Well , It\'s almost closing time. ANd maan I gotta say this was some EPIC struggle but now this fight taught me a lot of things. And thanks to that I really feel im that much closer to my goal, by realising how much more farther I have to go. This whole week meant a lot to my development and thanks to everyone\'s words on and off this here little comments box. But most of all shiiiit I loved seeing Kure\'s representation of Black at his deadliest I\'ve a lot of things to learn from you, your straight-forward style and overall unique storytelling. And Coll. I must\'ve read that comic like 5 times the first day it came out, I absorbed and understood everything about it, but as a comic artist that\'s probably a weakness more than anything seeing as this offhand ability to decrypt storylines doesn\'t provide the foresight I need to MAKE my comics as understandable as I seem to find others.
It is my sincere hope that whatever happens in the future will be in consideration of all three of our plots will be rolled into to one happy monster of a continuity that\'ll leave a black eye on void for many days to come. As that had been the purpose of my entry. And as a sidenote to everyone that read them; while they look collaborated- half of that turned out to be purely coincidential. That\'s no joke, i took this as a sign of how awesome you guys were for coming up with a grand scheme.
IN any case, welcome to Theatre Hazard Coll. , You know that we GOTTA fight again. And Kure good luck with those future plans I think I\'ve come up with a good tip of the hat to this battle. IM glad you all fought as crazily as you did. I really wouldn\'t have it any other way.
Chip Razor vs. Agent Black vs. Coral
Critiques & Comments
# 63
Posted:
Jun 12 2006, 10:33 AM
# 62
Posted:
Jun 10 2006, 12:32 AM
Those were fun to read
# 61
Posted:
Jun 8 2006, 02:11 PM
Kure: Excellent job - easy to follow, very entertaining, the art was pretty good for the most part too, maybe a bit simple in places, but consistent. I enjoyed your entry, certainly best so far as entertainment is concerned.
Monday: On occaision some of your character assumed rather stiff/wonky posisitions, but on the whole your art was probably the best of all three entries. Your story was entertaining, and not so cantankerous as to lose momentum or my interest. Good job overall.
Colussus: You had the longest fight, but the story moved too slowly I can\'t say this was as entertaining as the other two entries here. A few pages were also extremely crudely draw in comparison with the rest of the story. Entertaining in spots, but overall just too slow and flat compared to the other entries.
Monday: On occaision some of your character assumed rather stiff/wonky posisitions, but on the whole your art was probably the best of all three entries. Your story was entertaining, and not so cantankerous as to lose momentum or my interest. Good job overall.
Colussus: You had the longest fight, but the story moved too slowly I can\'t say this was as entertaining as the other two entries here. A few pages were also extremely crudely draw in comparison with the rest of the story. Entertaining in spots, but overall just too slow and flat compared to the other entries.
# 60
Posted:
Jun 8 2006, 12:13 AM
Wow, that was intense. I got a bit lost with some of the continued storylines but that\'s my problem.
Kure, I agree with Pi that I like how yours is clear-cut and straightforward. It was the only one of the three that I could completely follow.
Monday, your art is amazingly unique and intricate, but I tend to get lost in your continuous penwork. Maybe that\'s what you\'re going for, but I think maybe some more contrasting or clarity or something would help me personally to follow the work. In any case, the whole thing with Black and the nanytes was awesome, as was that little bit about how he gets past his Amnesia problem.
Colussus... wow, you really go all out on this stuff. I agree with Pi on the English and on Black\'s unexpected use of gagetry, but as far as I could follow the storyline it was crazy-awesome. I also liked the little extras you threw in there. Sweet deal. And I\'m happy Coral has boobies again
I think I have to give this one to kure because I could follow it well enough to get everything out of it, but still it was a close close match. The perfect trio to start three-way battles!
Kure, I agree with Pi that I like how yours is clear-cut and straightforward. It was the only one of the three that I could completely follow.
Monday, your art is amazingly unique and intricate, but I tend to get lost in your continuous penwork. Maybe that\'s what you\'re going for, but I think maybe some more contrasting or clarity or something would help me personally to follow the work. In any case, the whole thing with Black and the nanytes was awesome, as was that little bit about how he gets past his Amnesia problem.
