Well, honestly, if you ever read comics in the 80s that actually pretty much what every single cross-over was. \"Hey, you\'re spiderman? I\'m daredevil, lets fight! Oh wait, you\'re a hero too! lets be friends\" I am glad we have evolved.

No where on void does it say that the comics have to be actual FIGHTING. The term \"BATTLE\" on Void is what the call the two artists duking it out with comics. This has been addressed SO many times and after SO many times of being addressed, some people still do not get it.

After a while just solid FIGHTING just gets bored. You don\'t pick a comic book, then pick up another and expect each one to have the characters duking it out do you? \"OH HEY, I just met you... NOW WE MUST FIGHT\". You tell me how corny that is.

Void has evolved into something SO completely huge and different that the artists have taken the comics into many different types.

I see you are new here, so perhaps this is something you have not learned yet, Wonderboy.

However, now you know!

I\'m always amazed by how many people like to say this. As a heads up, Void is going in a direction where action isn\'t the focus. While random battles are still common in comics on the site, we\'re trying to push people trying things other than action. They\'re not called \"battles\" because the comics have to contain fighting, they\'re called battles because they are battles between the artists. People are encouraged to do whatever they like with their comics storywise whether it be action, drama, experimental, etc. If you must have action in your comics, try reading some of the older battles where Void had more of a fighting game atmosphere.

Honestly, Dane, I know this was very rushed and I think it shows. All of the panels aren\'t up to your normal standards and most of them look wonky and awkward. Also, you managed to cut off the only action pages of your comic to meet deadline so not much actually happens. It\'s a whole lot of setup for nothing. I hope you\'re working on your Butcher fight right now because I want to see better.

Now as for Ghost Revolver, you\'ve certainly got a cool look, but for your first fight I was hoping to get a better grasp on your character seeing as how your intro comic didn\'t tell much. Honestly though the comic doesn\'t make a lot of sense, mostly because there is seemingly no reasoning behind it except that Danielle shows up and really wants to fight Ghost Revolver... for some reason. Im not sure what the point is.

<~~AHAHAHAHAHAHa omg....omg...omg...AHAHAHA....AAHAHAHAHA...XD...m y lungs....ok ok....I\'m done...gotta get seriouse *leaves then comes back*~~>

Danielle by( NeoIcarus): Ok Quality Superb. Loving yah style but, it could have done with less of an intro.It played out very well. AND You GET LIKE MAJOR ALMONDO KUDOS for the \"to be continued\" I mean really...off-the-break straight forward action....but it hurt so much to see it not continue. T_T.....so much...*tear*. Overall All simply priceless.

Ghost Revolver by (michaelharris):heh you the reason I meh lungs hurt. lol, The ending was 100% pure old skewl whoopin. Ha :]. Yah artwork is funky fresh sick though. I mean really Hot work....except in the beggining the only thing that got to me was that the girl didn\'t much look like a girl. But hey all artists have there weekness....such as I....T_T. heh but yea Overall, Keep it up.

Oh one more thing,
Mike: To avoid a lot of the pixelated line work, use your level adjustment function in Photoshop (because I\'m pretty sure you do all your fills in the PS) that will get ride of all those silly little blooming lines.  Well whatever I will talk to you in a few days and show you.

I liked the use of body language in both fights, the characters felt like they were moving.

Neo: Cute story. I couldn\'t tell where the characters were toward the end but I think you did a good job of pulling it off for the most part. I\'m going to beat the dead horse and suggest more backgrounds - or rather, maybe not so much more backgrounds as more clearly establishing where the characters are for switching scenes? I may have missread, I didn\'t think they left the sheriff\'s office but it appeared to me that they did. Loved the expressions.

Michael: Great first battle! I\'ve already said I liked the body language, I\'d also like to point out how much I liked the variation between faces and bodies on the first page. It\'s a crowd and not just a herd of people that all look the same. I\'m not sure how I feel about your backgrounds, I think you did enough to make it work. The only point where I got confused was page five, it took me a reread to realize he\'s looking at a shelf with products. (I think that could have been avoided if the first panel was less black and white. Hur hur, I made a pun).

I liked both battles, more more more!

neo:  What you had going was fun.  Your stories are always good.  I also like the way you drew Danielle.  I didn\'t like it ending with a TO BE CONTINUED, though.

michael: The line art looked a little weird and pixelated in parts.  But, for the most part it looked nice, and your shadow placements were really interesting

Neo: I liked the art, I just felt that there was a lot of negative space though :\\ You need more backgrounds. I really enjoyed the expressions and different camera angles you were using :3 and the story was nice, can\'t wait to see what you have next.

