roflqu: very easy and fun read. the jokes were wonderfully executed.

ronin: one-weekers are pretty rough, especially when you have something big in mind. the third panel of the fourth page is awesome. also, KANEDAAAAAAAAA!

Rofl-Very funny, love the simplicity, the casual pace and the unique style. More detailed backgrounds and straight lines would be nice though.
Ronin-Excellent detail, interesting shots/perspectives, and a nice action pace. Your lines seem a little uncontrolled to me though. Using a straight edge would really help a lot I think. At the end the plot lost me a little bit. Is it fully flushed out?

nice for the parts you had done, ronin. i really liked the ralph steadman style lettering you had going on too

nice origin for ronin's bastardness, rofl haha a fun read. no real complaints. the coloring though seemed a little super mario to me. not a complaint just struck me as haha

Rofl: The Gran Torino joke coulda been the whole comic and I wouldn't have been disappointed. seriously...I laughed for like ten minutes (mostly because I have been telling everyone to go see it....fucking best clint eastwood movie ever)  Some of the art in the later pages didn't seem to have the same quality as the first...as if you were running out of steam or just didnt care but over all I dug this comic...and Yes Rocketpops are glorious...

Ronin: This started of strong...I was really pulled into the story..then..well it didnt go anywhere and just kind of abruptly ended.  I really dig the style you are using for this...I believe some areas need a bit more clarity like Pg4 Pn2 the city in the BG or the characters in the fore one needs to be tighter simply so the viewer can make out whats going on easier...

Ronin, you're comic was so intense I was just going faster ans faster and faster and then slammed into a brick wall-
of disappointment!!!
Seriously, that was a phemonimal build up

Rof, I do so love the two-ships-passing-in-the-night battles, like my last one. Good job both of you ARGH how do I decide???

Also, no one needs to bother to critique me.

Shame you didn't finish Ronin. We'll save it for next time we fight.

i spy with my little eye something *FABULOUS*~!

I VOTE FOR FAB.

OH shit!

sweet~

THEY ARE MADE OF THE SAME DEADLY MATTER

Even though its a Morty battle I'd like to say that DR FAB AND RONIN R THE SAME HEIGHT

THIS IS A MORTY BATTLE