Colussus... wow, you really go all out on this stuff. I agree with Pi on the English and on Black\'s unexpected use of gagetry, but as far as I could follow the storyline it was crazy-awesome. I also liked the little extras you threw in there. Sweet deal. And I\'m happy Coral has boobies again
I think I have to give this one to kure because I could follow it well enough to get everything out of it, but still it was a close close match. The perfect trio to start three-way battles!
# 59
Posted:
Jun 7 2006, 11:04 PM
All of these were simply incredible. I\'m gonna hold you ALL up to this level of quality from now on.
Kure: Yours I liked a great deal for being the must concise and straight-forward. The story was simple enough to follow, and yet still tied in the important plot elements that it appears you all decided on. If anything, I would have liked to see the ending drawn out a little, a nice and slow resolution would have been nice after that huge tense moment in the Mexican stand-off. The Toast bit was hilarious, I motion that he become the default narrator of all Void battles.
Monday: EPIC, in every sense of the word. I know it gets thrown around a lot, but if anybody\'s comics have consistently pulled it off, it\'s yours. That said, you do still have a lot of the same problems that people have been telling you, ie. difficult text and confusing art. Have you ever tried doing a piece without values? I think if you practice doing some pure conture drawings it would really help. This also may be a style thing, but every so often your figures look childish and have enourmous heads with normally proportioned bodies. I recommend that you stay consistent with your proportions however you decide to do them, but that\'s just me. Excellent work, I look forward to meeting you in the pit myself.
Collosus: Very impressive work, especially your tones and colors. The story was a little weird, and it almost seemed like an Armageddon match at times. Also, I really suggest you have someone edit your English before finalizing it. I know it\'s not your strong point, but it does get a little difficult to try and figure out what you\'re trying to say sometimes. Lastly, I think you should definitely work on your figures and faces. A lot of times things look warped or disproportioned. On a peresonal note, I thought the 4-armed apparatus didn\'t really fit Black\'s character, as I don\'t recall ever seeing him use it, and he always seemed more like a shoot-em-up-blow-em-up kind of guy to me, not one to use a great deal of fancy gadgets. Still, very good entry and it\'s awesome to see Coral progressing as she is.
Great stuff from everyone, best work yet from all of you guys.
Kure: Yours I liked a great deal for being the must concise and straight-forward. The story was simple enough to follow, and yet still tied in the important plot elements that it appears you all decided on. If anything, I would have liked to see the ending drawn out a little, a nice and slow resolution would have been nice after that huge tense moment in the Mexican stand-off. The Toast bit was hilarious, I motion that he become the default narrator of all Void battles.
Monday: EPIC, in every sense of the word. I know it gets thrown around a lot, but if anybody\'s comics have consistently pulled it off, it\'s yours. That said, you do still have a lot of the same problems that people have been telling you, ie. difficult text and confusing art. Have you ever tried doing a piece without values? I think if you practice doing some pure conture drawings it would really help. This also may be a style thing, but every so often your figures look childish and have enourmous heads with normally proportioned bodies. I recommend that you stay consistent with your proportions however you decide to do them, but that\'s just me. Excellent work, I look forward to meeting you in the pit myself.
Collosus: Very impressive work, especially your tones and colors. The story was a little weird, and it almost seemed like an Armageddon match at times. Also, I really suggest you have someone edit your English before finalizing it. I know it\'s not your strong point, but it does get a little difficult to try and figure out what you\'re trying to say sometimes. Lastly, I think you should definitely work on your figures and faces. A lot of times things look warped or disproportioned. On a peresonal note, I thought the 4-armed apparatus didn\'t really fit Black\'s character, as I don\'t recall ever seeing him use it, and he always seemed more like a shoot-em-up-blow-em-up kind of guy to me, not one to use a great deal of fancy gadgets. Still, very good entry and it\'s awesome to see Coral progressing as she is.
Great stuff from everyone, best work yet from all of you guys.
# 58
Posted:
Jun 7 2006, 05:43 PM
Monday, that shit was fucking epic. Awesome. I actually followed this one really closely, and I loved it. So much impending doom. Fucking awesome.
