TL Bot vs. OSbot

TL Bot vs. OSbot

by Red

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Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 44   Posted: Jan 12 2009, 03:00 PM
Red-Revolver-Your backgrounds and inking are improving all the time which is great to see, I want to see you keep pushing them because you can only go up from there. There were still a few panels which felt empty like most of page 7 but I can see where they weren't absolutely necessary in that particular scene. There were a few instances in the coloring where the toning kind of felt a little overpowering to the color like again on page 7. But other than that it was an enjoyable read, I liked the story you guys did for this.

Dure-Even though these were just pencils I honestly prefer your pencilled work to your colored work, there's just more grit to them and I feel like some of your detail is lost when you add color to your stuff. One thing to watch however is those transparent word bubbles and the digital text. I don't know if you just have bad hand writing or what but I think hand written stuff would have fit your pencils a lot more. I loved the random KWANZAABOT and the ending really caught me off guard.

Good job both of you!

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 43   Posted: Jan 7 2009, 01:30 PM
THIS IS THE BEST COMIC IVE READ THIS YEAR

HOLYYYY SHIT!

Incoming crit float

Kon
Artist
194 comments
# 42   Posted: Jan 7 2009, 11:20 AM
This was great for you two... WHO SHOULD I VOTE FOR?

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 41   Posted: Jan 7 2009, 10:33 AM
red - boo mac

dure - where was channukah zombie?

but seriously, these were both nice. good work.

Kotori Ky
Artist
216 comments
# 40   Posted: Jan 7 2009, 09:52 AM
What more can I say other than... I love you both, marry me.

Haha, but all joking aside, that was a GREAT story. I adored the jokes, the rhyming was hilarious, and the ending was so full of win... Seriously, the Creativitiy and Entertainment scores will be out of this world and deservadly so.

The PC vs Mac joke was win, too. I loved their expressions, both at the email and at the 'upload'... /cough Hahah!

yeseG92
Artist
19 comments
# 39   Posted: Jan 6 2009, 07:12 PM
Awwww~! I love the spin off of the grinch. nice ryhming. very cute, both of you guys. i loved the part with Nova! XD
i can't pick a winner! D8

aribooboo
Artist
282 comments
# 38   Posted: Jan 6 2009, 06:48 PM
Goooood, this was so cuuuuuuute~~

Red: really impressive! I love the story and where you guys took it. Rhyming can be hard, but you pulled it off great. You have no idea how much I loved the beginning part, with Agent Black. Your figures are looking more loose now, you're getting there! Just needs a little more work. Loved the colors and you had a good amount of tones when you used them. You didn't over do it, it was perfect for me. It was really clean. This has got to be one of my favorites from you, no doubt C=

Dure: SHIIIIT, i don't know which side i liked better! That Kwanzaabot was clever; not sure if you guys made that up together, but i loved it so much. The ending was perfect for me and you really got Helftan's pesonality in there. The turkey, heeheehee. I loved the words you used to rhyme too. It ran smoothly~ Some pages seemed messy, but overall i love your pencils. Great one from you too, i can't stop smiling XD

ledes87
Artist
55 comments
# 37   Posted: Jan 6 2009, 02:11 PM
Very enterteining!!
Vamo´ JD!!

Dimension
Artist
489 comments
# 36   Posted: Jan 6 2009, 01:50 PM
haha, cute battle.

this was pretty funny and you both did a really nice job ... the story was awesome; I loved that ending....:3


amazingdavid
Artist
441 comments
# 35   Posted: Jan 6 2009, 10:32 AM
MACS ARE SUPERIOR IN EVERYWAY....BURN PC BURN...plus this was great I couldn't choose a winner 10's all-around

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 34   Posted: Jan 6 2009, 09:18 AM
I...

I love you two SO hard right now. ;3;

Fox24
Artist
215 comments
# 33   Posted: Jan 6 2009, 08:57 AM
man the mac joke nearly had me to tears it was so funny. But then again PC people prob won't get it if they don't know about mac's. But great stuff both of you hilarious!

bicentennial man
Artist
55 comments
# 32   Posted: Jan 6 2009, 07:24 AM
this shit was hilarious i laughed so loud my girl kicked me out da room cause she was sleep but it was so worthe it i gave you both 10s in creativity and entertainment LMAO!!!!!!!!!!