Michaelharris: Nice quality man! hmm, just on thing that bugs me and it could just be me... I\'m not sure what it is about your art...but I think it could be the shaky lines or how your shading the solid blacks, but your characters sort of look like stone...or like a statue, they have this stone-like texture..that\'s just my opinion though. I think if you vary up your line widths a bit more it may help.

Story wise this was alright, though it\'s not what I expected. XD nice first battle though.

good job both of you!

Guys, try using better critiques than \"It was too anime\" since that doesn\'t help anyone improve on anything and is pretty useless to bring up

Neoicarus-I liked where you were going with the blacks, you had some pretty nice inking in this. I wish you would have been able to finish the story since this was a really fun idea and you could have done a lot more with it. I also had some trouble reading the dialogue so digital text may have been the better way to go in this.

Michaelharris-artistically this was fairly solid, I just wish you would have kept going with your backgrounds since it felt like they mostly disappeared after a while. Story wise this was unexpected and the character interaction was fun, but I felt as though you didn\'t really give Danielle much credit since to me she always acted a lot older than she is.

yeah I had some photoshop problems and after lots of cussing I gave up. I wanted to stay true to the character of a reformed villain, living by a new code of honor. So um, that means not shooting little girls. I plan on having him only kill evil people, but that doesn\'t rule out fisticuffs with people that are generally annoying. I\'m sorry that I presented him as the penultimate bad ass and then my first piece was rather non-violent, but it didn\'t really fit the characters.  But say if he was fight a zombie master with an eye patch, I promise that violence would ensue. I really had fun with this, thanks again Neo.

Neo> I think it\'s way too anime and I don\'t love that, but the plot was okay and so were the dialogues. I think you improved a lot still and that you can get even better if you spend more time on your comics. You made a four pages on four weeks, come on I\'m sure you can do better plotwise and art wise.
Was still good.

Michael> I must say I couldn\'t wait for that, I never knew what kind of things you were able to do since you commented my first battle and I now know that you are a kickass artist. I really like your stuff and I\'m digging your style which is too me between american comics and european ones (like french ones, where I live : p.) It wasn\'t a let\'s fight battle like I expected, but it was really funny, we discovered your character a lot and it changed a lot to me.
Maybe try doing thinner lines on some panels and especially on close shot so you can put more details since some pages looked a bit too digital in the way that some black parts were badly filled up.

Anyway, thanks to you two for making me have such a good time

ooooh...this was a hard one...I would have voted higher for Mike, but he stole my rockem sockem idea from a comic I did like 3 years ago...punk ass...

Neo- Awesome really good work, I found everything about your story really entertaining.  the art was top notch, the dialogue was about as good as it could get, the plot was decent.  I think some of your panels felt really sparse I would have hoped for more blacks (not the people..hehe) but over all it was good.

Mike- I dig this story. I remember seeing these pages before you posted them and I was hoping that the dialogue would give some relevance to the pictures, and it did...made it pretty hilarious.  Although I think you are already really good at telling stories that don\'t really require dialogue.  This dark style you are working with is great...I believe it is really stark and sterile right now though.  (Maybe that\'s what you are going for)  In the future I would like to see you include some benday dots or some zipitone to liven up your backgrounds.

I was quite impressed with this battle...I hope to see more from both of you...however there was one damn thing that was missing...

ACTION BITCHES!!!...you got a boomerang slingin\' girl and a dude with a brass gun...how could you both have gone so very very wrong...

thanks wonderboy! and yes Dave, killing fools is what I do best. One of my best friends names is foolwrecker.

Ghost Revolver kills fools...

thanks for challenging Neo! done with the pencils but this power outage is killing me...

I can\'t wait to see Ghost\'s first battle, also I love him so much and want to battle him :p

COWBOY WITH A MOTOROLA SIDEKICK

WATCH YER ASS

I can\'t wait for it
I smell powder!

Jeez Neo , Dont fuck up

Thanks for accepting!

Oh man. Oh man, the awesomeness. I don\'t even know where I am right now.

:0

wonder how this will go....

goooooooood luck!

THERES GONNA BE GUNS A BLAZING
AND BRAINS A THINKING.