# 57
Posted:
Jun 6 2006, 05:23 PM
woah.....okay, where to start? XD hmmm....
kure: great fight, love the style like in all of your battles and had a nice story that was to the point. (for some reason i am in love with panel 2 on page 3) XD
monday: all of the battles i have read from you are very long, confusing, and a bit hard to follow. i think the only thing that kept me reading was your amazing style and all of the great action. i gave you an A for quality, but the others got a C.
colussus: the longest battle i have ever read from one person, but you still managed to keep me interested the entire time. towards the end, it seemed a bit rushed, but no big deal.
all in all: this was a great match-up. despite a few things here and there, i think everyone did a great job on this
kure: great fight, love the style like in all of your battles and had a nice story that was to the point. (for some reason i am in love with panel 2 on page 3) XD
monday: all of the battles i have read from you are very long, confusing, and a bit hard to follow. i think the only thing that kept me reading was your amazing style and all of the great action. i gave you an A for quality, but the others got a C.
colussus: the longest battle i have ever read from one person, but you still managed to keep me interested the entire time. towards the end, it seemed a bit rushed, but no big deal.
all in all: this was a great match-up. despite a few things here and there, i think everyone did a great job on this
# 56
Posted:
Jun 6 2006, 02:29 PM
All around awesome, if not a little on the long-winded side when it came to Colussus\'s work, but it was still entertaining ^_^
Tipping my hat to Kure though. Quick, fun and to the point ^_^
Tipping my hat to Kure though. Quick, fun and to the point ^_^
# 55
Posted:
Jun 6 2006, 11:41 AM
black/monday...Your comics always look interesting. A shame im too stupid to EVER be able to figure out whats going on.
# 54
Posted:
Jun 6 2006, 04:31 AM
All of you guys were awesome!
Kure: Man, you really gave us quite the show, personally, I enjoyed your comic the most out of the three, it was entertaining, it was short, and I enjoyed the reapearance of that guy from last year\'s SDT. Not much for me to say really.
Monday: Artwise you could take this home, but you\'ve still got those same problems, text running into other boxes, some words marked out with black (though... comming from you man it\'s kinda cool
) hatching looking like speedlines. While the gritty inks are always awesome, I still have the damndest time trying to figure out what\'s going on in panels. Other than that, I felt that the story was a tad dry for my tastes.
Colosuss: Great to see coral in action, but honestly artwise, I\'ve seen better from ya man. You seriously do tell a good story, but you and monday seriously need to shrink your comics down. Geez, I\'m tired of waiting for comics to load (*Points at monday for his humongous page loading time on dial up angrily*) Ok, back to the comic, artwise you could do better, story was good, but your dialoge could use some fine tuning (Missing words here and there). No offence though when I say that I sorta dislike the nanites being uber powerful... but your story anyway.
Personal shit aside, high marks for you folks, but Kure\'s Chip stole my heart again!
Kure: Man, you really gave us quite the show, personally, I enjoyed your comic the most out of the three, it was entertaining, it was short, and I enjoyed the reapearance of that guy from last year\'s SDT. Not much for me to say really.
Monday: Artwise you could take this home, but you\'ve still got those same problems, text running into other boxes, some words marked out with black (though... comming from you man it\'s kinda cool
) hatching looking like speedlines. While the gritty inks are always awesome, I still have the damndest time trying to figure out what\'s going on in panels. Other than that, I felt that the story was a tad dry for my tastes.Colosuss: Great to see coral in action, but honestly artwise, I\'ve seen better from ya man. You seriously do tell a good story, but you and monday seriously need to shrink your comics down. Geez, I\'m tired of waiting for comics to load (*Points at monday for his humongous page loading time on dial up angrily*) Ok, back to the comic, artwise you could do better, story was good, but your dialoge could use some fine tuning (Missing words here and there). No offence though when I say that I sorta dislike the nanites being uber powerful... but your story anyway.
Personal shit aside, high marks for you folks, but Kure\'s Chip stole my heart again!
# 53
Posted:
Jun 6 2006, 03:13 AM
*brain.. melting.. madly... dont.. know.. who.. to.. vote.. for
That was... so.. damm.. amazing..
This means muchio time pondering who to vote for..
That was... so.. damm.. amazing..
This means muchio time pondering who to vote for..
