tsk eric
tsk johnny

Dear both of you:  

You really need to focus on ONE project and then see it through to the end.  This is getting silly.  :/  

You've both got the skills, just... FOCUS.  

Started out lovely on both of these, but I only assume time issues came up. I hope both of your next battles come out awesome.

Nice cameo BTW. I haven't seen one of those in... well, I haven't.  <3

I know that right now, what I am about to say will probably make me come off as a pile of rotting dick. Rather than stop at 'this disappointed me' I'm going to point out some serious technicalities.

Roflqu - I've been noticing quite a trend with you, two of them actually. Allow me to start with one bit that is constantly re-occurring in your battles. In the majority of your fights, you tend to take much more time embellishing the first page, as opposed to the rest of your comics. This match is no exception. Your first page is completed, cleaned and colored out. The rest of it is rushed pencils and a last minute color slap on the last page.
You need to discipline yourself by sticking to a set pattern on building your pages, because this is becoming a bad habit in the quality department.

Also, take this for what you will, and I'm sorry if this comes off more opinion orientated but I seriously believe you need to cut back from challenging multiple people at the same time. You've blundered in the past from challenging more people at once and that habit is once again springing back up.

What I really appreciated was the fact you tried your hand at doing cityscape, and I think you're in a great direction with it. I love how clean and clear they were, and I encourage you to do more with it.

Johnny, although it IS good that you didn't default, this comic could have contained more depth. I don't have a whole lot to critique you on because there wasn't too much substance other than a basic plot. It was cut rather short, so again I can't say much.  You did well with the facial expressions and I really like how you drew the doctor.

Again, I'm really sorry if I'm coming off as a dick hole, but this match just didn't do it for me. You both have the potential, and I hope your next matches can show that.

Controversy!  I should have sized the pages down.  They came out bigger than what I was looking at in the program.  I'm sorry about that.

First page of Mr. Kick, second panel. Totally what I'm feeling right nao

I had a feeling I should have canceled this battle when I saw Johnny was fighting  while being "force retired" and now I'm regretting not doing so.

LAME GUYS.  LAME.

FIGHT OF THE YEAR

wao the dissapointment . . .

Also, don't bother wasting your time critiquing anything but the first page on my side, the battle is incomplete.

Hey Johnny, I know you have done something. Please just post it, irregardless of completion or not, just to show.

Johnny, I hope you have something man, I'm not wanting to pressure you into doing the best or anything like that, just give us something and slowly work your way up from there. Rofl I hope you do your best as well.

IT'S ALL BATTLE, BABY.

Is this a Beyond Battle?

Johnny, I expect amazingness.

DONT FUCK UP JOHNNY

Holy shit, I just ate my words!

Break a leg you two!!

SHIT JUST GOT REAL

THE BATTLE

DR. FABULOUS VS MR. KICK

NO MORE EXCUSES

THE FIGHT IS ON

THIS IS THE NIGHT