Saint pio you rock please continue i get exited each time i see your stuff here.
this one was a bit hard to follow thou story wise but the art side is really improving
fast.You should practice anatomy, that said i liked the clumsyness it makes some of
the characters have that their anatomy is incorrect good work !
The Shepherd vs. Ace, the HeartLess 1
Critiques & Comments
# 11
Posted:
Jul 24 2008, 08:01 AM
# 10
Posted:
Jul 22 2008, 06:55 AM
Hey, thanks everyone who read this and commented and stuff, I appreciate it. I\'m sure jaws did something for this. Just some people must have a problem with submitting in incomplete art or something. Look forward to the bb.
# 9
Posted:
Jul 17 2008, 10:51 AM
cool battle Saintpio :3 This was pretty nice for having drawn in it in the time you had.
I think you can keep on using your handwritten text, but make it a bit neater....it is hard to read sometimes. ^^;
I think you can keep on using your handwritten text, but make it a bit neater....it is hard to read sometimes. ^^;
# 8
Posted:
Jul 16 2008, 08:05 AM
I echo the comment about defaults. It DOES seem like half the battles now have a default in them. It\'s ridiculous.
Saintpio: This was a nice story comic. You always deliver when it comes to the creative side. I disagree with Angie (sorry!) about the text. I think it fits the overall style of your artwork. If you had generic comic type text it would look awkward and boring.
Saintpio: This was a nice story comic. You always deliver when it comes to the creative side. I disagree with Angie (sorry!) about the text. I think it fits the overall style of your artwork. If you had generic comic type text it would look awkward and boring.
# 7
Posted:
Jul 15 2008, 12:39 PM
Saintpio-I enjoyed the story and I like the direction the Shepherd is taking. You\'re still having some problems with your anatomy and perspective, they are improving though. I really want to see you step away from the hand written text, while it works in some panels, most of the time it comes off as sloppy and can be difficult to read. Be careful with the black text on dark backgrounds. You seem to have had problems drawing those cars which is understandable, they\'re very tricky to draw, but try looking at reference images and making it a specific car instead of generic boxy things.
# 6
Posted:
Jul 14 2008, 05:15 PM
D:< Bad Defaulter!!! BAD!!! *wacks you with a newspaper*
# 5
Posted:
Jul 14 2008, 03:08 PM
Can the defaults stop, please? 4 out of 5 battles should not have defaults. I understand that life happens but you have to roll with the punches and get the comic done. I\'ll crit your side in a bit Saintpio
# 4
Posted:
Jul 13 2008, 05:10 PM
Good Luck! Do well!
# 3
Posted:
Jul 7 2008, 10:46 PM
Submitted. Had to hand it in early cause theres some people taking over my room for the next week. Hope it\'s alright.
# 2
Posted:
Jun 30 2008, 04:15 PM
oh, but it is \"cumin\" !!!
# 1
Posted:
Jun 30 2008, 02:55 PM
wowzerz O.o didn\'t see this coming XD
good luck guys!
good luck guys!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Jul 20th, 2008
Votes Cast:
12
Page Views:
1876
Winner:
saintpio
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