# 52
Posted:
Jun 6 2006, 12:11 AM
Wow absolutley gorgeous, I loved everyone of your comics.
Monday Your comic was your best one yet. Kure, Your was Very nice too, I dug the Toast part in it. And Colussus The Everyone is gay for agent Black part was fucking great. Awesome job guys. :3
Monday Your comic was your best one yet. Kure, Your was Very nice too, I dug the Toast part in it. And Colussus The Everyone is gay for agent Black part was fucking great. Awesome job guys. :3
# 51
Posted:
Jun 6 2006, 12:11 AM
aw jeez.
this just means i have to fight all three of you now.
this just means i have to fight all three of you now.
# 50
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 11:48 PM
i like how you both represented chip! Specially yours monday, i loved how twisted he was!
# 49
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 11:06 PM
>>>>>>>>>>>>>TO ALL READERS<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
>>My SUBMISSION CONTINUES FROM AGENT BLACK\'S BB: EXISTENTIAL BASTARD.<<
THANKS, AND I APOLOGIZE FOR THE INCONVENIENCE.
>>My SUBMISSION CONTINUES FROM AGENT BLACK\'S BB: EXISTENTIAL BASTARD.<<
THANKS, AND I APOLOGIZE FOR THE INCONVENIENCE.
# 48
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 05:43 PM
I WANNA SEE MORE!!!
# 47
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 01:34 PM
I WANNA SEEE!!!
# 46
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 01:28 PM
MY SHITS ARE TURNED IN
# 45
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 02:07 AM
IM SCANNING IM FINALLY SCANNING AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH * DIES
# 44
Posted:
Jun 2 2006, 10:11 PM
Go Toast! I\'m crazy to see this stuff when it\'s all done, and hopefully these beta modes will become official really soon, \'cuz they\'rre awesome!
# 43
Posted:
Jun 2 2006, 05:35 PM
The new battle types are on hold until Toast is all set up at his new place and has his internet up and running
# 42
Posted:
Jun 1 2006, 11:10 PM
Correction: they\'ll get it to work
# 41
Posted:
Jun 1 2006, 11:09 PM
Na... they\'ll get to work, maybe not right away cuz it is a test, but Toast and the other wouldn\'t give up that easily.
# 40
Posted:
Jun 1 2006, 01:38 PM
FAIL!
# 39
Posted:
May 31 2006, 03:15 PM
giveittomefaaasteeer!
# 38
Posted:
May 31 2006, 01:13 PM
100% DONE!!! YES! I send my shit to Toast! I hope you got them!!
# 37
Posted:
May 31 2006, 04:41 AM
OH wait I just got it. Isn\'t Yahoo mail fun ? It\'s like a surprise illigetimate son every week
# 36
Posted:
May 31 2006, 04:16 AM
Honestly, from the looks of it, I dont think I\'ll be sleeping tonight/thismorning
# 35
Posted:
May 31 2006, 03:15 AM
Really? *Phew* I could of sworn toast was going to be strict on the deadline for these beta fights. Hope you get that extention then monday.
# 34
Posted:
May 29 2006, 01:01 AM
These matches can have extensions what are you talkin about phill! Me and lune got one because she didn\'t have a computer for like a week.
# 33
Posted:
May 28 2006, 10:48 AM
oops
# 32
Posted:
May 28 2006, 05:14 AM
wah??? how long is extension ognna be for?
# 31
Posted:
May 27 2006, 09:55 AM
D: Duuuuude
# 30
Posted:
May 27 2006, 05:45 AM
I don\'t think these type of matches will have extentions for some reason... but I know you can pull something off monday, c\'mon man!
# 29
Posted:
May 27 2006, 04:49 AM
...=(
# 28
Posted:
May 27 2006, 02:37 AM
Gah I\'m scheduled to work this whole weekend, I\'m gonna grab an extension folks. I hope you dont lynch me fer this one, I need to play it safe to allow time for editing.
# 27
Posted:
May 25 2006, 04:06 AM
Cool.
# 26
Posted:
May 22 2006, 03:39 AM
PFFFT! 10 days left! This is going to be interesting!
# 25
Posted:
May 9 2006, 04:49 PM
Woot!
