This is a cross between you both for me. I had to take a moment to stop and go through them.

Rofl, Very clever and always funny. Your story was short and right to the point. I would've wished for a better opening though.
I see a few wonky anatomy flaws every now and again. Sometimes it fits the silly-ness, but then it tends to be a bit too un-proportionate. (The panel with Nova on the bed for example. His legs!) I found after the first page the quality dropped just a tiny bit.
However, I see improvements from your last fight, so kudos! Very entertaining.

Fowlie, this is your best so far. I enjoy coming back and seeing your improvements and the touch of color really brought out your work and gave it tons more life.  It's been said about your panels, but honestly, that is all see. AWESOME work, Hun. You did great.
I hope to see more of this and better on your battle against OwlGem. It will be a very tough fight if you bring this quality out again!!

RoflQ: haha damn i hella liked this one. When Fabulous came out i was like "WHAT?" and then realized it was him. that was clever heehee. i liked the ending page; yesssss green eggs and ham~ ( plus the scaring picture of the Dr.'s--....under garmets. ) your pacing was fine to me and i liked it. I'm liking you colors here, how they were kind faded and none were hella bright ( i like it like hat, dunno if anyone else thinks different ). love the details you put on the chars too. Only thing i have to say is maybe to work on your lines. Some of them seemed kinda scratchy. Don't really have anything else to say, i really loved this and wasn't dissapointed one bit.

Fowlie: hoooo I love your works more and more everytime. I loved the pace you had and the dialouge seemed real. And you could tell just what they were feeling. I didn't think he'd DO it! XD I love how you showed it too. I think the facial expressions are what i love the most from your style. They just stand out and grab you! I love that you're using color now, since i'm such a color whore. But either, i can stare at them for hours~ your comics just pull me in and now I'm waiting to see what happens with him next~

Huzzah for this Hook Up~

There's a depressing lack of real comments lately, get to critiquing people!

RoflQu-You're getting better with coloring, the subtle textures were a nice touch. But I think you would benefit a lot from pushing the shade tones a bit more since at the moment they're just a slightly darker version of the base colors. Trying to tone down the saturation a little may also help. I do agree with Phill about the backgrounds needing work. I feel like you're always getting better and better with characters but your backgrounds are being left in the dust. It also looks like the quality began to drop after the first page. Try to work on being consistent because it sucks to have this sweet looking first page only to see the quality diminish as the comic goes on. Story wise I was entertained, I really liked the glowing manly Fabulous.

Fowlie-Story wise this was great and took Nova down an unexpected route. It really is amazing how different your stuff looks in color. The color really gets rid of some of the problems with things visually cluttering up panels that your previous battles had. (I hope that made sense, my brain is dead from work right now) This is a good showing for someone who's never colored a comic before. That's not to say you should give up on your BW stuff as your BW stuff really started to shine in your previous fight. Keep pushing yourself to do new things, it's really been paying off in your last few comics.

I thought both were good, but frankly I think the both of you could of benefited from having an extra week


RoflQ: Not bad man, I thought the date theme here for both comics was pretty unique and pulled off nicely, however I'm looking at the art and thinking one thing: Backgrounds. Seriously, you gotta work more of them into your pages if possible cause I know you can do some nice ones. I really laughed at this comic, especially page 2, but I think that this ended too abruptly as well.


Fowlie: Very nice, I really liked how this comic went, and wondering how Nova is going to deal with this in his life. However, as I mentioned I really think that you could of benefited from some extra time to polish things up a bit, you're still cramming too many panels into your pages here and it's getting way too cluttered. The colors do help, but you seriously should consider limiting panel count per page so that the word balloons don't end up taking most of the space there. Other than that I really loved how this comic turned out.


Both good, but I'm siding with fowlie on this one. Great fight you two, definitely getting high marks.

haha nice job guys!

@RoflQ: You had some pretty nice quality going on here the colors were pretty nice and the expressions made me laugh XD I recommend you work on your inking and anatomy a bit more...funny stuff you had here though!

@Fowlie:I srsly loved your digital coloring, I didn't have a hard time distinguishing one object from another either, every thing looked pretty good. the story was also a fun, quick read.

both of these where good as far as quality and very funny
but Fowlie took it lol very disturbing comic poor Nova

rofl: yours was fast paced and funny and i enjoyed the colouring on it, it was a TAD abrupt, but it still works


Fowlie: Your's was very clean and i do feel kinda "BAW" for nova, he seems pretty desperate, and i really like how you draw dr fab.


i think you both did equally well

COME ON. Mine wasn't THAT funny.

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lmao, they were very hilarious...

oh. mah. Gawd.

um I'll try to give some crits later, but really, I thought they were both good. Nothing horrible really stuck out at me.

lol wired but good.

Nova never fails.

Point Fowlie for the art, but given the same premise, I did score Rof higher in the entertainment because of his quicker pacing.  The slower pace in fowlie's made it more real, but it still somehow seems abrupt for our dear hero I'm not sure it's real enough.  It's still played for laughs.

awww, ahhhhhhhghh.
all i could do is groan and laugh the entire time reading this.
hillarious.
hooray for creepy fatguy on demonguy homo-eroticicim.

Roflqu: Once again you know no boundaries when it comes to creepin my shit out with Dr Fabulous's trademark facial expressions. ( Last page? Oh. dear. god. Who could wake up to a face like THAT!? )  In terms of anatomy, you are getting much better with facial structures and your bodies are a little looser, but I recommend practicing with body symmetry and hair styles. I've noticed from the past few comic battles you seem to give your opponents afro-y hair, which in turn makes them almost look the same as opposed to other characters.

Fowlie: Although you and Rofl had a similar theme set up, I rather like how yours was more of a slow and steady pace.  Fabulous's seductive nature and dialogue was very convincing, and the transition on page 4 was quite creative ( though it gave me a shiver just thinking of the 'afterhours'...)

Both did a fine job, but I gave Nova a slightly higher mark for creativity.

I giggled for like 5 minutes and hubby is looking at me like I've gone round the bend.

Hey I don't wanna hear about those nasty fantasies fella

Now THAT has been the best 17 minutes of Nova's life.

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THATS HOW YOU GET SHIT DONE, BITCH

THERE IT'S UP FOWLIE NOW STOP BUGGING ME ABOUT FINISHING GOD DAMN

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I hope you all brought your lube.

Buttsechs.

My side's a fucking silly straw.


Seriously, like the Pringles' man's curly mustache.


FUCKING GAY.

Just to let you all know now, my side won't be very funny, trying something different.  But don't worry, if you don't like this, my Girl Power Christmas BB will be up near the end of the month. Very funny, lots of fun.

sooo stoked.

lolololz

GOD
EVEN FOWLIE'S ICON DEFAULTED ALREADY WAY TO GO ERIC

WOO REMATCH!

That thread DID work

Sweeeet can't wait to see this

OOOHH HOW DID I KNOW?! 8D

go for that shit, guys~!

ALL NIIIIGHT LONG

There will be blood... And milkshake drinking!

ROCK THE BOAT DON'T ROCK THE BOAT BABY

OKAY MAYBE JUST THIS ONCE

ROCK THE FUCK OUT OF HERE