Jetaime
Artist
100 comments
# 31   Posted: Jan 6 2009, 06:53 AM
this should be put up every december 25th.

YaRoof
Artist
132 comments
# 30   Posted: Jan 6 2009, 05:21 AM
that was the best ending... ever.......ever.

Jack
Artist
225 comments
# 29   Posted: Jan 6 2009, 12:23 AM
Dure this is far and beyond the best comic you've ever done, and for sure one of the best I've seen on this site. Stunning work from both of you.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 28   Posted: Jan 6 2009, 12:17 AM
I'm too emotional to give a full comment yet, you two gave me the greatest Christmas present of all.

Duredhel
Artist
114 comments
# 27   Posted: Jan 5 2009, 05:19 PM
Uploaded :D!

bicentennial man
Artist
55 comments
# 26   Posted: Dec 23 2008, 10:35 AM
Epic epic EPIC!!!!!!

Rone Rivendale
Artist
89 comments
# 25   Posted: Dec 21 2008, 03:24 PM
I haven't had this kind of antipication since the last time P2 fought. :)

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 24   Posted: Dec 21 2008, 04:39 AM
Can't wait to see those robots sparkle XD

Red
Council
703 comments
# 23   Posted: Dec 18 2008, 04:28 PM
Thank you Angie, we needed that badly :D

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 22   Posted: Dec 18 2008, 03:54 PM
Dure has requested an extension. Deadline extended by 1 week. New deadline Jan 5th, 2009

squid
Artist
421 comments
# 21   Posted: Dec 18 2008, 01:06 PM
agree with Lune

luniara
Artist
528 comments
# 20   Posted: Dec 18 2008, 12:37 PM
This will be epic.

Dr.Salt
Artist
96 comments
# 19   Posted: Dec 17 2008, 06:26 AM
It's obvious when you think about it, Zsa, he's not got any disc drives or ports. He's totally a Mac design.

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 18   Posted: Dec 16 2008, 04:51 PM
It wasn't a spoiler till now :I

Red
Council
703 comments
# 17   Posted: Dec 16 2008, 10:00 AM
hahahaaaaa Monday just unintentionally posted a spoiler....

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 16   Posted: Dec 15 2008, 11:27 AM
TL bot totally runs on Macintosh

marinduquenio
Artist
60 comments
# 15   Posted: Dec 12 2008, 06:11 PM
nice the battle of the bots! hahaha cant wait

Jetaime
Artist
100 comments
# 14   Posted: Dec 11 2008, 07:15 PM
00101000011111010100111111101010011!

odd13
Artist
109 comments
# 13   Posted: Dec 9 2008, 04:53 PM
oh my, it's a battle o' z' bots

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 12   Posted: Dec 9 2008, 04:29 PM
brb, I need to format

Dimension
Artist
489 comments
# 11   Posted: Dec 9 2008, 12:46 PM
it's about time ;3

do your best guys!

Kon
Artist
194 comments
# 10   Posted: Dec 9 2008, 12:12 PM
I was gonna say Robot battle :(

Darius Corry
Artist
443 comments
# 9   Posted: Dec 9 2008, 12:11 AM
YES!
Christmas wont go unfulfilled.

Jackster
Artist
304 comments
# 8   Posted: Dec 8 2008, 09:18 PM
ROBOT BATTLE!!

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 7   Posted: Dec 8 2008, 08:49 PM
This better be more precious than a basked of kittens

aribooboo
Artist
282 comments
# 6   Posted: Dec 8 2008, 07:41 PM
AAAAWWWW XD

squid
Artist
421 comments
# 5   Posted: Dec 8 2008, 07:39 PM
I have been waiting for this one!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 4   Posted: Dec 8 2008, 07:36 PM
what the fuck is this children camp

Duredhel
Artist
114 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 8 2008, 07:35 PM
>:3 Xmas is about to change forevah!

Puzzlething
Artist
457 comments
# 2   Posted: Dec 8 2008, 07:33 PM
ROCKEM SOCKEM ROBOTS!

Red
Council
703 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 8 2008, 07:33 PM
It was meant to be

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Ended: Jan 13th, 2009
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