vs. Mr.Sun vs. Jacob vs. OSBot / Doctor Anthropos
Critiques & Comments
# 23
Posted:
Jun 18 2008, 06:05 PM
Super sexy.
# 22
Posted:
Jun 15 2008, 07:02 PM
BIG BROOO!
fast-paced with a twisted ending. exactly what i want from a SDT saga.
fast-paced with a twisted ending. exactly what i want from a SDT saga.
# 21
Posted:
Jun 14 2008, 03:38 PM
Rone, I believe it\'s because Mr.Sun died in Zsab\'s last entry
# 20
Posted:
Jun 14 2008, 01:35 PM
Zsa you rock! Its always 100% from you! Its awesome watching you grow into such an great comic artist.
# 19
Posted:
Jun 13 2008, 06:30 PM
Did I not read it right or was Mr. Sun NOT in this comic? The whole thing was kinda confusing to me actually. Alot of action going on everywhere and I wasn\'t sure who was doing what to who on some of it. That\'s probably just me though. =P
# 18
Posted:
Jun 13 2008, 05:13 PM
Haha, forced SDT entry GO! 8D
This was beautiful work! It was a real thrill seeing Dizzy and Big Brother, too, that was really unexpected.
This was beautiful work! It was a real thrill seeing Dizzy and Big Brother, too, that was really unexpected.
# 17
Posted:
Jun 13 2008, 02:20 PM
This was amazing! I didn\'t even mind it not all being in color. You are just super, super talented artistically, and if I knew what heimie was gonna do in the final battle, I would never have gave him the slight nudge in entertainment and creativity in your guy\'s battle. I\'m kicking myself now. But way cool of you to do a BB like this. Thanks.
# 16
Posted:
Jun 13 2008, 02:11 PM
Thanks for all the feedback!
I\'m glad I\'m being able to get better at the english, though unlike the other SDT matches, this one wasn\'t reviewed by Kure, who was of great help proofreading the other matches phrase. I didn\'t ask him because I already lost anyway, haha, and I needed to test myself with you guys.
I do agree it\'s a bit confusing in some bits, must be because of the crazy pacing, which switches from slow to extremelhy quick, I guess.
Angie and Helf: Those are real good ideas. I might do maybe, either a past story of Anthropos, or maybe what will happen in the future, after it\'s explained how he effectively died, since I didn\'t show it here.
Monday: Murrayyyyy
I\'m glad I\'m being able to get better at the english, though unlike the other SDT matches, this one wasn\'t reviewed by Kure, who was of great help proofreading the other matches phrase. I didn\'t ask him because I already lost anyway, haha, and I needed to test myself with you guys.
I do agree it\'s a bit confusing in some bits, must be because of the crazy pacing, which switches from slow to extremelhy quick, I guess.
Angie and Helf: Those are real good ideas. I might do maybe, either a past story of Anthropos, or maybe what will happen in the future, after it\'s explained how he effectively died, since I didn\'t show it here.
Monday: Murrayyyyy
# 15
Posted:
Jun 12 2008, 06:05 PM
;I You stole Sebi\'s body
# 14
Posted:
Jun 12 2008, 05:02 PM
Damn Z, nice one dude! You went above and beyond! keep practicing your hand lettering, it stands out a lot because youre art is damn clean it looks sloppy by comparison. It\'s getting better, the sound effects lettering were pretty good. Let kuro or someone else give you feedback on dialouge, I think it could help. go do some more comics, they are awesome!
# 13
Posted:
Jun 12 2008, 01:21 AM
I agree with Pio. Great Quality and Great Entertainment levels, but I was a bit confused with the Anthropos Virus thing and all the heads rolling around. I think you are great at showing motion through your poses and seech. I still give you an A+
# 12
Posted:
Jun 11 2008, 07:57 PM
Real nice. I didn\'t always understand what was going on but I liked every bit of it. I think you woulda won this.
# 11
Posted:
Jun 11 2008, 06:13 PM
I really loved this man! Amazing work, nuff said D:
# 10
Posted:
Jun 11 2008, 04:53 PM
I really like this comic it gave a good closing and brought all the characters together plus i love the ending battle nice work
# 9
Posted:
Jun 11 2008, 04:47 PM
i think you won SDT.
tight throughout. no complaints other than i would have loved to see the whole thing colored but i guess you were trying to give yourself the same amount of time. i think anthropos should be one of the only characters allowed to come back from the dead haha.
there were sketchy bits with the english, but there was nothing that made me go \'WHA?!\'. if you need someone to run dialogue by in the future, you know where to find me! but good job man
-J
tight throughout. no complaints other than i would have loved to see the whole thing colored but i guess you were trying to give yourself the same amount of time. i think anthropos should be one of the only characters allowed to come back from the dead haha.
there were sketchy bits with the english, but there was nothing that made me go \'WHA?!\'. if you need someone to run dialogue by in the future, you know where to find me! but good job man
-J
# 8
Posted:
Jun 11 2008, 04:31 PM
Damn, you really really should have been in the finals, this was a great entry. It\'s a shame you were unable to get the whole thing colored, but your lineart stood on its own fine which is good, you\'re getting a much better handle of balancing your lights and darks. You\'re still having some issues with your dialogue sounding natural, but you are improving with it, especially with the Doctor\'s internal thoughts. Story wise I felt this was a proper ending to Anthropos\' story and it was great how you tied it in with KoM as well to make one big epic battle. I do think on page 10 you maybe could have had one more panel of Jakob in the process of falling, but I got what was going on pretty easily still.
I do hope you give the Doctor one last story since he\'s an intriguing character, but this would still work as a final chapter in his tale.
I do hope you give the Doctor one last story since he\'s an intriguing character, but this would still work as a final chapter in his tale.
# 7
Posted:
Jun 11 2008, 04:19 PM
Wonderfull drawings but the story was kinda hard to follow perhaps that is just me.
this is a good way to put Antropos to a worthy dead. And i hope you make some
sort of character to walk in his footsteps. your comics with human characters are so much
more powerfull than the ones you done with the whale thingy. thanks for the good read !
this is a good way to put Antropos to a worthy dead. And i hope you make some
sort of character to walk in his footsteps. your comics with human characters are so much
more powerfull than the ones you done with the whale thingy. thanks for the good read !
# 6
Posted:
Jun 11 2008, 04:04 PM
Thanks Air!
Just a warning to unaware readers, the reason some of the pages are uncoloured is that unlike regular BB, I used the same deadline as the finals to hand this in, so this is what I could come up with in the same drawing time.
Just a warning to unaware readers, the reason some of the pages are uncoloured is that unlike regular BB, I used the same deadline as the finals to hand this in, so this is what I could come up with in the same drawing time.
# 5
Posted:
Jun 11 2008, 04:00 PM
I already told you what I thought of this, man, its amazing and beautifully done.
# 4
Posted:
Jun 11 2008, 08:52 AM
I WANT THIS NOW!!!!
# 3
Posted:
Jun 9 2008, 06:52 PM
you should try to revive the doc if he does end up dying :0
# 2
Posted:
Jun 9 2008, 05:43 PM
I hope it\'s not too bad of a story
# 1
Posted:
Jun 9 2008, 12:40 PM
Secret comment. I\'ll look at this when it actually goes up. Looking forward to it.
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