more sense....what a fucking improvement keep it up man you are making a ton of right choices.
Ledes: This is like a million billion gazillion times better than your first one. Your lines are cleaner your panels aren't as cluttered your pacing makes more sense....what a fucking improvement keep it up man you are making a ton of right choices.
# 24
Posted:
Feb 9 2009, 05:38 AM
La revancha cuando quiera señorita! Thanks for the comments!
# 23
Posted:
Feb 9 2009, 02:52 AM
Steve is a star, he'll be around all my comics forever on. That joke never gets old ha ha I forgot to add a page with all the scraped pages, more than 13 XD Ow my I need to take my job more serious...
# 22
Posted:
Feb 9 2009, 02:32 AM
perca: B, if the disclaimer made you cry, I won. seriously, I'm a bad person. I regret nothing for being retarded, punch my face and everything gets better <3333
Quote
...I was hoping to see more about Steve, actually... ._.
# 21
Posted:
Feb 9 2009, 01:56 AM
B, if the disclaimer made you cry, I won. seriously, I'm a bad person. I regret nothing for being retarded, punch my face and everything gets better <3333
# 20
Posted:
Feb 9 2009, 01:45 AM
Pris: A disCLAIMER...?
REALLY? ;_;
Ledes: Where did the toaster-head go? ;_;
Those are my only qualms. Otherwise it was grand.
REALLY? ;_;
Ledes: Where did the toaster-head go? ;_;
Those are my only qualms. Otherwise it was grand.
# 19
Posted:
Feb 9 2009, 01:02 AM
Perca--I love the energy and sense of humor that comes through in your art and writing. I should go back and read why HEAT's a toaster...
Ledes--Not a bad entry on your part at all, either. Looks like you're working on the contrast and line thicknesses more too Nice stuff.
Good battle, you two
Ledes--Not a bad entry on your part at all, either. Looks like you're working on the contrast and line thicknesses more too Nice stuff.
Good battle, you two
# 18
Posted:
Feb 9 2009, 12:03 AM
Wow... Ledes, way to blow someone ha ha ha omg! Never knew Huesitos real form was so badass man, this is great!
Simple story, great pacing, I liked how you even used Zeros (I never use her XD I always forget my own dog ha ha ha), And the inking is really solid, you rock!
Only 2 cents on the anatomy, there are some inconcistences on the bodies, like the torso proportion or a bit stiff side views. The hatching is great tough.
Man it was so worth the wait, thank you once again for the fight, get ready for a rematch ha ha
Simple story, great pacing, I liked how you even used Zeros (I never use her XD I always forget my own dog ha ha ha), And the inking is really solid, you rock!
Only 2 cents on the anatomy, there are some inconcistences on the bodies, like the torso proportion or a bit stiff side views. The hatching is great tough.
Man it was so worth the wait, thank you once again for the fight, get ready for a rematch ha ha
# 17
Posted:
Feb 8 2009, 09:23 PM
Looks like we gots our self a tie here boys
# 16
Posted:
Feb 8 2009, 07:17 PM
I feel curiosity too, and thank you for accepting the offer for this fight. Good luck in your next battle.
# 15
Posted:
Feb 8 2009, 06:50 PM
Yay better later than never XD
Uploaded.
Once again, any secret desire of punching my face, go ahead, because I know I deserve. Thank you for this fight Ledes, I'm really curious to see your pages (and will be honest and let you know that I panic when noticed that you uploaded so early ha ha ha Ow my...). Let's get em!
Uploaded.
Once again, any secret desire of punching my face, go ahead, because I know I deserve. Thank you for this fight Ledes, I'm really curious to see your pages (and will be honest and let you know that I panic when noticed that you uploaded so early ha ha ha Ow my...). Let's get em!
# 14
Posted:
Feb 7 2009, 06:35 PM
Ow my I'm so late... But I'm not defaulting/ posting unfinished stuff, I swear. Sleep is for sissies. Can't wait to see your pages, Ledes
# 13
Posted:
Feb 7 2009, 08:48 AM
Uploaded!!!
# 12
Posted:
Feb 6 2009, 03:49 PM
this oughta be good
# 11
Posted:
Feb 3 2009, 09:58 PM
Beto XD haz al menos 3 paginas y no te hagas bolas
# 10
Posted:
Feb 2 2009, 08:12 AM
40 is too weak, make it an epic 300 for each!
# 9
Posted:
Feb 2 2009, 07:38 AM
I expect 40 pages.
# 8
Posted:
Feb 2 2009, 07:17 AM
WHUT WHUT WHUT
# 7
Posted:
Feb 2 2009, 07:03 AM
Ow snap.. more than 10 it will be then >:I
# 6
Posted:
Feb 2 2009, 05:02 AM
I expect no less than 10 pages!!
# 5
Posted:
Feb 1 2009, 09:51 PM
HEY, GOOD LUCK TO YOU BOTH.
# 4
Posted:
Feb 1 2009, 09:00 PM
I expect nothing less than epic levels of awesome.
# 3
Posted:
Feb 1 2009, 08:57 PM
i riek this a here battle.
# 2
Posted:
Feb 1 2009, 08:54 PM
It's on. Let's make it awesome, Ledes!
# 1
Posted:
Feb 1 2009, 08:54 PM
Hey. HEY. There may be some sexy going on here
Regular Match
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Ended:
Feb 15th, 2009
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