# 24
Posted:
May 8 2006, 04:17 PM
RAPE
# 23
Posted:
May 6 2006, 06:52 PM
Very cool, can\'t wait ^_^
# 22
Posted:
May 5 2006, 02:55 PM
*barfs out her insides for the 3rd time*
# 21
Posted:
May 4 2006, 12:31 PM
OMFG, I can already see the sky darkening.
# 20
Posted:
May 3 2006, 11:36 PM
genious... and fun too!
# 19
Posted:
May 3 2006, 09:38 PM
Holy Mother of Ass, Batman! Another new battle type!
# 18
Posted:
May 3 2006, 07:27 PM
omg!!!! cant wait for this battle!
# 17
Posted:
May 3 2006, 05:37 PM
BTW, how do we upload our pages? Sending them to Toast?!?! Just wondering!
# 16
Posted:
May 3 2006, 05:24 PM
NOw this\'s SUM mutha fucking FIGHTFEST.
# 15
Posted:
May 3 2006, 04:33 AM
fucking EXCITED! quite fitting really... after reading borris jackknife´s recent battle. but man... three class A fighters rockin it out? I\'m there!
and no exstensions please, I don\'t wanna wait another day for this
and no exstensions please, I don\'t wanna wait another day for this
# 14
Posted:
May 3 2006, 03:28 AM
HOLY MEXICAN JUMPING IMIGRANTS!! THATS HAWT!
# 13
Posted:
May 3 2006, 03:03 AM
Oh shiet O_O\'
mexican standoff! I WAN\'T TO SEE BLOOD!
*dies*
mexican standoff! I WAN\'T TO SEE BLOOD!
*dies*
# 12
Posted:
May 3 2006, 03:02 AM
WTH?!?!?! wats goin on?!??!
# 11
Posted:
May 3 2006, 02:53 AM
*evil laugh* MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *evil laugh*
*dies*
*dies*
# 10
Posted:
May 3 2006, 12:26 AM
This boosts that last page in Coral\'s bb by 10. This is awesome.
Tomorrow I want to see a 1 vs 1 vs Armageddon.
Tomorrow I want to see a 1 vs 1 vs Armageddon.
# 9
Posted:
May 3 2006, 12:18 AM
I predict a grand mess.
# 8
Posted:
May 2 2006, 11:29 PM
Jeezuz, new formats every day!! This is gonna be the hawtness.
# 7
Posted:
May 2 2006, 10:27 PM
Hoshit. x: More new battle types. Can\'t wait to see how this turns out.
# 6
Posted:
May 2 2006, 10:02 PM
Just HAD to steal some attention fer yerself dincha?
Ah well, tag matches are cooler than three ways anyway. GOOD LUCK PROGRESSIVES.
Ah well, tag matches are cooler than three ways anyway. GOOD LUCK PROGRESSIVES.
# 5
Posted:
May 2 2006, 09:53 PM
*fatal brain spasms*
*dead*
*dead*
# 4
Posted:
May 2 2006, 09:15 PM
*EXPLODES*
# 3
Posted:
May 2 2006, 08:48 PM
Oh, Em, Gee. (OMG)
In the great words of Monkey D. Luffy:
\"AWESOOOOOOMMMMMEEEE!!!!\"
In the great words of Monkey D. Luffy:
\"AWESOOOOOOMMMMMEEEE!!!!\"
# 2
Posted:
May 2 2006, 08:44 PM
XD Mwahahahaha, new battle types popping up all over the place. I reaaally want to see this one finished.
# 1
Posted:
May 2 2006, 08:44 PM
LEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEROY!
Comic Details
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Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Jun 13th, 2006
Votes Cast:
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Page Views:
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Winner:
kure ji ori
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Monday: You too, I enjoyed it after 3 times reading over, like I said you are a good writer, but I had hard time deciphering things. But it was a fun experience
Collosus: Nice entry, the filesizes killed my connection THRICE, but it was fun. But my gripe is always have been the same- your comic tend to make me feel it can be shortened out. And that\'s no good. Aim for quality of storytelling rather than pagecount, and you\'ll be a kickass comic artist.
I\'d comment more, but I\'d rather comment directly to the artists myself.. but yeah, this wa ssweet guys, awesome!!