Brand New Day / FooRay

Brand New Day — FooRay

by YaRoof


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jayd4life
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# 11   Posted: Oct 3 2008, 07:57 PM
 loving the character. And your pretty good with shading as well as color. Keep it up, but remember if you start a battle keep it consistent on one style.

YaRoof
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# 10   Posted: Oct 3 2008, 07:23 AM
kon.. yeah it was really old.. sposed to be before the fight with p2.. and youll be seein new things from me very soon! ^__^

Kon
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# 9   Posted: Oct 2 2008, 12:12 PM
The drawings were good (but old : p) and I think it was overall okay. It was just so confusing and out of context, I was too bored to read all your stuff about your character so I just read last battle again, and it didn\'t help at all : D

I want to see new things from you!

Kotori Ky
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# 8   Posted: Sep 28 2008, 10:08 PM
Yes, Foo, I would have. Infact, I still will.... /SMACK

Wish it had been a bit easier to read, but fun stuff.

YaRoof
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132 comments
# 7   Posted: Sep 28 2008, 01:20 AM
thanks sushi, hurry back to void.

YaRoof
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# 6   Posted: Sep 28 2008, 01:19 AM
yeah sorry bout da typos.. koko would smack me for them if i woulda showed them to her first.. ill make sure to keep an eye on that later.

qtsushigirl
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# 5   Posted: Sep 27 2008, 09:50 AM
Yee! Thanks for the cameo appearance of me. X3 I do feel you help me tons in real life. Nice comic Foo-Baby!

Punk Jax
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# 4   Posted: Sep 27 2008, 08:58 AM
The colored page has a few typos. \"TheVoid\" and \"than an some.\"
Yeah, I\'m that much of a perfectionist.

I find it hard to critique as well, since you\'ve improved beyond this. Oh well.
7/7/8

YaRoof
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# 3   Posted: Sep 26 2008, 11:40 PM
yeeehh i like a tard saved the text into the file .. i think ive gotten better at that since tho heheh...i think this battle is ..3 years old now?..

YaRoof
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# 2   Posted: Sep 26 2008, 11:37 PM
yeeehh i like a tard saved the text into the file .. i think ive gotten better at that since tho heheh...i think this battle is ..3 years old now?..

Angie
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# 1   Posted: Sep 26 2008, 11:36 PM
Glad that you finally decided on uploading this! Since this is older it\'s difficult to really critique since you\'ve improved a lot since then. I think my only suggestion would have been to redo the text so it\'s larger and easier to read.  I enjoyed it, Foo\'s always a fun character so it\'s always nice to see him doing things outside of fighting

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